Bad daddy

[BlackSnake]

This ideas is about a man who felt that he had married to young. His wife, an older woman with to daughter. His wife is submissive, but clingy. He makes it no secret in his house that he loves fucking. The daughter are not gorgeous young beauties...goddesses, but each have their own assets that he like. He wants to fuck both of them more than he wants his wife. The girls are different. His plan is to make them as submissive as their mother. His approach to each of the girls have to be as different as they are.

 

[Carnevil9]

Dude, you have almost 9000 posts here, and you don't know the difference between to, two, and too? Yet you have the balls to give a link to your stories? If you want people to think your stories might be worth reading, it would help if you pay attention to your posting.

Sorry for being a PITA, but this kind of thing just burns me up, especially coming from someone who fancies themselves a writer........Carney

 

[LindsayRae]

You're not the first one to think that. The same goes, sadly, for MsLinnet. May she rest in peace. (She had a link in her sig for many years that said "Accepted Storys" before finally fixing it.)

 

[RedHeadedlover]

Many amazing writers have a loose grasp on grammar, spelling, and punctuation rules. In fact, some even have learning disabilities in these areas. It's about the ideas and creativity. That is why the world includes editors.

 

[RedHeadedlover]

Many amazing writers have a loose grasp on grammar, spelling, and punctuation rules. In fact, some even have learning disabilities in these areas. It's about the ideas and creativity. That is why the world includes editors.

 

[nakdsub]

Unfortunate but true

There is a, "writer" from another site that typifies the above statement. His stories are erotic as hell, the problem is, he doesn't know to make a new paragraph as dialog changes from person to person. He just keeps bouncing back and forth using quotation marks and creating long, drawn out paragraphs.

This makes his stories almost unreadable. I was constantly trying to figure out who is saying what to whom. I wrote several comments at the bottom of some of his work and tried to give him some pointers on how to fix it, but he just started to refer to me as a, "frustrated English teacher," so I stopped trying. He never did anything to correct the problem so I just stopped reading his stories.

 

[lovecraft68]

Many amazing writers have a loose grasp on grammar, spelling, and punctuation rules. In fact, some even have learning disabilities in these areas. It's about the ideas and creativity. That is why the world includes editors.

I fall a bit into this category. No disability, but did quit school. Have a ged and am exceptional at math and learn most things quickly. Grammar however, eludes me and I have to go through my stories painstakingly to even get them to the point they are readable.

I have been told many times that I have great creativity and am better off than people with mechanical writing skills, but no ideas. Thinking of a writing course but don;t have a lot of time and after close to 30 years out of a classroom not sure how I would do paying attention.

If the teacher is even remotely attractive I would just end up thinking of plot bunnies!

On the other hand, I do try to pay attention to how I post so I don't get ridiculed to heavily and mozilla has spell check. So a word to the OP, do take your posting into consideration.

 

[lovecraft68]

Dude, you have almost 9000 posts here, and you don't know the difference between to, two, and too? Yet you have the balls to give a link to your stories? If you want people to think your stories might be worth reading, it would help if you pay attention to your posting.

Sorry for being a PITA, but this kind of thing just burns me up, especially coming from someone who fancies themselves a writer........Carney

You're not being a pain in the ass, and honestly not to be a jerk to the OP, but his scores back up your point.

 

[Carnevil9]

Many amazing writers have a loose grasp on grammar, spelling, and punctuation rules. In fact, some even have learning disabilities in these areas. It's about the ideas and creativity. That is why the world includes editors.

I must respectfully disagree. Ideas are a dime a dozen. We give them away for free every day in this very forum! If all you have are ideas and creativity, the best you can hope for is to be a good campfire storyteller.

Writing is craftsmanship. It is all about finely crafting the story idea into a plot, an arc, multiple threads with well-written characters, and rising and falling action at just the right pace, all constructed out of proper language that helps the reader absorb the story rather than pushes him out of it.

 

[lovecraft68]

I must respectfully disagree. Ideas are a dime a dozen. We give them away for free every day in this very forum! If all you have are ideas and creativity, the best you can hope for is to be a good campfire storyteller.

Writing is craftsmanship. It is all about finely crafting the story idea into a plot, an arc, multiple threads with well-written characters, and rising and falling action at just the right pace, all constructed out of proper language that helps the reader absorb the story rather than pushes him out of it.

Damn, I'm shit outta luck!

 

[BuckyDuckman]

LOL @ Lovecraft68!

Meanwhile, as far as that original story idea: does the person even speak English? I've seen better translations on babelfish.com!

And another thought about suggesting a story - suggest a plot! Okay, so he's fucking daughters who are both unique and hot without being a cliche. Then what?

I'll be the first to admit that all too often, my characters arrive right out of central casting. I give them enough unique body traits to tell one for another. I'm not above saying one guy has a prick that curves to the left to show it's some else fucking. I once wrote a story (posted elsewhere than Literotica) where I actually switched names for a character halfway through the story and only a few of the people reading it ever pointed out that faux pas.

But here is what I DO try to bring to my stories: conflict of some kind. A character is going to have something out of the ordinary happen to them and change is going to be needed to accommodate it. And that's the heart of any story. We learned it in middle school: man vs self; man vs. man; man vs. world. Without it, it's just body parts banging together. Big deal.

Oh look, I seem to have a soap box glued to my feet! Sorry.

 

[LindsayRae]

Meanwhile, as far as that original story idea: does the person even speak English? I've seen better translations on babelfish.com!

He has stories posted on Lit. And I think he does (or did) run his own magazine called Fotoshooter or whatever.