Back to my roots

[GeorgieH]

Hi everyone,

I've decided to go back to my roots and re-visit the 'shy girl' theme that so many of you seemed to like before - and to be honest, it's a topic that's easier for me to write about because I'm a lot like my character in real life!

As ever, I'd love to hear from anyone with observations, comments, criticisms or suggestions for improvements.

I hope you all enjoy:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=406690


Georgie
xxx

 

[AverageBear]

Very enjoyable read...

Georgie, I left you a public post - it was a lovely story. Your build-up was terrific, but the release wasn't as cataclysmic as I like to experience with this type of story. That said, your tamed-down approach is quite endearing. You certainly have a talent for character development, dialogue and plausibility. I just wanted to have Nikki jump on Mama's boy before he left the enclosure, stunning him by pulling his trousers to the floor and riding him senseless with curtains flying, giving the memory of a lifetime to poor, dear, loveable, repressed Mike. Of course, it's probably a guy thing....