Babysitter Story from a Different Perspective

[MyWidowMom]

A conservative girl goes to USA by an Au-Pair program to work as a babysitter and study English. She takes care of two little girls and girls' parents are working for the US Army. Father is a really out going handsome and somewhat brave and daring. Babysitter never had a boyfriend before, she is 24 years old. She meets a boy online but they start by being close friends or some kind of a relationship in which there is no certain name. Boy is located in girl's native country and waiting for the girl to return from USA.

Father is 30 years old, likes to party a lot and really open minded. Mother is 38 and opposite of father, likes working a lot, bussiness first time of woman.

Girl is really conservative never had a boyfriend, never kissed, never had sex. Father asks the babysitter about this, whenever she goes out, he always asks was he your boyfriend, did he kissed you, have you had sex.... Babysitter is really tired of these questions and tells him that she never had that kind of experiences and doesn't consider to do them before marriage. Babysitter also talks about this situation with the boy in her country.

When the girl returns to her native country, the boy senses that she has changed quite, wearing bikinis, skirts, talking differently....


The story should take part between these timelines. May be the Father tricked, made her drunk or by other means had sex with the girl before she returned from USA. Or he managed one of his friends in the army to have sex with the girl in the party before her return.

Boy learns this when he talks with the father online. Father sends explicit pictures of the "so called conservative" girl he loves. He explains that she had sex in detail (with him or a friend of him) and how her mind changed... He tells the boy that, the girl he loves is not so innocent and virgin anymore and is really really experienced...

Boy is 23-24, Girl (babysitter) 24, Father of the kids 30, if there is his friend could be around 25 to 30.

Girl should have black hair, could be ponytail or little past shoulder. She should be tanned a little bit, close to Mexican type but she shouln't be from Mexico. Around 1.60 1.60 cm, really slim with good shape. Father should be really well built, with blue eyes, beard moustache and around 1.85 cm. If there will be a friend of father he could be latin or afro-american.

The story should be written from the boys perspective, but there should be dialogues of him and the father, how the sex took place...

I would be really grateful if anyone could contribute to that story...

Thanks...

 

[gentelman324]

i dont know what to contribute, but I liked it.
good job.

 

[MyWidowMom]

i dont know what to contribute, but I liked it.
good job.

Thank you...

Details of conversations and some other ideas or my ideas that you don't like are all welcome.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Sorry to be negative but:-

A conservative girl goes to USA by an Au-Pair program to work as a babysitter and study English. ... Babysitter never had a boyfriend before, she is 24 years old. ... Girl is really conservative never had a boyfriend, never kissed, never had sex. ... Babysitter is really tired of these questions and tells him that she never had that kind of experiences and doesn't consider to do them before marriage. ...

This girl does not ring true to me. While I could believe in a 24-y-o innocent never-been-kissed, perhaps from a strict and very religious family in a Catholic or Orthodox Eastern European country, such a girl would never dare (or be allowed) to travel to an unknown land as an au pair. Nor would she be as familiar with online use as this story implies.

An 18-y-o from an oppressively strict family, who is basically an au pair to escape from domineering parents - that's different. That might convince me.

 

[Valleyl81]

*****

 

[MyWidowMom]

Sorry to be negative but:-

This girl does not ring true to me. While I could believe in a 24-y-o innocent never-been-kissed, perhaps from a strict and very religious family in a Catholic or Orthodox Eastern European country, such a girl would never dare (or be allowed) to travel to an unknown land as an au pair. Nor would she be as familiar with online use as this story implies.

An 18-y-o from an oppressively strict family, who is basically an au pair to escape from domineering parents - that's different. That might convince me.

I can assure you the part that I described is a true one. I can tell that she is Muslim, but apart from being a Muslim, she was in a strict family. She crossed her parents to go to USA as an Au-Pair, but she had to do that in order to learn English better and take other specific job courses.

It is better than going alone, when you don't have a relative or friend it is really hard. At least this family provided her a shelter.

For the online use, I didn't get why it is unrealistic? She is not a villager or something, she is not from a rural area. Just her family and basically, she is really conservative...

Talking about conservativeness doesn't mean that she doesn't talk with boys, she doesn't have friends. She has/had lots of friends, also boys who asked her to go out in her life, but she refused gently. She just romantically got along with this boy online, telling him everything that happens, worrying about him, missing him, saying special sweet words,but that can't be considered as a relationship...

If you have any more doubts or questions, please feel free to ask...

Also which one would be better, the father or a friend of father (collague)?

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

That's really funny, because when I read that description by the OP, I thought "that sounds a lot like me!" ...

I can assure you the part that I described is a true one. ...

Oh dear. That just shows how out of touch an almost seventy year old can be. I do apologise.

I hasten to add that I am enjoying my year of 69.

 

[MyWidowMom]

Oh dear. That just shows how out of touch an almost seventy year old can be. I do apologise.

I hasten to add that I am enjoying my year of 69.

Not exactly, this shows how girls of this world differ from each other by huge gaps, or should I say craters...


All contributions and ideas are welcome... I appreciate your help, thanks...

 

[MyWidowMom]

A different idea could be girl could be tricked by a latin friend of hers. She wants to learn how to drive a car and her friend from English class helps her, having other intentions. Telling her that she needs a boyfriend, she needs protection etc... But she always refused him but couldn't go away or stop him from telling so. Raping or seducing could be good... Father warned her before for this man, now he learns about this and doesn't interrupt, he thinks she deserved it for being so naive and innocent. He tells this situation to the boy after she returns to her own country...

Or a good looking friend (soldier) of father at a party could be better. Seducing the girl when she is drunk, father gives permission to do so and he records everything...

 

[DiscusDave]

an interesting idea could be to have her be showing interest in sexual things towards the Boy. They have an online relationship, and he seems like sort of a confidant kind of character. Questions directed to the boy about what certain sex acts feel like or the proper way to flirt or something along those lines. Boy thinks she's prepping herself for him, but the answers are really to help her try and seduce the Father. To really emphasize the naivety of the girl, one of the children she is taking care of could be starting some type of sex ed. This could be the interest sparking moment, and as the child learns so does she.

just some thoughts. otherwise sound like a cool idea. The tie in with a military family is something really neat and I haven't seen a lot of it.

 

[MyWidowMom]

an interesting idea could be to have her be showing interest in sexual things towards the Boy. They have an online relationship, and he seems like sort of a confidant kind of character. Questions directed to the boy about what certain sex acts feel like or the proper way to flirt or something along those lines. Boy thinks she's prepping herself for him, but the answers are really to help her try and seduce the Father. To really emphasize the naivety of the girl, one of the children she is taking care of could be starting some type of sex ed. This could be the interest sparking moment, and as the child learns so does she.

just some thoughts. otherwise sound like a cool idea. The tie in with a military family is something really neat and I haven't seen a lot of it.

Thank you really much. ..

But here Father tries to seduce the girl because the girl is so naive, Father or a friend of father it is not so important...

After that thing happens girl could talk more about sex, but be colder with the boy...

Sex ed idea is really good, I liked it a lot...

 

[MyWidowMom]

At a party father getting her to wear stockings and mini skirt could be good. Maybe at a costume party, she innocently agrees to do that, not knowing what it will cause...

A little bit white wine could also change lots of things...

 

[MyWidowMom]

Which one is better in your opinion?

Hearing it from the girl or hearing it from the father? (Story should be narrated by the boy but who could tell about this incident?)

Also if you have any ideas please comment...

 

[kovielem]

told by the father

 

[mia_erotica]

Right away I thought the girl should have some sort of low self esteem. Perhaps she has a scar, like at her last au pair situation she had a car accident with the kids in the car and has a scar near her eye or her face that is magnified to her but hardly noticeable to others. Or she has a keloid gallbladder scar that makes her feel ugly or a hairy pussy, excessive body hair. Like not extreme but enough to give her low self-esteem. And the father is always high and doesn't notice anything but his own cock.

 

[MyWidowMom]

Right away I thought the girl should have some sort of low self esteem. Perhaps she has a scar, like at her last au pair situation she had a car accident with the kids in the car and has a scar near her eye or her face that is magnified to her but hardly noticeable to others. Or she has a keloid gallbladder scar that makes her feel ugly or a hairy pussy, excessive body hair. Like not extreme but enough to give her low self-esteem. And the father is always high and doesn't notice anything but his own cock.

Excellent idea, girl had a car accident with the two little girls in the back of the car, mother of the girls gets really angry, so the girl is afraid to drive a car. She has a tiny scar which can't be seen because of her long her.

Father is in the military, handsome, excellent at sports and has good chatting abilities.

Thank you...

 

[MyWidowMom]

Any more ideas, like where does the sex takes place, also does the girl feel guilty about it? How does she react to the boy she likes...?

 

[PurpleTiara]

Which one is better in your opinion?

Hearing it from the girl or hearing it from the father? (Story should be narrated by the boy but who could tell about this incident?)

Also if you have any ideas please comment...

Hearing it from the father.

Say that this is a long running program. You have au pair Betty for a year, and then Betty goes home, and they send au pair Wilma. Father feels guilty/uncomfortable or just plain worried that if this gets out, he could be in trouble. Not neccessarily law enforcement trouble, but say there could be ramifications socially and professionally for him. So the Father writes the placement people and says "sorry, no more au pairs" and they ask him what he is dissatisfied about. After some coaxing, and their promise that it is totally off the record, he confesses to the affair. His contact at the au pair agency is titillated and enthralled and manages to draw him out, over a series of letters. He ends up getting a new au pair, and tries to keep his hands off of her. His original au pair may get "promoted" rather than fired, as long as she provides the same services to the new boss, who would be some High Muckety Muck in the au pair service. Or to make it really wierd, the High Muckety Muck is actually a woman instead of a man and makes the au pair service her husband in her place for whatever reason.

 

[MyWidowMom]

Hearing it from the father.

Say that this is a long running program. You have au pair Betty for a year, and then Betty goes home, and they send au pair Wilma. Father feels guilty/uncomfortable or just plain worried that if this gets out, he could be in trouble. Not neccessarily law enforcement trouble, but say there could be ramifications socially and professionally for him. So the Father writes the placement people and says "sorry, no more au pairs" and they ask him what he is dissatisfied about. After some coaxing, and their promise that it is totally off the record, he confesses to the affair. His contact at the au pair agency is titillated and enthralled and manages to draw him out, over a series of letters. He ends up getting a new au pair, and tries to keep his hands off of her. His original au pair may get "promoted" rather than fired, as long as she provides the same services to the new boss, who would be some High Muckety Muck in the au pair service. Or to make it really wierd, the High Muckety Muck is actually a woman instead of a man and makes the au pair service her husband in her place for whatever reason.

Where is the boy in your story? Also we are not concerned about the second au-pair...

She just returns home to her family but act differently, she doesn't work again as an au pair...

Thank you for your idea, but we should emphasize more on the boy, because he narrates it...

 

[mia_erotica]

What does your outline look like now? What other ideas are you looking for?

 

[MyWidowMom]

What does your outline look like now? What other ideas are you looking for?

Girl (23-24) comes to USA to improve her English, take tourism and hospitality courses (before babysitting she was working at a hotel) by an au-pair agency. She starts working for a military family. They have two little girls, one of them is 4 other one is 6. Mom come home late, because she likes her work, she is really working hard to get in to higher positions. She is 8 years older than dad (38). Dad of the girls is 30, he is a really self confident man, good looking excellent at sports and physical jobs, also he does have good communication skills and can be considered as a talkative man.

Girl likes chatting but, she is not a slut. She is a virgin that never had a boyfriend. She meets a boy in a forum, got along with him. Chatted really much, shared so much. She begins to like him but no love or no relationship, but boy likes her very very much. Girl tells everything to the boy, what she did that day, where she went etc etc...

Father compliments and jokes with the girl. When she does make up, he tells her that too bad, this beauty is spent that day. He asks questions about boyfriends, sex, virginity and other things. He says that sex is a normal thing and he can do it with anyone...

She answers all of them, but she gets angry. When she goes out with a normal friend, father asks her if he is her boyfriend or did he kissed her. When they go to a pool, whenever she wears bikini, he compliments her saying that she has a great body and she can work in bikini at a car wash station and earn good money. She considers this as a joke and laugh.

She tells all of this to boy, boy gets angry but helpless being miles away...

Then the incident happens (that's where I am stuck) and after that incident she finishes her school, returns to her home country. But her moves, her character has been changed, so the boy suspects something and somehow talks with the father...





That's what I have in my mind...

 

[PurpleTiara]

All contributions and ideas are welcome... I appreciate your help, thanks...

Where is the boy in your story? Also we are not concerned about the second au-pair...

She just returns home to her family but act differently, she doesn't work again as an au pair...

Thank you for your idea, but we should emphasize more on the boy, because he narrates it...

My mistake, because when you posted that "All contributions and ideas are welcome" I sent you mine. Sorry about that. When I write, I tend to get more involved in the story telling aspects, (back story and continuation) not just the stroke aspects.

The spurned or disgruntled suitor does not work for me, so I concentrated on having the dad as a story teller to the Au Pair Organization. The second, unusual POV was coming from his contacts with his contact on the end, deciding what to to do with her info, who to tell and whatnot. Since she would be uninvolved in the original debauchery but incredibley turned on by it. So how does she tell it? To whom? Does her discomfort as well as her arousal shine through? Because honestly, the boy tracking down the father does not ring true to me. While he may be coaxed to share the info with the company, relating the incident to a total stranger out of the blue who manages to track him down and ask him about the girl and he spills all? When I lived in the US, the people did not strike me as the type who would spill that sort of information, if the person who is asking (the boy, in your case) has enough info to cause him harm. Since the boy tracked him down, he must have identifying details of some sort (like name, address, isp info) to positively identify him as the man of the family with whom she was living. He would be more likely to clam up, rather than spill it all. The only way I can imagine the man relating the story to the boy so that the boy can retell it to us is if the man is somehow convinced that the boy is harmless to him and is bragging and rubbing his nose in it, humiliating the boy in that way. Is there supposed to be an angry/humilition aspect to this? Maybe I am missing what the boy is getting out of relating the story to us.

Anyway, I posted my thoughts and suggestions because I was under the impression that you were asking for some feedback and more ideas. Best of luck to you and your story.

 

[MyWidowMom]

My mistake, because when you posted that "All contributions and ideas are welcome" I sent you mine. Sorry about that. When I write, I tend to get more involved in the story telling aspects, (back story and continuation) not just the stroke aspects.

The spurned or disgruntled suitor does not work for me, so I concentrated on having the dad as a story teller to the Au Pair Organization. The second, unusual POV was coming from his contacts with his contact on the end, deciding what to to do with her info, who to tell and whatnot. Since she would be uninvolved in the original debauchery but incredibley turned on by it. So how does she tell it? To whom? Does her discomfort as well as her arousal shine through? Because honestly, the boy tracking down the father does not ring true to me. While he may be coaxed to share the info with the company, relating the incident to a total stranger out of the blue who manages to track him down and ask him about the girl and he spills all? When I lived in the US, the people did not strike me as the type who would spill that sort of information, if the person who is asking (the boy, in your case) has enough info to cause him harm. Since the boy tracked him down, he must have identifying details of some sort (like name, address, isp info) to positively identify him as the man of the family with whom she was living. He would be more likely to clam up, rather than spill it all. The only way I can imagine the man relating the story to the boy so that the boy can retell it to us is if the man is somehow convinced that the boy is harmless to him and is bragging and rubbing his nose in it, humiliating the boy in that way. Is there supposed to be an angry/humilition aspect to this? Maybe I am missing what the boy is getting out of relating the story to us.

Anyway, I posted my thoughts and suggestions because I was under the impression that you were asking for some feedback and more ideas. Best of luck to you and your story.

As I said before all ideas are very welcome, so I appreciate your help truly and very much. Boy knows where the girl lives, the full name of the father and all of the family members, address and phone numbers of them. Because he was the one who helped her take that hospitality course and other English courses.

Father does this just to humiliate him telling that she is not so innocent anymore and never trust a woman that much. Boy always thought of this girl as Maria Magdelena... She was like that before...

The boy gets upset at the end, as it should be and feels cheated humiliated...

Father as usual feeds his ego and laughs to all of this.

Girl changes dramatically...


Thank you for your precious ideas and for your kindness...




I always like to hear more ideas, no matter if they are really related or not, so still looking forward to new ideas...

 

[MyWidowMom]

Can anyone write the sex act for me? Also which one should the partner be? Father, a friend of father (from the army), a friend of girl from school. In each of them, if the partner is not father, he sees this action (takes photos or records it, doesn't matter) and approves it. Then tells this incident to the boy...

 

[MyWidowMom]

If anybody could write me (or help me to write) this story I'll give more details with P.M. Thank you all...