AV Challenge

[HomerPindar]

Hey folks, here's something I stumbled upon as far as a challenge goes...While reading through another thread I found deliciously_naughty's AV. It's now a fav of mine, as far as AV's go anyways. And I thought I'd write her to compliment her on it... lame. But hey, I'm a poet, why not let this inspire some poetry and let her see that, now THAT'S a compliment (or my ego showing off). So, here it is:

Dreaming of a warmth not of the night.
Eager to have her dreams besides her,
laying across the blue satin.
Inching open her robe to reveal
curves for the carressing.
Idle fingers invited to trace lines
over warm skin, through thick red hair,
up the line of her neck...
She smiles as her dreams
lower lips to her breast.
Yielding to her dreams, she feels
new hands caressing, stroking...
A hand up her thigh, lips joining hands,
unable to tell hands from lips from tongues,
gliding over her, into her...
Her dreams slip inside,
thrusting thier way into her.
Yet still she lays, dreaming...

The question of the day, how do I include the AV itself (which, yes, I asked for and received permission to include in the poem) in the poem, either here, or as a submitted poem? there's artistic poetry submissions section, but is there a set format for such a submission?

And, the technical aspects of including an AV is not the only challenge... here's one for you folks, write a poem inspired by an Avatar. Personally, I made mine an acrostic, to include the handle of the user that the Av went with... So, be sure to include the handle/user's name somewhere in the poem. doesn't have to be acrostic, but it should be in there. Be certain that any major elements are also in there (in my own case, the redhair, the blue "satin" sheet, and the fact she's asleep, and so on).

Have fun,
HomerPindar

 

[WickedEve]

Hmmm... I need to go change my AV!
I'll back and see if I help answer your questions in just a sexond. (yes, typo is intentional)

 

[WickedEve]

Now I'm back with a fresh AV. Does my tongue inspire anyone?

You can include the AV here by... uhh... I don't att. may photos to posts. But there's an att. file option below smilies and options when you're writing out your post. You just save her AV and then browse your hard drive. Let me try...

 

[WickedEve]

Okay, it worked. I att. an old AV. As for submitting a pic with a poem, I think you have to send it via email. I don't think there's any other way at the moment to do it. Anyone here have illustrated poems?

 

[WickedEve]

Hey folks, here's something I stumbled upon as far as a challenge goes...While reading through another thread I found deliciously_naughty's AV. It's now a fav of mine, as far as AV's go anyways. And I thought I'd write her to compliment her on it... lame. But hey, I'm a poet, why not let this inspire some poetry and let her see that, now THAT'S a compliment (or my ego showing off). So, here it is:

Dreaming of a warmth not of the night.
Eager to have her dreams besides her,
laying across the blue satin.
Inching open her robe to reveal
curves for the carressing.
Idle fingers invited to trace lines
over warm skin, through thick red hair,
up the line of her neck...
She smiles as her dreams
lower lips to her breast.
Yielding to her dreams, she feels
new hands caressing, stroking...
A hand up her thigh, lips joining hands,
unable to tell hands from lips from tongues,
gliding over her, into her...
Her dreams slip inside,
thrusting thier way into her.
Yet still she lays, dreaming...

The question of the day, how do I include the AV itself (which, yes, I asked for and received permission to include in the poem) in the poem, either here, or as a submitted poem? there's artistic poetry submissions section, but is there a set format for such a submission?

And, the technical aspects of including an AV is not the only challenge... here's one for you folks, write a poem inspired by an Avatar. Personally, I made mine an acrostic, to include the handle of the user that the Av went with... So, be sure to include the handle/user's name somewhere in the poem. doesn't have to be acrostic, but it should be in there. Be certain that any major elements are also in there (in my own case, the redhair, the blue "satin" sheet, and the fact she's asleep, and so on).

Have fun,
HomerPindar

I like the poem and I think with her long handle that it must have been a challenge. If you submit it, check for typos. Besides should be beside, laying should be lying (I think) and thier should be their.

 

[HomerPindar]

Okay, it worked. I att. an old AV. As for submitting a pic with a poem, I think you have to send it via email. I don't think there's any other way at the moment to do it. Anyone here have illustrated poems?

well, duh, it is right at the bottom after all...

I even told dn that Iwould simply ask the poets, and sure enough...

HomerPindar

 

[HomerPindar]

memo to self, you can't add a file via editing... SO, here's that av of deliciously naughty, better late than never atall, eh?

HomerPindar

 

[WickedEve]

Nice AV, but since the entire thread was based on that AV, my expectations were quite high, Homer. I thought I would, at least, be required to wear 3D glasses to view it.

 

[HomerPindar]

Nice AV, but since the entire thread was based on that AV, my expectations were quite high, Homer. I thought I would, at least, be required to wear 3D glasses to view it.

Now now, the thread is a challenge to find an AV that inspires you to write a poem about it...this is the one that caught my eye. Just doesn't seem to be catching on as an idea is all...

HomerPindar

 

[damppanties]

The question of the day, how do I include the AV itself (which, yes, I asked for and received permission to include in the poem) in the poem, either here, or as a submitted poem? there's artistic poetry submissions section, but is there a set format for such a submission?

Have fun,
HomerPindar

OK, about getting the av into your poem which is submitted on the site, I think you have to put in a link to the pic on this thread. You have to put something like THIS above or below your poem.

 

[WickedEve]

Now now, the thread is a challenge to find an AV that inspires you to write a poem about it...this is the one that caught my eye. Just doesn't seem to be catching on as an idea is all...

HomerPindar

Well there are poetry inspiring AVs around. Judo's should be for some of us. lol

 

[HomerPindar]

Well there are poetry inspiring AVs around. Judo's should be for some of us. lol

Here here! so...where's the poem from Judo's av then WE?

HomerPindar

 

[smithpeter]

i am probably doing this wrong

I need these things
so I have the weight of my hand
to hold what I don't want
to blow away
down some ally I don't know
or the ally I have known all my life
that has always been
right over there beside that
other ally and the wet one
with the TV's pilled up next to
the fissures into which the witch eve
drops things then forgets them till the screaming.

she is alert for her screamers screams and comes
with the ropes and one time an active helicopter
filled with Navy types crew cut and blended
per her recipe

 

[WickedEve]

Oh, Homer... Okay, I'll see what I can do with Judo's panties... I mean a poem about them...

smithpeter, witch eve? screaming? active helicopter
filled with Navy types? is that why the witch is screaming? please say, yes.

 

[WickedEve]

when they were snatched
a plan was hatched
embroidered her name
so no one could claim

now on girly nights
after the pillow fights
all fingers trace
Judo's special place

 

[HomerPindar]

Re: i am probably doing this wrong

I need these things
so I have the weight of my hand
to hold what I don't want
to blow away
down some ally I don't know
or the ally I have known all my life
that has always been
right over there beside that
other ally and the wet one
with the TV's pilled up next to
the fissures into which the witch eve
drops things then forgets them till the screaming.

she is alert for her screamers screams and comes
with the ropes and one time an active helicopter
filled with Navy types crew cut and blended
per her recipe

Well, I don't now about a wrong way to do poetry

But I am curious how the elements fit in with the image... or inspired them anyways. (then, I often wonder what makes someones thoughts tick)

HomerPindar

 

[WickedEve]

I'm taking another shot at Judo's panties

One finger poised as if to decide
Just a little to the left to slip inside
Few strokes down to reach below
Or straight up to Judo under the bow

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: i am probably doing this wrong

Well, I don't now about a wrong way to do poetry

But I am curious how the elements fit in with the image... or inspired them anyways. (then, I often wonder what makes someones thoughts tick)

HomerPindar

What's under your hand?

 

[HomerPindar]

Re: Re: Re: i am probably doing this wrong

What's under your hand?

now why don't you bring that tong...oh, you were asking smithpeter.


HomerPindar

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: Re: Re: i am probably doing this wrong

now why don't you bring that tong...oh, you were asking smithpeter.


HomerPindar

 

[JUDO]

Now I'm back with a fresh AV. Does my tongue inspire anyone?

So, my panties inspire you? Well, two can play...


[size=e]Between Her Lips[/size]

A raspy one...
All pink and round
Sticking through lips
Feminine, profound.

A ponytail mirror
Yet not so limp,
Usually touting her words
Like some dictiionary pimp.

All nerve endings
And taste buds full,
It delves in deep
With a wanton's pull.

Can any mistake
This prodigious muscle
Which WickedEve wields
With unrestrained hustle?

A tongue, a tongue
So full, so ripe
Who would not dare
To take a swipe?

Attractive and vulgar,
Bearing the same skin -
The answer to which
Lies deep within.

Alone against all
It thrusts nonetheless.
Many secrets it holds
With some under duress.

But in one-on-one,
(If I can be so bold)
It's a devilish device.
(Or so I'm told.)

 

[JUDO]

Siren On The Rocks
--- a titullar sonnet for Lauren ---

A hidden pearl that lies within plain sight
Distracts my mind to flights of fancy sex.
My breath on hold, my pounding heart in vex --
The words just cannot come to bear their plight.

In whitewashed cloth, a breast of wondrous hue
Lies perched in wait amidst its open cage
As though intentions be to steep the rage
Of passersby who catch the sexual view.

A nymph perhaps or lady unaware
Sits so upright to call ourselves to task.
If we could be so bold to gently ask,
"Could I request a kiss upon the pair?"

Delights play everyday within our sight
That tempt our lustful paths from morn 'til night.

 

[Cloudbrst9]

Ref: Where's the poem to Judo's AV?

With respect to both ladies, I couldn't resist. I hope you like it, short, silly and perhaps trite as it is.

Jewel of the barded board,

Understands metre and rhyme,

Dares to show AV's that blow

Out sweet Angeline's mind.


Sorry, can't manipulate the board's methodology, or JUDO would have been in bold.

cb9

 

[Angeline]

LOL hey Cloudburst!

Thanks for the mention. I love my sweet image; I've worked hard to cultivate it! If you only knew .....

And Homer? Here's my contribution:

Only a wooden mannekin sitting on a shelf
Treasuring books his faceless face can't see

Perhaps as he lurks he seems quiet or shy
Or is he lost in thought, his head turned just so?
Ethereal with all those ideas so close by
Thinking his quiet thoughts that only T can know

 

[HomerPindar]

Woohoo... seems this wasn't such a bad idea after all.

Course, I still don't know what file format one should consider for submitting these gems, but that aside, well done folks...

HomerPindar