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[Athena_e19]

So we have small town USA. Mom and Dad are involved in the community. Older son goes to local university, daughter in senior year of high school. Daughter has full ride scholarship to major Ivy League school.... Gets in a hit and run accident after drinking a little too much at a weekend party. Tells only her mother. Mom helps get the SUV fixed up, on the down low, and gets things back to normal. Newspaper do a story on the mystery suspect of the hit and run and the police have a general profile of suspect's vehicle.

A few weeks later the Mom, gets the blackmail letter with some piece of evidence that points the finger at her daughter and at her for her role in covering things up. I think it would be good if the mother was part of MADD.... maybe the chapter president or something. Blackmailer requires mother to perform certain act at one of the public gatherings- wear a lingerie outfit he sent her or something to that effect. Nothing too out there at first. She doesn't hear from him till later. Some new requirement, slightly more involved and sexual.... Then wash, rinse, repeat.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

So we have small town USA. Mom and Dad are involved in the community. Older son goes to local university, daughter in senior year of high school. Daughter has full ride scholarship to major Ivy League school.... Gets in a hit and run accident after drinking a little too much at a weekend party. Tells only her mother. Mom helps get the SUV fixed up, on the down low, and gets things back to normal. Newspaper do a story on the mystery suspect of the hit and run and the police have a general profile of suspect's vehicle.

A few weeks later the Mom, gets the blackmail letter with some piece of evidence that points the finger at her daughter and at her for her role in covering things up. I think it would be good if the mother was part of MADD.... maybe the chapter president or something. Blackmailer requires mother to perform certain act at one of the public gatherings- wear a lingerie outfit he sent her or something to that effect. Nothing too out there at first. She doesn't hear from him till later. Some new requirement, slightly more involved and sexual.... Then wash, rinse, repeat.

Excellent! It is rare that we receive a plot line this thought out!

 

[Sean Renaud]

I concur we have brillance.

 

[Athena_e19]

Now who writes it. It is not in my usual line of work. I did just start one about a female sexual predator, who preys on small town college co-eds. It is keeping me involved and is giving me some good though processes for something like this.

Anyone else want to volunteer?

 

[rockersex]

This story is beginning to interest me. I'll be submitting more of my stories in the upcoming weeks.

About the rest of me. I've written ten novels and working on getting one published. This story isn't just sex all the way through so I'm sure I can build some suspense. Reply to me if you want me to give this story a ten page try and I'll whip it up in a night or two.

 

[funrunner]

Good start...

So we have small town USA. Mom and Dad are involved in the community. Older son goes to local university, daughter in senior year of high school. Daughter has full ride scholarship to major Ivy League school.... Gets in a hit and run accident after drinking a little too much at a weekend party. Tells only her mother. Mom helps get the SUV fixed up, on the down low, and gets things back to normal. Newspaper do a story on the mystery suspect of the hit and run and the police have a general profile of suspect's vehicle.

A few weeks later the Mom, gets the blackmail letter with some piece of evidence that points the finger at her daughter and at her for her role in covering things up. I think it would be good if the mother was part of MADD.... maybe the chapter president or something. Blackmailer requires mother to perform certain act at one of the public gatherings- wear a lingerie outfit he sent her or something to that effect. Nothing too out there at first. She doesn't hear from him till later. Some new requirement, slightly more involved and sexual.... Then wash, rinse, repeat.

I too think that this is a good idea. Taking it a step further, have the mom be someone of greater prominence (mayor, etc), where the costs of such a move can cost her a lot more than saving face. It can cost her a promising job, and definitely impact her marriage...

 

[snooper]

So we have small town USA. Mom and Dad are involved in the community. Older son goes to local university, daughter in senior year of high school. Daughter has full ride scholarship to major Ivy League school.... Gets in a hit and run accident after drinking a little too much at a weekend party. Tells only her mother. Mom helps get the SUV fixed up, on the down low, and gets things back to normal. Newspaper do a story on the mystery suspect of the hit and run and the police have a general profile of suspect's vehicle.

A few weeks later the Mom, gets the blackmail letter with some piece of evidence that points the finger at her daughter and at her for her role in covering things up. I think it would be good if the mother was part of MADD.... maybe the chapter president or something. Blackmailer requires mother to perform certain act at one of the public gatherings- wear a lingerie outfit he sent her or something to that effect. Nothing too out there at first. She doesn't hear from him till later. Some new requirement, slightly more involved and sexual.... Then wash, rinse, repeat.

I was with you all the way to the "wash, rinse, repeat ..." bit. I think you have to be more active than that. The softly, softly approach increases the danger for the blackmailer and gives the mother more chances to back out (for example by 'losing' the vehicle).

If she has to wear no panties at some fairly formal occasion as the first "challenge" and then the blackmailer hits her with photographic prooof that she did it (eg upskirt shot from under the stage where she is making a speech, or introducing a speaker) then hits her with a really demanding challenge, it will keep her off balance and will not give the reader a chance to get bored with a slow build up.

 

[jeninflorida]

I like your idea! What if the couple is living the “perfect” life on the outside, but on the inside she is very lonely as the couple has been focusing on work, money, bills, and putting the kids through school. Since the daughter has a full ride and this is very important for the family, how about the blackmailer has some means?

At first, she is terrified by this blackmailer.

The man has class and does not push too hard. He purchases a sexy black dress for her to wear, something that she would never purchase for herself. She wears per his instructions. He has her cell phone number, and he uses a prepaid phone that can’t be traced back to him.

He watches her in public in the dress and calls her. He loves watching her walk, finds her very attractive, sexy, and has a deep desire to be with her. He tells her how attractive she is, and how great the dress looks on her. This is the first time in years, she has felt like a woman.

Next big step, but this works for me.

If the couple has little money, lets say that this man makes arrangements for the wife to spend the day at a spa. All the girly stuff, with fresh hair cut and make up. Nothing makes a girl feel sexy than that!

Now she is thinking of him and wants to know more about him!

So we have small town USA. Mom and Dad are involved in the community. Older son goes to local university, daughter in senior year of high school. Daughter has full ride scholarship to major Ivy League school.... Gets in a hit and run accident after drinking a little too much at a weekend party. Tells only her mother. Mom helps get the SUV fixed up, on the down low, and gets things back to normal. Newspaper do a story on the mystery suspect of the hit and run and the police have a general profile of suspect's vehicle.

A few weeks later the Mom, gets the blackmail letter with some piece of evidence that points the finger at her daughter and at her for her role in covering things up. I think it would be good if the mother was part of MADD.... maybe the chapter president or something. Blackmailer requires mother to perform certain act at one of the public gatherings- wear a lingerie outfit he sent her or something to that effect. Nothing too out there at first. She doesn't hear from him till later. Some new requirement, slightly more involved and sexual.... Then wash, rinse, repeat.

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

The man has class and does not push too hard. He purchases a sexy black dress for her to wear, something that she would never purchase for herself. She wears per his instructions. He has her cell phone number, and he uses a prepaid phone that can’t be traced back to him.

He watches her in public in the dress and calls her. He loves watching her walk, finds her very attractive, sexy, and has a deep desire to be with her. He tells her how attractive she is, and how great the dress looks on her. This is the first time in years, she has felt like a woman.

I love this twist... the endearing tormentor...... the mixture of fear and loathing tied with want and hunger. She can claim she is being setup if she is caught but inside she wants to do more.

 

[Athena_e19]

I personally am not very into the endearing tormentor- doesn't mean it isn't good, just that I don't find it very arousing.

I think for me this story would be all about leverage and control. I do think that he could use his previous blackmails against her down the line. Ultimately, I do want her to become something of his slave, but along the way I only want to see what in erotic stories I term as coincidental arousal. I don't want her hot and heavy at the sound of his voice. I want her hot and heavy because of something he made her do or say or show.

I just finished one of my longer stories that had been bugging me. I think I will work on this over the coming week and post it. When its up I will get back to you with it. I may occasionally pop in for some creative mind sessions.

 

[sexyhornymom]

Thank you all!

Everyone I just want to say thank you for your thoughts and suggestions! I never expected all this!

Athena e19 - Thank you for your insights. I like the suggestion of one of my children making a slip up and me doing whatever I can to protect them. Being pillars of the community and having one of my children (or even both) going "off the rails" on purpose or circumstance is a wonderful concept I haven't contemplated yet!

Although, I'm not sure I'm comfortable with underage at all in my story even if its on a non sexual basis. I do however agree with a nice slow plot progression as I try and satisfy the blackmailer's demands without my husband knowing and his demands getting more and more outrageous as the story progresses, using my previous blackmails against me. Maybe alternating demands from extreme to mild and keeping me off balance like Snooper suggests. Thank you also for your later comments about wanting the story to reflect as close to my real life as possible. I think this is best as it will give a feeling of possibly happening.

For the record, I am 37 and teach physics at ages 14-18. My husband Mike is 38 and is a pediatrician.

You hit the nail right on the head describing the sex in this story as choosing between an animalistic urge and morality or common sense and the inevitable victory of desire is the most alluring act of that.


Jerryjwj - A promising start! I'd like to hear more!


Sean Renaud - Incest! You naughty boy! I do like that suggestion though! I like the concept of incest even though the real thing would not do anything for me so having that avenue definiteley look promising. Your thoughts on having my daughter find out and being blackmailed seperately is another intriguing idea.


Rockersex - If you are interested in writing this story, let me know!


JeninFlorida - Your suggestion have a nice sinister tone about them. A blackmailer who treats his victim relatively nicely, treating me to nice girly things. Revolutionary concept!


EVERYBODY has given some wonderful suggestions and I hope the final story incorporates most of them! THANK YOU ALL!

 

[rockersex]

It sounds like we're almost there. Now for a few details.

POV. I suggest the mother's first person past or present. I think present tense would give a nice immersion into the story even though it's slightly less conventional.

Let's talk character. What do you want our main character to look like? Slim? Athletic? Curvy? Exotic? It's up to you, I can work with anything.

 

[Sean Renaud]

We are terribly close, I'm saying curvy. Curvy as in Marilyn Monroe or current (unless she blew up again I lose track) Queen Latifah. you know big tits, decent hips, big butt. I don't work with actual fat chicks though it is smagically making an entirely different story in my head. . .

I find first person stories to be absurdly difficult but you know what I mostly plan on givving suggesting and editing so don't take my word as gospel as I'm not writing it.

 

[sexyhornymom]

Me

I want it to be me in the story so for the writers out there these are my details. I'm 37, 5 9 and 135lbs. I have dark blonde (dyed!) shoulder length hair and brown eyes. My measurements are 34c 26 34. If you want to know more for the story then let me know!

Personally, I think a story told from my point of view as it happens would be best but I'll leave that up to the author. Incidently, would any of the idea contributors like to be in the story in some way?

XXX

Alex

 

[Sean Renaud]

A picture is worth a thousand words.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

A picture is worth a thousand words.

Especially when someone wants a story written about them.

 

[funrunner]

Expanding the plot...

Seeing that the place is going to be small town USA...every one knows everyone else's business. This could be a focus point of the blackmailer.

Let's just say that the kids aren't quite the angels that lonelymom thinks. While both kids may be off to go to a local and Ivy league university, both kids have serious luggage. The older son is a computer hacker, and has thrown a ton of rave parties where a lot of illegal activity has gone down. The daughter, while she is on her way to an elite school, has fudged her academics and has a serious drinking problem. The hit and run accident...is only the tip of the iceberg. Both kids have some SERIOUS issues.

Lonelymom has no idea. While she thinks that she has a close relationship with both kids, she really doesn't know them. As she finds out about the problems, she will do everything that she can to keep those problems secret from both the community and her husband.

The blackmailer knows about it all. He (or she) can start off by making some "conventional" demands, but as the relationship continues...lonelymom begins to find out more and more about her kids. The demands begin to become more extreme and taking her out into public view. She complies to the demands because she wants to keep her status in the community. This will help to keep the main character ties to the blackmailer.

The blackmailer can then take the show on the road, per se, as the demands increase. They can start off like how jeninflorida, and can move all over. The ending can take place in Las Vegas..."where what happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas" (supposedly).

 

[Texguy84]

Another thought, along the vein of "Mother doesn't know how bad her kids are"...

Maybe what she's trying to keep secret isn't too secret to begin with? Maybe she is, herself, well enough liked in town (a longtime community leader, good Christian woman, always willing to help out friends in need, etc.) that folks are discrete enough not to mention her kids' wrongdoings around her? This way, everything she is doing to protect her kids' reputation and her own standing in the community is for naught.

Ideally, of course, this isn't revealed until later on in the story, when she's done things on her own bad enough to necessitate her going along with the blackmailer's demands to keep HER wrongdoings from being made public.

And another demented idea along that vein... maybe one of her kids is actually the blackmailer? One of his friends (or even him with a mask or something so she can't see who it is) is the one partaking in whatever sexually deviant activities she is being made to do to protect her children?

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Very interesting twist, Tex.

 

[snooper]

... POV. I suggest the mother's first person past or present. I think present tense would give a nice immersion into the story even though it's slightly less conventional. ...

First person present tense is how seven-year-old schoolchildren write their stories. They soon grow out of it, or stop writing.

... I find first person stories to be absurdly difficult ...

I fully agree.

The vast majority of "real" (i.e. established) writers use third person, past tense. Surely they can't all be wrong?

 

[rockersex]

"First person present tense is how seven-year-old schoolchildren write their stories. They soon grow out of it, or stop writing."

Tell that to Bret Easton, who wrote American Psycho entirely in first person present, or to Chuck Palahniuk, who wrote Fight Club entirely in first person present. Stephen King writes in first person, sometimes present tense omniscent. I've seen a great numbers on Literotica that's omniscent past tense.

You know why most "established" authors write in third person past? Simply because it's easier. There is no better or worse way to write, it's simply a point of style.

I suggest first person because the story is very personal, concerning this one main character. Because of the nature of the story, it would be very immersive to be in her head the entire time. Present tense, while often done badly, can make a very invigorating read. It adds a certian edginess and unpredictablility to the work, like anything can go wrong at any moment.

Now of course, you don't have to do the entire story in present tense. I suggest throwing her into one of her situations and then she reflects back on how she got there, which would bring the story to past tense for a while.

In any way, that's how I think we could make a good story become great.

 

[Texguy84]

"First person present tense is how seven-year-old schoolchildren write their stories. They soon grow out of it, or stop writing."

Tell that to Bret Easton, who wrote American Psycho entirely in first person present, or to Chuck Palahniuk, who wrote Fight Club entirely in first person present.

The thing that amuses me about Fight Club (aside from the line about the 50 foot tall throbbing pink penis) is that everything that I liked about the movie's narrative style annoys me in written form, as it turns out. A lot of the repetitive narration was just annoying in a book, even if it worked well in the movie.

I don't know how well First Person Present tense would work, but First Person Past Tense can be fairly immersive too. If you're gonna do it in the present tense, I'd go with Third Person Limited (Limited meaning that the narrator only knows as much as the reader does at any given point in the story, even though the narrator is the one TELLING the story).

 

[Athena_e19]

The reason that first person stories work so well in Fight Club and American Psycho is the narrator is insane. So many voices, so little time. Sexyhornymom is not likely to be too insane and would make a little more of a boring narrator. Why? Because without the additional filler information all we would have is a play by play of what she knows. Which is very little. And when you are describing the subtle nuances of a woman's mind as she is gradually turned on to a bizarre world of exhibitionism and incest, you can run off course very easily.

I have read quite a few Literotica stories where first person POV is used. Not bad, just extraordinarily difficult to work into a normal storyline. I go with third person omniscient for this type of thing. That third person could be the blackmailer.

I like the idea of incorporating the kids- I don't think that they should be the blackmailer and I don't think they should be too bad. This story loses some of its impact if the victims aren't relatively innocent. I am also a fan of having the daughter blackmailed- I don't think she should know that her mother is being blackmailed until the end.

Sexyhornymom- could you please provide a description of your children and husband? Are you open to the idea of incest with your daughter or son or both? What type of fantasies do you have- multiple partners, bondage, rough, voyeurism, exhibitionism?

A good description of yourself (thanks for the measurements ) and daily routine would be good. What type of car, how far to work, how big is the house, where is the bedroom and other areas located? Feel free to PM or email me some of the details. I am going to start as soon as I feel I have sufficiently developed my version of your fantasy.

 

[rockersex]

The thing that amuses me about Fight Club (aside from the line about the 50 foot tall throbbing pink penis) is that everything that I liked about the movie's narrative style annoys me in written form, as it turns out. A lot of the repetitive narration was just annoying in a book, even if it worked well in the movie.

I don't know how well First Person Present tense would work, but First Person Past Tense can be fairly immersive too. If you're gonna do it in the present tense, I'd go with Third Person Limited (Limited meaning that the narrator only knows as much as the reader does at any given point in the story, even though the narrator is the one TELLING the story).

That's a totally valid opinion. I don't really have too much experience being sane, or writing sane characters, because of that exact reason. It's boring. I don't really write conventional erotica. I like to go above and beyond traditional narrative format. But if you're looking for a traditional story, I can do that very well, too.

 

[nycouple4lady]

Perhaps the blackmailer is a fellow teacher....that has somthing on one of her children...something that could ruin the child's future. Just an idea that I have not seen explored here.