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[rockersex]

Perhaps the blackmailer is a fellow teacher....that has somthing on one of her children...something that could ruin the child's future. Just an idea that I have not seen explored here.

It should be a sex tape with a teacher at her school. Then he'd have double the ammunition.

 

[sexyhornymom]

The reason that first person stories work so well in Fight Club and American Psycho is the narrator is insane. So many voices, so little time. Sexyhornymom is not likely to be too insane and would make a little more of a boring narrator. Why? Because without the additional filler information all we would have is a play by play of what she knows. Which is very little. And when you are describing the subtle nuances of a woman's mind as she is gradually turned on to a bizarre world of exhibitionism and incest, you can run off course very easily.

I have read quite a few Literotica stories where first person POV is used. Not bad, just extraordinarily difficult to work into a normal storyline. I go with third person omniscient for this type of thing. That third person could be the blackmailer.

I like the idea of incorporating the kids- I don't think that they should be the blackmailer and I don't think they should be too bad. This story loses some of its impact if the victims aren't relatively innocent. I am also a fan of having the daughter blackmailed- I don't think she should know that her mother is being blackmailed until the end.

Sexyhornymom- could you please provide a description of your children and husband? Are you open to the idea of incest with your daughter or son or both? What type of fantasies do you have- multiple partners, bondage, rough, voyeurism, exhibitionism?

A good description of yourself (thanks for the measurements ) and daily routine would be good. What type of car, how far to work, how big is the house, where is the bedroom and other areas located? Feel free to PM or email me some of the details. I am going to start as soon as I feel I have sufficiently developed my version of your fantasy.

Athena_e19 - Thank you for offering to write this. I'll leave it up to you to decide the story format. Personally I'd like the story told from my perspective but not in first person. However you decide to approach it is fine with me so long as the story is good and very erotic! Far be it for me to step on the creative process!

What kind of details would you like to know about my husband and children? I'll give you as much as my husband and I are comfortable with. Even though I'd like this to be as realistic as possible, for safety reasons, I don't want every little detail to match our real lives.

I am open to the possibility of incest with both my son and daughter in the story if its done right. As I have said, I like the concept of incest even if real life incest doesn't do anything for me. As for my fantasies, multiple partners, bondage, rough, voyeurism, exhibitionism - all of the above! Anything goes!

Was my description in my previous posting enough? Was giving my measurements a bit too much detail?

I'll PM you some of the other details.

Thank you once again!

Alex
XXX

 

[Mikro]

Ideas

I have a couple of possible ideas for your perusal

Teacher goes clubbing one night and while she is dancing away someone makes a pass at her touching her up as he doe's so. Without thinking teacher swings her hand and slaps the offender across the face. She suddenly realises that it is one of her pupils. Someone dives in to calm things down (Friend of pupil, another teacher or worker at the school or father of pupil.) I'm not sure how it works in the US but in the UK the teacher could be sacked and prosecuted for assault and her whole life ruined. Either the pupil, over 18 of course, or the person who interviened could be the blackmailer. It might be more interesting if it was the pupil but it could work if it was the pupils father as well.

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I have to admit that the idea of teacher having sex with another person and being photgraphed is old hat. But what about teacher having sex with her husband, on the beach or in the park in the middle of the day or at night and being photographed. As an upright and trusted member of the community this would be frowned upon almost as much as if she was having an affair and if the photo's depicted various positions the blackmailer would have all the more control over her.

Just an idea......

 

[Athena_e19]

The problem I have with the video tape blackmailing is its cheap and unrealistic.

What a teacher does outside of work, as long as its not illegal, is no reflection on her ability to do her job. Slapping a guy accidentally in a club for grinding in her is also a very weak excuse to begin to blackmail someone into sexual submission.

The person doing the blackmailing is clearly the criminal in that story. All the victim would have to do is contact the authorities, the tape would be sealed, the guy arrested, and although there may be some public embarrassment she would be relatively unharmed.

No, if you are going to do the blackmailing you need something crippling and of moral consternation.

Anyways- I am working on the story but I don't want the sex to be cheap and easy. What kind of initial acts could the blackmailer ask her to perform. Erotic, not smut (at least not yet). I need things that would not be obvious to the people around her, but that would be easy for the blackmailer to check on anonymously.....

 

[Sean Renaud]

Are you nuts? Teachers like many other government owned jobs in our Christian Society are very tied to what you do on the outside. Marines aren't allowed to visit Tijuiana, they aren't allowed to pose for nude photography. If you remember a few years back SEVERAL schools threatened their students when Playboy was shooting around campuses. (Granted many more didn't seem to mind) Realistically speaking a teacher grinding, perhaps with a current student in a club could very easily be an entrance level offense to black mail.

If you wanted the agressor to be the main one let there be a woman in on it too so she's caught drunk and grinding on a woman. Then set the story someplace other than say California or New York. Pretty much get out presidential electoral map. If the place is a red state this story is realistic.

 

[Athena_e19]

The blackmail didn't come from the fact that she was grinding on a student in a club. I believe he states that she did not even know it was a student until midway through the dance, then there is an accidental slap, which is where the blackmail comes from.

I had a friend of mine who was put on administrative leave from a school she was interning at because of some "items" which were partially visible in her vehicle. Ultimately she was allowed back, but she left on her own because she felt like she couldn't work there.

 

[jeninflorida]

having a crappy week

okay, I dont know what or how this happened. But i had to travel this past week for work. so, i emailed the word file to myself as i dind't know who's computer i would be using. i use yahoo for email. i borroed someones laptop and went to finish the story, however in yahoo the word document was only 10.5 k in size, my story was gone! when i got home, the word doc was only 10.5 k on my computer....the story was zapped.....i lost the story

i dont know what i did ... or what happened.....

 

[Mikro]

Student

The blackmail didn't come from the fact that she was grinding on a student in a club. I believe he states that she did not even know it was a student until midway through the dance, then there is an accidental slap, which is where the blackmail comes from.

I had a friend of mine who was put on administrative leave from a school she was interning at because of some "items" which were partially visible in her vehicle. Ultimately she was allowed back, but she left on her own because she felt like she couldn't work there.

To clear up this point the Teacher was dancing with her husband, or a friend when the student molested her from behind, the slap was an instinctive defence. Even if the student was in the wrong and she never went to court or the student was prosecuted for blackmail her reputation would be tarnished. Parents would think twice about allowing a teacher who hits students, whatever the situation, from teaching there children. No smoke without fire sort of thing. She could have been coming up for promotion or something and in need of the extra income, but trouble of any kind would put a stop to this

This would only be an intro into blackmail, but the first step would be all that was needed to expand the situation into something more dire. The first step should be something mild and erotic slowly growing into bigger things

 

[Athena_e19]

I could see the progression-

But it is also extremely inappropriate for any student to touch a teacher in any way. If the eighteen year old managed to get in a club (most are 21 and over) and then make his way to a teacher and then grope her.... In a club with one of her friends there, the teacher would never get in trouble. It is the reaction of any woman and the right, might I add, to defensively slap an offending pervert.

I just don't see the blackmail running on that type of concept. You need to have a stronger motivation for a woman with alot to lose to start acting risky. Maybe you could argue that the woman was younger and naive; but a mother, with a doctor husband and two kids, is going to know better.

If I were aiming for a quick smutty story, sure. But a story is better if it is realistic.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Don't have her slap the student, have her start dancing with him because she doesn't recognize him or what not. Then just set the story in a "Red State" where you know sex between anything but a married man and a married woman is scandal worthy. Remember a few months back that a woman was fired from teaching for posing for FHM? She wasn't even nude! Its not that hard to start up a blackmail. Besides we are starting to spend way to much time thinking about something that is only the begining of the story.

I find this akin to spending three pages of brainstorming on why Darth Vader didn't just drive around the galaxy using the force to find his children while they were young. Honestly, he didn't find them. End of story.

 

[Athena_e19]

The problem with blackmail is that you can't just limit it to the beginning of the story unless you are just planning on writing a quickie. You HAVE to be able to make it seem reasonable to continually subvert your will to another person, even as they make increasingly risky, intrusive, and dangerous demands.

A simple slap or grind would carry the story so far. Then you either have to jump tracks to the falling in lust/love with her blackmailer or have to come up with a new form of blackmail.

A good start in a blackmail story will allow you to keep from having to keep adding filler details in the middle.

 

[Sean Renaud]

The thing about sexual blackmail though is that it is self perpetuating. Ok she was doing the bump and grind with a student ina club, to get the photos back she gives a guy head, or has sex whatever. Then they take more pictures while she's unaware. Then she's double fucked cus they aren't going to give the first set of pictures back anyway why would they? They are bad people.

 

[Texguy84]

...Then she's double fucked cus they aren't going to give the first set of pictures back anyway why would they? They are bad people.

No no, she gets double fucked a couple of steps later in the process.

 

[Athena_e19]

A girl needs foreplay for the doublefucking.....

The photograph thing is what I meant by coming up with a new way to black mail her. And it seems that is what happens with every blackmail story on Lit. Crappy blackmail premise, then blackmail pictures.

 

[Sean Renaud]

And the premise of ever sci-fi movie is a unique person gifted by birth to save the galaxy, Star Wars, Pitch Black, Serenity, The Matrix etc etc. There might be an inteligent way to start thinkgs off but I don't see it and since I don't I have nothing against the status quo specially since its what we do after the silly premise that's important.

 

[Athena_e19]

The character is the same- not the starting premise. Not a single one of those movies really jumps out and says this is the promised one right away. And even when they get there, it is not always in the same way.

Why should an erotic fiction story, be it smut or otherwise, always follow the same path?

 

[Sean Renaud]

The charachter is the same because its hard to imagine blackmailing Jenna Jameson or Pamela Anderson into anything, they wanted to fuck. So you require a certain kind of woman for a blackmail story particularly if we are supposed to feel sorry for her. I personally wouldn't complain one bit if the story was about a girl who'd been wild in her youth, calmed down by a boring marriage and then intentionally put herself in a compromising position so she could be "taken advantage of" while getting what she wants.

As for why all smut must follow the same path, if you want my honest opinion its because originality is usually harshly punished.

 

[Athena_e19]

I guess we just have differing viewpoints.

If you look at the earlier possibilities presented in the threat, there is a lot of opportunity to blackmail and manipulate a mother, without her being a bad slut, and gradually allowing the author to build up the story and plot.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I read through the entire thing and to me it just seems like we are still working on variations of the standard theme and here we are now spinning wheels because we all want to do what's never been done but nobody has a solid idea on how.

 

[Athena_e19]

I just submitted my first entry on this story to sexyhornymom. As soon as she gives the go ahead, I will be submitting it.

Hopefully it is original. I will be incorporating some photographic blackmail, but it won't be related to the primary thread of the story.

 

[sexyhornymom]

Looks like there is a big difference in opinion on my story between Athena and Sean. I have to admit I am leaning towards agreeing with Athena. I prefer it to be somewhat realistic which is why I've put certain details on here and messaged other details to Athena. I agree that there's an element of "no smoke without fire" in society but the nightclub situation suggested would just lead to an overall minor inconvenience in life.

However (as my husband points out!) I have been wrong before so if Sean or any other writer wants to develop that train of thought we'd be willing to give it a chance.

Athena - I've read the opening chapter and have sent you my thoughts. Excellent start!

 

[Sean Renaud]

No that will do as an end of discussion, you like her plan for the opening so lets move on to where do we go from here.

 

[sexyhornymom]

okay, I dont know what or how this happened. But i had to travel this past week for work. so, i emailed the word file to myself as i dind't know who's computer i would be using. i use yahoo for email. i borroed someones laptop and went to finish the story, however in yahoo the word document was only 10.5 k in size, my story was gone! when i got home, the word doc was only 10.5 k on my computer....the story was zapped.....i lost the story

i dont know what i did ... or what happened.....

Sounds very odd hun. My computer crashes on a regular basis but I've never encountered that problem. Is everything else ok?

 

[Cherkasov]

i surely can do it 4 u

maybe I'll be able to write one for you)))))))))))
soon one of my long-termed story is going to appear (about a school chick is turned into a slut. about 50 chapters are planned
I'm a russian guy, but I studied to be an interpreter)))))))))))
I write in english, not american