Audio "story" feedback.

[TenderBranson]

I have been writing stories for a while (although I haven't posted any yet)...but I decided to record an audio story. Any feedback would be appreciated, as it's my first recorded effort.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=366081

 

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I'll have a listen when I get some privacy... I fear I may just end up sniggering hopelessly though

 

[bearlee]

I have been writing stories for a while (although I haven't posted any yet)...but I decided to record an audio story. Any feedback would be appreciated, as it's my first recorded effort.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=366081

Is the sheep supposed to be there

 

[Guest]

Is the sheep supposed to be there

Sheep?

 

[where]

ok... I'm sorry, it just didn't work for me. I am hopeless at phone sex though so probably no judge