Attention !!!

[SweetMaj]

My new erotic poem is in the mix. "The Sub In Me"

I would very much like some feed-back,whether you like it or not.

You can't knock me out (so to speak), I can take it !!!


Thank you in advance.

 

[TE999]

My new erotic poem is in the mix. "The Sub In Me"

I would very much like some feed-back,whether you like it or not.

You can't knock me out (so to speak), I can take it !!!


Thank you in advance.

Put up a link to your poem, maj. Some of us are too lazy to go looking for it.

 

[SweetMaj]

Put up a link to your poem, maj. Some of us are too lazy to go looking for it.

I have to admit it. I don't know how to

 

[SweetMaj]

Here is a link : http://www.literotica.com/p the-sub-in-me

 

[TE999]

This link should work http://www.literotica.com/p/the-sub-in-me

 

[hottchic]

Here is a link : http://www.literotica.com/p/the-sub-in-me

That did not work SweetMaj

For all those present, here it is http://www.literotica.com/p/the-sub-in-me

Sorry about the SweetMaj I was just having fun with you

You know I love you really

Actually for some reason you got the [ / url ] inserted into the wrong place in your quote, if you know http scripting language it is easy to fix the link above in the quote should be active now.

Now I just saw TE99 fixed it.

 

[hottchic]

PS: SweetMaj, you can rely on Tom, Andy and I, you know we love you

 

[hottchic]

Here is my comment:

I gave you a 5*

Often short can be sweet.

PS: I wouldn't want to be a dom really but I might like to be a sub together with you LOL

 

[SweetMaj]

Here is my comment:

I gave you a 5*

Often short can be sweet.

PS: I wouldn't want to be a dom really but I might like to be a sub together with you LOL

Thank you so much

I would LOVE to be a sub together with you

 

[SweetMaj]

This link should work http://www.literotica.com/p/the-sub-in-me

Tank you

 

[SweetMaj]

New poem in the mix :

http://www.literotica.com/p/ dedicated-to-my-husband

 

[hottchic]

New poem in the mix :

http://www.literotica.com/p/dedicated-to-my-husband

Fixed now SweetMaj

The above link is now active LOL.

 

[SweetMaj]

Fixed now SweetMaj

The above link is now active LOL.

Thank you so much !!! When will I ever learn

Maybe next time

 

[hottchic]

Thank you so much !!! When will I ever learn

Maybe next time

Here is my comment

Alot of Love
The key thing for me is that the emotion is clear in your poetry.

Style in poerty is important, but I believe that emotion is more important

 

[hottchic]

Thank you so much !!! When will I ever learn

Maybe next time

Oh and here is a link to your other poem

http://www.literotica.com/p/relive-1

 

[SweetMaj]

Oh and here is a link to your other poem

http://www.literotica.com/p/relive-1

I LOVE YOU.

 

[hottchic]

I LOVE YOU.

here is my comment on your other poem:

Few words, much emotion
I am happy for you.

 

[SweetMaj]

here is my comment on your other poem:

Few words, much emotion
I am happy for you.

Thank you !!!

My poems are short. I like them that way. If they were longer they would loose

the emotions and sensitivity.

I'm proud of my poems !!! And I'm having a GREAT time writing.

Maybe I will write another one (at least five pages) - (Just kidding)

 

[TE999]

I enjoyed your poems, Maj. Brevity can speak volumes in the proper context.

 

[SweetMaj]

I enjoyed your poems, Maj. Brevity can speak volumes in the proper context.

Thank you

 

[Tarakin]

You opend your eyes and looked at me.
Though you coulden't speak, you were there.

opend and coulden't? Is this on purpose?

 

[SweetMaj]

You opend your eyes and looked at me.
Though you coulden't speak, you were there.

opend and coulden't? Is this on purpose?

Yes, it is on purpose. I don't follow - what is wrong with that ?

 

[Tarakin]

Yes, it is on purpose. I don't follow - what is wrong with that ?

I'm not a native speaker (I'm German), so I surely err, but shouldn't it be opened and couldn't?

 

[SweetMaj]

I'm not a native speaker (I'm German), so I surely err, but shouldn't it be opened and couldn't?

Yes it should. It's a miss spell

But it will get better in time !!!

 

[Tarakin]

Yes it should. It's a miss spell

But it will get better in time !!!

Ah, okay. I wondered if it may be a dialect or a rhetoric figure I didn't know

But, missspell or not, I like your poem