Assistance with Content Review of an entry for Mickey Spillane 2022 event

dmallord

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I have a Microsoft Word, 30K submission for the Ode to Mickey Spillane 2022 event. The first posting is due July 1. The story has all the noir characteristics of those Mike Hammer stories Spillane wrote. This one has elements of incest, race, death in abundance, and humor throughout.

The story has had a grammarian review by a Lit editor. From that perspective, it looks good.

I would appreciate a "second set of eyes" on the content and style elements before I send it off on July 1st.

This is my first event entry on Lit. I have several successful stories posted already here that seem to indicate I have some creative abilities and welcome your peer review of this story creation.
 
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