Asking for feedback

[Hcstuds]

I have a serial story available now. The name is 'A Girl Named Sam'. The first two chapters are posted and the third and final chapter is in final edit. The E-mail feedback is enough to make my head (upper) swell. Even if I am egotistical, I realize that I am not perfect. Positive and negative feedback will help my future works be better.

Thanks for any feedback you may have.