Asian Busty MILF in Tropical Paradise

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Hi all,

Would like to ask you all on your thoughts on the following story and see if there is anyone who would be keen to write it. Any other better plot suggestions would be really useful too

Protagonist description: An Asian Busty Young MILF suspects her Asian husband is having an affair behind her back. She is Asian, 25 yrs with one child. Shoulder-length hair, apple cheeks dimples and is rather petite at 5Ft. She however like all our Asian MILFs fantasies is blessed with a large rack, standing at 36D which makes her top heavy:


Her demeanor is shy like most Asians and was brought up in a strict conservative household. She is easily flattered and is rather naive, almost to the point of being an airhead. However, she has a wilder side that can be brought out by strong men whom she is attracted to.

Plot setup:

One day she finds out that her husband's air-ticket for his "supposedly" work trip to Bangkok is actually to a resort in Pattaya, the famed red light sleaze district in Thailand.

To catch him in the act, she secretly books a flight and hotel during the same period he was supposed to be there. When she arrives, she found out that he had changed his hotel booking and his cellphone was switched off, thus un-contactable.

She then prowl the streets looking for him. Her friends then recommended that she goes to the bars and she is horrified at the prospect. She is a decent woman brought up with Asian values, to be seen in the bar would be unthinkable. However, in order to find and confront her husband with evidence, she presses on.

Unfortunately, she was refused entry into a few various sleaze joints/bars, as only men and bar-girls are allowed. In order to fit in, she tries to dress like the bar girls and go to an outfit stall to purchase some similar(A short denim skirt and a brown halter top).


She gets wolf whistles and even seedy propositions but she tries to ignores it and is deeply embarrassed by some men's brazen advances. (Though she is flattered and secretly turned on by the attention.)

She keeps rejecting them and after a long fruitless search, she breaks down while in seedy bar after an altercation with a drunk man who molests her. She tries to run away but was unable to do so. She was however saved by 2 men who stepped in and protected her from the advances of the drunk.

To calm her nerves, the 2 men then offered to buy her a drink. But they of course have ulterior motives and is later known that the drunk that molested her was an accomplice of theirs.

Two men description: Both American caucasians. One is tall and lanky, the other is stocky and has a beer belly. They are in their 50s and are on holiday to pick up some hookers in Pattaya. Your typical dirty old men who are looking for a score and found this poor vulnerable asian lass in a seedy bar.

They talk to her, console her and ply her with drinks., all the while admiring her generous bosom from their vantage height since they are much taller than her

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I guess the idea is pretty run of the mill. Anyone has any ideas how I can twist this or make this more interesting and less predictable
 
She starts to pour her feelings to the men who listened attentively and slowly but surely, they win her trust. Without her knowing they ply her with more drinks and egg her to loosen up.

They offer her a joint but she refuses to their dismay. They suggest that perhaps its becos she is so uptight which caused her husband to stray. In her mind, she's thinking what the hell is she doing and reflects that since young, she has always been so uptight and not have any fun. after much egging, she took a few hits and her inhibitions start to melt away.

In a bid to get her to loosen up, the 2 men get their bar-girl friends to dance with her. and she gets reluctantly dragged onto the dance floor

The dance floor is filled with White/Black men and their thai bar girl counterparts. And the whole crowd is wildly dirty dancing. The drugs kick in and she goes into a trance-like stage, mimicking the dance moves as the thai bar girls start to teach her how to grind and dance. This is the first time for her and she learns to enjoy herself, letting the drugs kick in while the 2 men grin at each other evilly.

The girls have their hands stroking her up and down, touching her and making her turn on, making her dance even more seductively. The more sensual she dance, the more she attract the attention of the crowd as they see a voluptuous young woman, her breasts spilling out and she sweats...A shoulder strap falls and she doesn't even care, giving a "come fuck me look"
 
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The two men, unable to take it rush to her side and flank her: dancing with her along with the other bar girls who cat whistle and egg her to be more daring
 
mybustyasianmom, after reading your posts in this thread I am left wondering if you are writing a story, post by post, here?
 
You damn near got the story right here. You might as well write it. Just because you can't carry the plot now, doesn't mean you wont in a few days. I've barely touched any of mine in a few days, besides to try and put them here.
 
She's got a very nice pair of DSLs. I hope those figure prominently in the story.
 
The woman overhears one of the men in the bar talking about her. "She's got a great set of d s ls". He says. She is puzzled and comes up next to his side. ''What dsl"

He's shocked, but it is a bar with women that like to fuck for money, so anything goes. "Honey, it's about how beautiful you are. DSL means 'dick sucking lips'.
"It's about how lovely your little pouty lips are, and how they make me want to stick my cock between them."
And the other man says "Me too. I feel the same way, gorgeous."

The woman is shocked but still doesn't really understand. She sticks her thumb in her mouth and slowly moves it back and forth and licks on it. "You mean this sexy? I do it better?"

She licked her thumb then screwed it all the way down her throat then popped it own slowly, looking at them of course right in the eyes, innocently.
"I do this get you cock hard?"
 
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The woman overhears one of the men in the bar talking about her. "She's got a great set of d s ls". He says. She is puzzled and comes up next to his side. ''What dsl"

He's shocked, but it is a bar with women that like to fuck for money, so anything goes. "Honey, it's about how beautiful you are. DSL means 'dick sucking lips'.
"It's about how lovely your little pouty lips are, and how they make me want to stick my cock between them."
And the other man says "Me too. I feel the same way, gorgeous."

The woman is shocked but still doesn't really understand. She sticks her thumb in her mouth and slowly moves it back and forth and licks on it. "You mean this sexy? I do it better?"

She licked her thumb then screwed it all the way down her throat then popped it own slowly, looking at them of course right in the eyes, innocently.
"I do this get you cock hard?"

If I had to read a whole story where one character was doing the whole "Me fuck you long time" accent/dialect/whatever, I'm pretty sure I'd kill myself...

Aside from that, though, I like the gist.
 
If I had to read a whole story where one character was doing the whole "Me fuck you long time" accent/dialect/whatever, I'm pretty sure I'd kill myself...

Aside from that, though, I like the gist.
Lol I agree completely, it's just how they DO talk so we just have to fix that.

The second guy came up to the girl just as she popped the thumb out of her two little pouty lips and started to speak. He put one finger across the lips as if to shush her, then said.

"Honey, the only thing wrong with those perfect lips is the way you talk. Now we can help you fix that, but it'll cost you." And with that he put his thumb in her mouth. She sucked it the same slow, languid way, looking up at his eyes, and then took both her hands and started moving them up and down his arm, like it was a giant-

"Yeah, she's got to do better than 'Me fuck bam bam good okay.' Let's see, dollface, try saying this. "

'Hey, iron man. I'm polishing knobs today.'

The thumb came out of her mouth and the other man said "Shit, that's the dumbest thing I ever heard."

"Think so? Let's hear it out of those perfect lips, honey." They turned to look at her.

She looked at the two, thinking furiously. Her language skills had always held her back, that was true.

"You say it cost. What it cost?"
 
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Lol I agree completely, it's just how they DO talk so we just have to fix that.

The second guy came up to the girl just as she popped the thumb out of her two little pouty lips and started to speak. He put one finger across the lips as if to shush her, then said.

"Honey, the only thing wrong with those perfect lips is the way you talk. Now we can help you fix that, but it'll cost you." And with that he put his thumb in her mouth. She sucked it the same slow, languid way, looking up at his eyes, and then took both her hands and started moving them up and down his arm, like it was a giant-

"Yeah, she's got to do better than 'Me fuck bam bam good okay.' Let's see, dollface, try saying this. "



'Hey, iron man. I'm polishing knobs today.'

The thumb came out of her mouth and the other man said "Shit, that's the dumbest thing I ever heard."

"Think so? Let's hear it out of those perfect lips, honey." They turned to look at her.

She looked at the two, thinking furiously. Her language skills had always held her back, that was true.

"You say it cost. What it cost?"


Very nicely written. But as I said however I am struggling on the part on how do we ease her into losing her inhibiton without being too cliche. preferably start by making her do things against her conscience, where carnal pleasure starts to override her principals.

like a striptease but she doesn't shed her clothes, rather its her stripping her morals and inhibitions...one piece at a time till she descent into foul acts with the 2 or 3 men.
 
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Very nicely written. But as I said however I am struggling on the part on how do we ease her into losing her inhibiton without being too cliche. preferably start by making her do things against her conscience, where carnal pleasure starts to override her principals.

like a striptease but she doesn't shed her clothes, rather its her stripping her morals and inhibitions...one piece at a time till she descent into foul acts with the 2 or 3 men.

Good girl turned bad!

And here I've got her asking what the price is for enhancing her skills with words. But we don't even know about her other skills at this point. From the pictures, she doesn't look to have much in the way of inhibitions or principles. But I think she's a bad girl.

She definitely needs a spanking. Just for carrying those lips around.

:)
 
Good girl turned bad!

And here I've got her asking what the price is for enhancing her skills with words. But we don't even know about her other skills at this point. From the pictures, she doesn't look to have much in the way of inhibitions or principles. But I think she's a bad girl.

She definitely needs a spanking. Just for carrying those lips around.

:)

Yes, Spanking is always good...
 
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