Arouse me in Haiku

[OnaTangent]

Being simple minded I have always enjoyed the Japanese Haiku style of short poetry. Basically a poem of three lines consisting of 5, 7 and 5 syllables each.

A good way to convey erotic thoughts? Here is my first attempt...

Frosty grey dawn light...
Waking, close against her buns
His Fingers warm

More on Haiku...https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku

 

[Hornblende]

Limpid waters, where
I watch my fingers enter
softness, wetness, you...

 

[Deprived_in_AZ]

I guess you don't know
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