Argh!!! A Troll Got me!!!

[dwise80]

Both my first and second chapter got hit by a troll. Someone left an annonymous comment that was VERY negative and suggested nothing helpfull, or even objective.

Tis person also voted a big fat zero bringing my rating down more than .35 to almost 4.5 on each when I had (thankfully) been up- to almost 4.40.

I thought since I'm a greaty big newbie my first 2 chapters weren't that bad...

Please comment on this. I need a good suggestion of what I can do.

Thanks all
DW

Here they are chapter 1 + 2 of "The Horseman"

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=165676

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=165860