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bungakawa2000
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Yep, the site admins review every new story. Then, it's up to the original author to approve new additions to his stories.
A bunch of new stories were approved yesterday. Mine didn't go through, but yours might have.
Bunga
A bunch of new stories were approved yesterday. Mine didn't go through, but yours might have.
Bunga
bungakawa2000
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Well, try posting your story here along with the Chyoo guys comments, and we'll see how we can help...
Bunga
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DENIED
Here it is
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Joel: Nephew of the house owner, boyfriend to Amy
Amy: Boyfriend of Joel, ready to experiment
Mick: a single guy with a lot of interesting fetishes
Joel had to house sit his uncle's flat in the middle of Seattle. He’d been there for 2 weeks and he was getting a little tired of being alone. So he invited his best friend and girl friend over for the night. Mick had just turned 18 so grabbed copious amounts of booze for a good night's drinking. Amy arrived at 5:30, and the trio cracked open the first of many drinks and watched crappy TV for an hour or two.
"Are you all pissed now?" Joel suddenly asked
"We're too fuckin' pissed to change the channel" slurred Mick "that answer the question?"
"Same... come see this...” he pulled himself out of the chair. "Come on lazy fucks, its just over here” He lead them to the computer set up on the other side of the large TV room. "Look... at... these...” he said, opening up a folder. "There are about 10,000 porn movies!! I reckon uncle Nev is a bit of an internet entreprenuer! I found a load of webmaster stuff for a MASSIVE internet video site. And this isn't the same fuck over and over again; there is EVERY fetish under the sun in there. There’s stuff i didn't think was sexual. I’ll never look at a curtain rod the same ever again!" He looked round with a look in his eye “What do we wanna watch first?"
"Shit man, i don’t wanna watch porn, its dirty" said a semi disgusted mike.
"You just say that cos you don’t want us to know you watch it" giggled Amy.
"Fuggov" muttered Mick
"Let’s see... haw bout double penetration!!" Pronounced Joel in his best strip club voice
But Amy had a gleam in her eyes
"Let’s make it a game” Joel and mike stared at her. "We flip a coin. Heads, i pick the movie. Tails we flip again. Heads Joel picks, tails mike’s pick"
"You get a lotta picks that way” noted Joel
"Well, i am representing the female side of the species; I'm just keeping it balanced"
"OK, sold! I’m in, what about you, mike?" Mike looked troubled. He really wanted to browse this extensive list of movies, but it was really uncomfortable to do it in front of his friends. "Come on dude, we're not making porn, just watching it." Mike nodded his agreement resignedly
"Great!! Here's a coin, and FLIP!" Called Amy. *Ding*
you glance over to see the result...
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I got an automated response saying the spelling wasn't up to scratch, so i perfected it, but it kept getting knocked back
Here it is
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Joel: Nephew of the house owner, boyfriend to Amy
Amy: Boyfriend of Joel, ready to experiment
Mick: a single guy with a lot of interesting fetishes
Joel had to house sit his uncle's flat in the middle of Seattle. He’d been there for 2 weeks and he was getting a little tired of being alone. So he invited his best friend and girl friend over for the night. Mick had just turned 18 so grabbed copious amounts of booze for a good night's drinking. Amy arrived at 5:30, and the trio cracked open the first of many drinks and watched crappy TV for an hour or two.
"Are you all pissed now?" Joel suddenly asked
"We're too fuckin' pissed to change the channel" slurred Mick "that answer the question?"
"Same... come see this...” he pulled himself out of the chair. "Come on lazy fucks, its just over here” He lead them to the computer set up on the other side of the large TV room. "Look... at... these...” he said, opening up a folder. "There are about 10,000 porn movies!! I reckon uncle Nev is a bit of an internet entreprenuer! I found a load of webmaster stuff for a MASSIVE internet video site. And this isn't the same fuck over and over again; there is EVERY fetish under the sun in there. There’s stuff i didn't think was sexual. I’ll never look at a curtain rod the same ever again!" He looked round with a look in his eye “What do we wanna watch first?"
"Shit man, i don’t wanna watch porn, its dirty" said a semi disgusted mike.
"You just say that cos you don’t want us to know you watch it" giggled Amy.
"Fuggov" muttered Mick
"Let’s see... haw bout double penetration!!" Pronounced Joel in his best strip club voice
But Amy had a gleam in her eyes
"Let’s make it a game” Joel and mike stared at her. "We flip a coin. Heads, i pick the movie. Tails we flip again. Heads Joel picks, tails mike’s pick"
"You get a lotta picks that way” noted Joel
"Well, i am representing the female side of the species; I'm just keeping it balanced"
"OK, sold! I’m in, what about you, mike?" Mike looked troubled. He really wanted to browse this extensive list of movies, but it was really uncomfortable to do it in front of his friends. "Come on dude, we're not making porn, just watching it." Mike nodded his agreement resignedly
"Great!! Here's a coin, and FLIP!" Called Amy. *Ding*
you glance over to see the result...
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I got an automated response saying the spelling wasn't up to scratch, so i perfected it, but it kept getting knocked back
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