anyone want to...

[pinkcherry]

Co-write a poem? It can be erotic or non-erotic, any subject. I am curious to see the interplay of words and how each part connects. Serious replies only, please.

 

[HarryHill]

You don't know what you are in for
this has possibilities as a thread
lay a line and step aside
to see what else is said

 

[pinkcherry]

Cute, but I meant we would talk privately to write it first, then post it.

 

[HarryHill]

I'm sure you'll find plenty of takers
that private thing is sure to arouse
some interest in the menfolk here
and a few of the ladies

While you're talking, let me ask you,
how do you feel about hairy old men
that have a bent for sin?

 

[pinkcherry]

When it comes to men, I do not discriminate
Young, old, bald, hirsute
I would take them all on a date
As long as they want to taste the forbidden fruit
And don’t mind watching while I…
Alliterate!

 

[HarryHill]

Ah but, forbidden fruit is the sweetest they say
and a pinkcherry, tempting in itself, holds sway
tounges intent in imagined laps around the park
personal inclinations a secret in the dark night
but alliteration never beats penetration

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I vaguely remember I think it was The Fool and Angeline co-writing a poem (Sestina was it?) and the comments in here about the progress (and lack of) were hilarious

 

[bogusagain]

When it comes to men, I do not discriminate
Young, old, bald, hirsute
I would take them all on a date
As long as they want to taste the forbidden fruit
And don’t mind watching while I…
Alliterate!

let's make this journey, both young and old
you in search of adventure
I to regain lost youth
animal on animal, predator and prey
your body laid bare before me

your belly, will not be neglected
nor will I skip across it
not giving it full attention
but I would linger

for your empty plain possesses the crucible
the vessel in which I will pour the libation
and I would watch it spill
its rivulets pouring like blood
defining the curve of your flanks

there, in the centre of this featureless plain
the red liquid brims
and I would hover above it as in prayer
for this is the centre of you
for the moment the centre of my entire universe

and I would watch it gently rise and fall
I know the prize of possibilities
but for the moment I would contemplate
the pain of my anticipation

 

[Angeline]

let's make this journey, both young and old
you in search of adventure
I to regain lost youth
animal on animal, predator and prey
your body laid bare before me

your belly, will not be neglected
nor will I skip across it
not giving it full attention
but I would linger

for your empty plain possesses the crucible
the vessel in which I will pour the libation
and I would watch it spill
its rivulets pouring like blood
defining the curve of your flanks

there, in the centre of this featureless plain
the red liquid brims
and I would hover above it as in prayer
for this is the centre of you
for the moment the centre of my entire universe

and I would watch it gently rise and fall
I know the prize of possibilities
but for the moment I would contemplate
the pain of my anticipation

Better put this one somewhere safe. It's a real keeper.

 

[bogusagain]

Better put this one somewhere safe. It's a real keeper.

Really?

Marvellous. I've been trying all week to write a decent poem and then I write a throwaway one and......

Not that I'm complaining.

Well, I am but only at the irony of it.

 

[Angeline]

Really?

Marvellous. I've been trying all week to write a decent poem and then I write a throwaway one and......

Not that I'm complaining.

Well, I am but only at the irony of it.

Usually works that way for me.

 

[HarryHill]

Better put this one somewhere safe. It's a real keeper.

No lie.

 

[pinkcherry]

Henry, you are bent for sin.
everyone, thanks for posting.

 

[HarryHill]

Henry, you are bent for sin.
everyone, thanks for posting.

..
how soon they forget my name after Bogus drops one like that....
I am bent ...a little; how do you feel about leftward facing phalluses?

 

[Angeline]

..
how soon they forget my name after Bogus drops one like that....
I am bent ...a little; how do you feel about leftward facing phalluses?

does that mean you're right-balled?

[sorry, could not resist!]

 

[bogusagain]

..
how soon they forget my name after Bogus drops one like that....
I am bent ...a little; how do you feel about leftward facing phalluses?

Sorry Harry, I didn't mean to muscle in on your territory.

I never meant to reduce Dirty Harry to a Dear Henry.

 

[greenmountaineer]

Really?

Marvellous. I've been trying all week to write a decent poem and then I write a throwaway one and......

Not that I'm complaining.

Well, I am but only at the irony of it.

Yes, really. It was really, really good.

 

[pinkcherry]

Good one, Angeline. You guys are a jovial bunch.

 

[todski28]

Are we looking at a duel over fair maidens hand, or is that to poetic......

I for one would be interested in seeing that hahaha

 

[HarryHill]

bogusagain: Sorry Harry, I didn't mean to muscle in on your territory.

I never meant to reduce Dirty Harry to a Dear Henry.

No problem, dear Bogus, help yourself.
..
Remember folks, keep those private message coming in.
''

Angeline: does that mean you're right-balled?

..
I'm ambi-balled

 

[Angeline]

Good one, Angeline. You guys are a jovial bunch.

Stick around. We're silly but we have fun and sometimes we even write decent poems.

 

[HarryHill]

Are we looking at a duel over fair maidens hand, or is that to poetic......

I for one would be interested in seeing that hahaha

..
More like a pissing contest... equipment is everything

 

[butters]

Better put this one somewhere safe. It's a real keeper.

i would have to agree. has its own truth and a natural elegance.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

Marvellous. I've been trying all week to write a decent poem and then I write a throwaway one and......

Not that I'm complaining.

Well, I am but only at the irony of it.

Usually works that way for me.

Me three! How is it that this happens?

I love, love, love that piece, bogus.

 

[pinkcherry]

Nice to see everyone chatting here. So, does anyone have a topic for a poem?