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[TomSully025]

Hi Writers,

My name is Dorian and I'm the writer of Stolen Innocence, Chapter One. If you haven't read it, the story is about a sexy cheerleader, Bianca who gets dared to go out on a date with her neighbor. When Bianca arrives at his house, however, she discovers her neighbor is a monstrous man and things end up going too far. This story has gotten a lot of positive feedback and I’m interested in making it into a series. Anyone interested in collaborating?

Future Chapters:

Chapter Two: Bianca Begins Her Next Life
- Bianca begins to life at Mr. Donovan’s house, trapped by her embarrassment and a video tape of the previous night. But things get even worse when Mr. Donovan forces Bianca to have sex with his eighteen year old son, who is far more monstrous than his father.

Chapter Three: New Life At School

- Bianca begins to publicly date Vlad, Mr. Donovan’s son, as a cover for sleeping with his father. But when Vlad begins to fail Chemistry Mr. Donvoan forces Bianca to sleep with Vlad’s teacher for better grades.

Chapter Four: Mr. Donovan and Jaimie
- When Mr. Donovan sees a picture of Jaimie, Bianca’s best friend, on Facebook, he has to have her. Bianca tricks Jaimie into going out on a blind date with Mr. Donovan, and like Bianca, Jaimie is amazed by Mr. Donovan’s skills in bed.

Chapter Five: Competition
- When Jaimie begins coming over to Mr. Donovan’s house on her own accord, Bianca begins to feel strangely jealous. Could she be developing feelings for her monstrous captor, or is she obsessed with the sex? After a steamy threesome, Mr. Donovan has to make a choice…

So that’s just the basic ideas. Anyone interested in collaborating? It could be awesome fun!

Sully
tomsullivan025@gmail.com

 

[DeeZire]

Here's a repost of a thread I started a while back, (to a thundering round of indifference.) Notice, in the article, the original author talks about how each succeeding contributer puts their own spin on the story, adding characters, killing characters off, basically, making the story their own. This kind of an approach might be more appealing to prospective LIT authors.

http://www.npr.org/templates/story/s...ryId=125129414

quote from the article:

Writing a book is usually a solitary occupation, but when David Corbett was asked to work on a serial thriller, the opportunity was too good to pass up. The story would be a collaboration among 22 writers; one person would set the action in motion, then hand it off to another writer who would add a new chapter, taking the plot in new directions.

Corbett would be working with some of the best writers in the business, but when it was his turn to write, he says, he realized the format of the story would drastically change the way he wrote.

"Normally as a writer you start out doing the background on all of your characters, you do all of your research," Corbett says. "And it's a living, breathing thing in a lot of ways, in your unconscious before you even begin. Here, here you're sort of like given building blocks."

The article continues, and there is an excerpt of the book at the link.

Personally, I wouldn't want to get involved with your story, mainly because of the old adage "write what you know". I know exactly zero about cheerleaders, other than the fact that they sometimes smell like sun tan oil, and they have very well-developed calves.
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[TomSully025]

Agreed

Yeah, I agree. Each author will put their own spin on the story, but what I provided is just the base lines for where I think the series could go. Hahaha. And yes, although we all don't know about cheerleaders, we all can relate to wanting someone we knew we could never have. This is a story about one man who got exactly what he wanted...

 

[Katyusha]

Do I know you or do lots of writers just like the name Dorian? Or is that your actual name?

*serious curiosity, I'm not making fun of you, although if I do know you you might not know me...

 

[TomSully025]

Hahaha nahh

Hahahah, nope. Just an internet name,

 

[shaw9090]

sequel??

when are you posting the sequel???