Handley_Page
Draco interdum Vincit
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Oh it was sent back to me. Paragraphs too big and not separating the speech into paragraphs. Hopefully a quick fix and resubmit. It’s my first story so I keep checking for when it’s going live.
Don't be afraid to search for an editor![]()
Or a couple of Beta Readers to give it a spin.