Nasha Really Experienced Joined Sep 16, 2006 Posts 173 May 22, 2007 #1 I'm not really looking for substantive editing, but the chapter could no doubt use a fresh pair of eyes to catch typos and such. The chapter is just under 9k words, and the sex centers on an MMF threesome with light bondage.
I'm not really looking for substantive editing, but the chapter could no doubt use a fresh pair of eyes to catch typos and such. The chapter is just under 9k words, and the sex centers on an MMF threesome with light bondage.
G Guest Guest May 22, 2007 #2 Nasha said: I'm not really looking for substantive editing, but the chapter could no doubt use a fresh pair of eyes to catch typos and such. The chapter is just under 9k words, and the sex centers on an MMF threesome with light bondage. Click to expand... I am no expert, but I can try to help if you wish. Maharat Last edited by a moderator: May 22, 2007
Nasha said: I'm not really looking for substantive editing, but the chapter could no doubt use a fresh pair of eyes to catch typos and such. The chapter is just under 9k words, and the sex centers on an MMF threesome with light bondage. Click to expand... I am no expert, but I can try to help if you wish. Maharat
Nasha Really Experienced Joined Sep 16, 2006 Posts 173 May 24, 2007 #3 maharat48 said: I am no expert, but I can try to help if you wish. Maharat Click to expand... Hi, Maharat. Thanks for the kind offer, but I've already been helped out. -Nasha
maharat48 said: I am no expert, but I can try to help if you wish. Maharat Click to expand... Hi, Maharat. Thanks for the kind offer, but I've already been helped out. -Nasha
