Anyone have time to give me a quick edit?

[sophia jane]

I wrote my first BDSM story- it's just a stroke piece, not too long, but my normal editor is in the middle of alot of RL stuff, so I'm on my own with this story. Anyone care to give it a quick read and look for grammar problems, plot and character issues, etc? Since it's just a stroke piece, it doesn't require much, but I'd really love another pair of eyes before I submit it.

Thanks bunches.

Feel free to threadjack away.

 

[impressive]

Trade ya a read for my Halloween story.

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

If you want more than one pair of eyes, I'd be happy to help.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

I wrote my first BDSM story- it's just a stroke piece, not too long, but my normal editor is in the middle of alot of RL stuff, so I'm on my own with this story. Anyone care to give it a quick read and look for grammar problems, plot and character issues, etc? Since it's just a stroke piece, it doesn't require much, but I'd really love another pair of eyes before I submit it.

Thanks bunches.

Feel free to threadjack away.

If softy's AWOL I'd love to help - even if scared.

A sneak preview at an SJ stroke would be a joy. Eric, I didn't mean it.

Serious, if I can be any help, would love to try.

Be my first edit though - I'm a virgin!!!!

 

[sophia jane]

Thanks guys! Y'all are the best.

Elfin- Softy's actually read it and given it the green light; he just didn't have time to edit because of some personal stuff. And I was too impatient to wait till he has time.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Thanks guys! Y'all are the best.

Elfin- Softy's actually read it and given it the green light; he just didn't have time to edit because of some personal stuff. And I was too impatient to wait till he has time.

If you think I can be gentle wiv ya and show ya a good time, I'd be more than willin' to help.

Seriously, especially if ST has given it the once over - if you want some of the boring stuff done, I'm ya girl.

 

[Quiet_Cool]

I'd offer, but I can't really say much about BDSM. If you want a literary once-over, I'll get in line though.

Q_C