Anyone have a bit of time?

[Magickalgirl]

Hello! I just wrote my first story, it's Nonconsent/Reluctance oriented and I'd love some feedback. I feel that it may be too longwinded and that the sexual stuff is too short and has no build, so to speak. Hoping you can help and so grateful that this opportunity to learn from others is provided by Literotica!
Would you mind taking a look and giving me your feedback? I'd really appreciate it!
Jen

** I have requested help over a dozen times through the Editors List and the forms provided to contact them... I have got no response and no copy was sent to my email as requested thru the form. Is the Exitors List just a hopeful ploy? Is it temporarily down? Has it always been so broken?

 

[sr71plt]

Category and wordage?

 

[Magickalgirl]

Category and wordage?

Category NonConsent/Reluctance... I wrote it with the Word app, so no word count, but is single spaced four pages, 12 font.

 

[RunningJib]

Message sent

PM sent

 

[sdsioux]

story

If you provide a link and want an opinion I can help you