Anyone available?

[professionalpervert]

Long time reader, First time author.
Looking to make some connections with other authors and get some advice on my stories.

 

[sr71plt]

There's such a wide range of genres and preferences here that you'll need to be more forthcoming than that on what you want to write.

 

[professionalpervert]

Oh I didn't think of that.
Well I want to write a series of stories with a taboo theme.
I know it's not everyone's cup of tea. It's any help I can get, structure, style, grammar... ect.
I'm a university graduate, so my grammar and punctuation are pretty good, but any help is good help.

 

[sr71plt]

Need to keep on thinking. Straight, lesbian, bisexual, or gay male?

 

[professionalpervert]

Taboo, straight, lesbian.

 

[laptopwriter]

still...

not very forthcoming. Do you have a story you're working on? Can you be a little more specific? As SR said, there are a ton of different genres and another ton of sub categories. Give us a little sense of what floats your boat.

 

[professionalpervert]

It's a taboo family. The mother is in bed with her sister and seduces her son to join them. I want to expand on it to include the sister, mother, dad, ect...

 

[laptopwriter]

Okay, just as a general plot line,

I would have the two sisters making it when they're discovered by the daughter who convinces a reluctant mother to let her join them. Then the daughter divulges she has been screwing her brother and wants him to join the three of them. The mother is against it but her sister seduces him with the daughter. Once the mother sees the 3-some she wants to join in.
They're getting scared because hubby is getting suspicious that something is going on so the sister seduces him. By the end of the story the entire family is on board.

It's not my kind of story but I think you need some twists and turns, keep the reader guessing.

 

[professionalpervert]

Nice ideas,
It's the age difference between the younger siblings that I'm writing around at the moment. I was going to introduce a gay male component with the son/dad (since mother and daughter are going for it, it seems ride not to do the male counterpart) but I get the feeling not a whole lot of people like that?

 

[StrangeLife]

By the end of the story the entire family is on board.

Except for the dog - mustn't do that on Lit

I was going to introduce a gay male component with the son/dad (since mother and daughter are going for it, it seems ride not to do the male counterpart) but I get the feeling not a whole lot of people like that?.

You should worry less about what people may or may not like and concentrate on what you want to write. After all your only "salary" is the joy of writing.

Besides there is an audience for any story out there - regardless of how weird it is.

 

[MrFoxwood]

Nice ideas,
It's the age difference between the younger siblings that I'm writing around at the moment. I was going to introduce a gay male component with the son/dad (since mother and daughter are going for it, it seems ride not to do the male counterpart) but I get the feeling not a whole lot of people like that?

You really shouldn't avoid writing an element of a story just because you're worried that some readers potentially won't like it. It's your story and you should write whatever you damn well please. I've had complaints that I had one of my characters smoking, some people will complain about the moat trivial of details even when they are quite clearly a necessary part of the story.

 

[lovecraft68]

Nice ideas,
It's the age difference between the younger siblings that I'm writing around at the moment. I was going to introduce a gay male component with the son/dad (since mother and daughter are going for it, it seems ride not to do the male counterpart) but I get the feeling not a whole lot of people like that?

Okay a little warning here.

Whether it is right or wrong there is a double standard with GM sex. Mom daughter? That will usually go over fine with the incest crowd, sister/brother mom/son dad/daughter all good.

You get into Father/son you will lose a lot of readers and also now run the risk of the story ending up in Gay male and not incest, because it seems GM sex trumps even incest in the realm of what a reader will accept "out of category"

So my suggestion? If you want an all inclusive family orgy? Do it in chapters and post the Father/son chapter in GM, the site will do it anyway. But this way the reader sees where it went and can choose whether or not they want to read it and not have it "dropped" on them.

 

[lovecraft68]

Long time reader, First time author.
Looking to make some connections with other authors and get some advice on my stories.

You don;t have your private messaging activated so Click on my profile. My yahoo address is in it.

If you want you can either e-mail me or send me an instant message(I will be online most of the day while editing a long project) I'd be happy to discuss your ideas and help out if I can.

 

[patientlee]

Okay a little warning here.

Whether it is right or wrong there is a double standard with GM sex. Mom daughter? That will usually go over fine with the incest crowd, sister/brother mom/son dad/daughter all good.

You get into Father/son you will lose a lot of readers and also now run the risk of the story ending up in Gay male and not incest, because it seems GM sex trumps even incest in the realm of what a reader will accept "out of category"

So my suggestion? If you want an all inclusive family orgy? Do it in chapters and post the Father/son chapter in GM, the site will do it anyway. But this way the reader sees where it went and can choose whether or not they want to read it and not have it "dropped" on them.

From a reader's point-of-view:

If you're going with chapters, and one chapter will be in GM, make sure that if the reader skips the chapter, that they won't miss any of the forward motion of the plot. Also make sure that you tell them ahead of time, maybe in a note at the end of the previous chapter and repeated at the beginning of the chapter in question.

Good luck!

 

[lovecraft68]

From a reader's point-of-view:

If you're going with chapters, and one chapter will be in GM, make sure that if the reader skips the chapter, that they won't miss any of the forward motion of the plot. Also make sure that you tell them ahead of time, maybe in a note at the end of the previous chapter and repeated at the beginning of the chapter in question.

Good luck!

Good additional point there. Glad someone's awake this morning

 

[patientlee]

Good additional point there. Glad someone's awake this morning

My boys play hockey. I've been up since 5.

 

[sr71plt]

Since you're new (OP) and I don't see that anyone's mentioned it before, want to make sure you know that any character engaging in sex on stories posted to Literotica have to be demonstrably 18 or over.

 

[lovecraft68]

Since you're knew (OP) and I don't see that anyone's mentioned it before, want to make sure you know that any character engaging in sex on stories posted to Literotica have to be demonstrably 18 or over.

He knows, he has another thread asking about role playing and people warned him in that one.

So how exactly do you go about being "knew" here?

Sorry, couldn't resist. You using some type of auto correct?

 

[professionalpervert]

You don;t have your private messaging activated so Click on my profile. My yahoo address is in it.

If you want you can either e-mail me or send me an instant message(I will be online most of the day while editing a long project) I'd be happy to discuss your ideas and help out if I can.

That would be great.
Sorry, I'm Australian, it was getting late I needed to head to bed. May I ask, how do you turn on private messages?

 

[xelliebabex]

That would be great.
Sorry, I'm Australian, it was getting late I needed to head to bed. May I ask, how do you turn on private messages?

Hi

You turn on private messaging by going to your user CP which is on the top left of screen. Choose the edit options link and click the box that says enable private messaging.

I am Australian too so happy to have a chat about writing and stuff.