Any input appreciated - 6th entry in series

[dlake]

Hello everyone,

I just finished the latest entry in what turned out to be a series.

It started out as two friends discovering masturbation together. As things progressed, things got a little crazier. New characters were introduced, a local adult bookstore was involved, and the newest chapter has a little bit of incest.

I've been trying to wrap things up a bit so that I can write new stories. I tried to escalate things and include some elements from previous entries with the hope that I can take a breather and come back to it at a later date.

If any of you have the time, I'd appreciate some input.

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-jack-off-sessions-ch-06

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I'm impressed with the quality of your prose. Its better than 99% of whats on LIT.


I didn't read the whole story, just enough to get a sense of your talent and skills.


Go for the gusto!

 

[dlake]

Thanks. I appreciate that.

 

[dlake]

Anyone else have any feedback. I'd really appreciate it.