Another newbie hooked on feedback!

[Nathan11Spears]

So I sit down in front of my computer after a hard day at work, check my e-mail, and see I've got fifteen brand-spanking new messages. Now, I should tell you, in my five years of being online I've never, ever, got fifteen new messages in a day. I figure the worst: my anti-spam software has broken down and the deluge of "free" credit, insurance offers, and penis enlargement ads have begun.

Boy, was I wrong.

Apparently the good people at Literotica.com have posted my story, "Lust in the Library" –the first story I've ever contributed-- and 15 new, beautiful messages are the result!

Feedback is like oxygen to a writer, especially an unpublished one like me, so the praise and ‘spicy' suggestions I've received have reignited my passion... for the craft of writing! I may not be able to incorporate all of the suggestions and comments I've received –some of them contradict each other-- but I do appreciate each and every one.

To Laurel and all the good readers at Literotica.com --anonymous or not-- thank you! And if anyone reading this would care to offer their comments and/or criticism on my first story, I welcome those too.

Nathan

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=62782

 

[gaigirl]

Great job

What a hot story! I sincerely hope it is to be continued. I remember getting my first feedback too. Being new to the "system" I was not aware that my story had been accepted until the feedback started flowing. I can't offer any suggestions, and usually I am ruthless when asked for feedback.

You definitely aced your classes!

 

[Chantal Marchon]

Great story- the only thing I could find wrong with it -technically speaking was the use of extra letters in words.

Although I can certainly undersatnd why you wrote it that way and it makes sense, it isn't technically correct.

The story itself is very hot with good imagery and descriptive word usage.

 

[SilentLady]

Whew

Fantastic. . I do hope that you continue the story. I will certainly be checking back to see what you have planned for the two or for the librarian herself. .

Keep it up. .

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