Anonymous Feedback

[Ginger_grl]

I just wanted to thank the anonymous writer for their feedback to one of my poems, 'Your Words' http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=89462;

'Your work has potential, but in general it needs to be tightened up and the extra words removed.'

If you had left your e-mail address I would have sent my thanks to you personally. I appreciate your comments and take them on board.

My poetry is by no means of the calibre of some of the poets I have read on this site. They have been my personal possessions for many years and only recently have I ventured out to show them to others.

Any comments, criticisms or praise I value highly and will accept graciously I hope.

 

[Rybka]

De Sade - Please Note the Above Post!

It was I. Check out today's "new poems" post. And don't take the words of a grumpy fish too hard.
Also, never worry about "votes" on Literotica. They have a tendency to evaporate over time. Number of reads is a better indicator (but quality is only one factor affecting that).

Keep writing! And if you want more feedback, then post a poem on this board and request comments.

Regards,                                 Rybka

 

[Ginger_grl]

Re: De Sade - Please Note the Above Post!

It was I. Check out today's "new poems" post. And don't take the words of a grumpy fish too hard.
Also, never worry about "votes" on Literotica. They have a tendency to evaporate over time. Number of reads is a better indicator (but quality is only one factor affecting that).

Keep writing! And if you want more feedback, then post a poem on this board and request comments.

Regards,                                 Rybka

Thanks again Rybka. I read yours and voted and that is exactly what I mean about the calibre on here. Oh well, I'll plod on and see where it takes me.