Annonymous

[sr71plt]

I'd like to thank "anonymous," who has been reading through my backlist and sending me a very nice (and insightful) anonymous e-mail every day--which starts my day off on the sunny side.

 

[SweetWitch]

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About the submission: A Little Human Decency Ch. 06
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

great story with no sex just perfect

Thanks, Anon.

 

[jomar]

I shake my raised fist at your one bomb that stole an H, ya bastid!!!

 

[jomar]

I shake my raised fist at your one bomb that stole an H, ya bastid!!!

Again!?!

 

[oggbashan]

Someone likes British English...

Feedback received today.

This message contains feedback for: oggbashan
About the submission: Nursery Santa
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Thank you. After years of reading submissions from so called writers, finally, finding one who is able to spell and use grammar correctly is a delight.

It might not be Christmas, but thank you Anonymous.

Og

 

[oggbashan]

And now I've received a very long rant from anonymous, who thinks that my fiction is seditious...

Here is a sample extract from the pages of feedback:

The Feminine Sexual Revolution is a horrific conspiracy designed to destroy the Family unit within this nation, by forces on this world that are EVIL beyond anything you could possibly imagine. This engineered conspiracy has succeeded well beyond what they originally projected, as is evidenced by the monumental destruction of Marriages ending in divorce and often spread to the children of these shattered unions, when they become adults. There are elements of mind programming involved in this that have levels of sophistication you could hardly imagine.


Og

 

[jomar]

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About the submission: A Good Marriage
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

The chapter number goes in the title, so people know this BEFORE THEY OPEN THE FUCKING THING, ASSHOLE! Therefore, this got an automatic rating of 1.

So I forgot to put "chapter one" in the title. It was at the top of the page, though.

Yes, I have plunged headfirst into...Loving Wives.

 

[SweetWitch]

Some was good, some wasn't
09/17/09 By: Anonymous
You are skilled and capable of writing a good story. However you need more research on your facts, and I do not think that your characters behave in a believable manner. She is too damaged to ever get it right. The damage was done while she was young and it isn't likely to change for the better. He is too egocentric to take no for an answer and is just making an ass out of himself because he isn't comfortable with any kind of failure in his life. He plays head games with her and eventually breaks her resolve even though it is obvious that she is not able to form healthy relationships. The treatment for "compartment syndrome" is a faciotomy where they basically slice the appendage open so that I looks like a burst wiener that has been boiled too long. I leaves a huge scar and takes months to heal because it is never sutured together. Just my opinion though. anon jerry

Uh, dude...you realize this is fiction, right? Facts ain't got nothin' to do with it.

 

[SweetWitch]

Go girl....
09/17/09 By: Anonymous
It isn't often that a story is written where the woman resorts to physica violence, but it is obviously an emotion that the men can identify with. It made for an interesting perspective. When everything else has failed the violence just bubbles to the surface. I rated your story the better of the two. anon jerry

Thanks. Just to let you know, men don't have a corner on the market for "lashing out".

 

[SweetWitch]

Name one good quality that Niko has.......
09/18/09 By: Anonymous
Arrogant, childish, selfish, petulent, olfish, insensitive, clueless, narrow minded, selfcentered, ass bag. Would any woman put up with this from ANY man? If this is what passes for romance to a woman then she deserves to be with that kind of person. The writing is well done but the story line is making it difficult to keep reading. anon jerry

Well, duh. I patterned him after a Greek that I once dated. The man was quick to point out his fits of jealousy and temper were typical in his culture. He settled down eventually, though. Just needed to be humbled a bit.

 

[SweetWitch]

Your waste your talent
09/18/09 By: Anonymous
Love will fix everything, they will live happily ever after. He is one dimensional and as soon as she gets sexually excited her IQ drops 50 points. I cannot tolerate any more of this predictible drivel, I quit. anon jerry

Aw, that's too bad. You only made it to chapter 7. Chapter 8 is when the story gets juicy.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

One wonders how some of their guy's mothers dress them in the morning

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Arrrr me bucko!
10/01/09 By: Anonymous in way past yer yardarms
but shiver me timbers lass, WTF was that all about?

Delete the above comment.

It's called venacular. Can you say, Ven-Ac-U-Lar? Now run along and enjoy your Mickey Mouse cartoons and leave the Big People alone.

HUH?
10/01/09 By: Anonymous in USA
Thsi should have been labeled as non-erotic instead of erotic horror. Where was the eroticism?

Delete the above comment.

You mean where was the dirty parts? They're in your knickers. They're call SKID MARKS, you moron.

 

[Isid]

not so anonymous

but that was that was a good story

 

[sr71plt]

Ven-ac-u-lar? Sure I can pronounce it. Of course, it isn't a word.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Interesting what I'm getting today

Gifts from the Heart
11/13/09 by Anonymous in Australia
Gifts from the Heart are the best gifts to give, they don't cost a bundle, they are given freely and the joy on the face of the receipient is your return gift. May you and yours be blessed. Thanks for a very good moving story of lifelong love that endured to their end. Regards Jewellee Australia

Yes, Jewellee, that's very true. And thank you for the lovely comment.

 

[sr71plt]

It's more what you were giving yesterday. It's just too too funny to make a fuss over a word--and then to misspell it.

 

[jman_bigdaddy]

queston to literotica readers etc

why do you literotica people suck so much. I have been posting stuff here for a while and it isn't that i hate critique but the shit you peple complain about sucks. For one is morality, ok sure.. Last time i checked this is an erotic story site and as long as rape or under age stuff isn't involved moral is out the window. I'll admit that my writing isn't the best thing ever but i have yet to see a single comment or feedback from here that makes any sense. Nothing on plot lines etc just a bunch of idiots who need to log off and watch cartoons since they have morality issues. On the other side i also post stuf on another site and feedback & comments from there are actually useful so even though i have a current story submitted for the hoiday contest you can all suck my ******* contest or not you all need to gow a pair and realize that this is an erotic story site not **** bugs bunny!!!

 

[sr71plt]

why do you literotica people suck so much.

Why do you lump everyone at Literotica in a generalization like this? Talk about sucking.

If you can't take the good with the bad and even the irrelevant at Lit., perhaps you'd be better not posting stories here. The site gives you the power to delete any comments on your story that you don't like for whatever reason you don't like them. And you can freeze both the comments and the votes on your stories.

So, suck it up and get a better attitude or move to the other site you think is better. Your framing of your comment makes me, for one, not to care jack shit for your "plight."

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

It's more what you were giving yesterday. It's just too too funny to make a fuss over a word--and then to misspell it.

Bite me SR. If you go back and read it's phonetic for the poor child.

 

[sr71plt]

Bite me SR. If you go back and read it's phonetic for the poor child.

Umm, no it's not. The proper word is "vernacular" (ver-nac-u-lar), and the "r" is pronounced.

This appears to be like much of your writing advice--you don't know what you're talking about and you don't look it up (even when you are called on it), but you don't hesitate to act like it's gospel.

Bite yourself.

And in this case it really was funny for you to go bitchy on the commenter in this way.

 

[oggbashan]

Not from Anonymous:

Are you aware of the traditions of Glastonbury? I think a real erotic story about Mary, mother of Jesus, maybe getting pregged by her Uncle, Joseph of Arimathea, would be an excellent addition to the Loving Wives stories in Literotica? Also you could write one about Jesus before He went into His ministry in Palestine, when he was mining Tin ore in England, about his possible fathering a Druid queen in Britain?

But why should I want to write such stories? Apart from wanting to annoy the Loving Wives readers, Christians, Tin miners and Druids.

Og

 

[jman_bigdaddy]

sorry

i would like to say sorry for my earlier post about bad comments etc. I do appreciate and welcome feedback good and bad but the problem i had with a few comments wasn't that. They didn't make sense and were very vauge at best. I use feedack and comments to make future works better so that is why i don't like coments like the ones i complained about. In any event i love being on Literotica and appreciate anyone who takes time from their day to veiw my work.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Never mind.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

OMG. Now I have to kill myself

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This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Having read some of your work I have come to the conclusion that you have a very sick, warped mind and seem to be obsessed with horror stories - your work shows a lot of hatred for people.

For an avid reader you certainly have a fabulous insight into my body of writing. You selected to read the only two or three horror stories I've ever written in my life, then chose to extend your stupid thoughts on those few stories over all 45 I have posted here.

Congrats. You win the Fucking Idiot of the Year Award for 2009.

Now go back to your comic books and leave the big people alone.