Annonymous

[FallingToFly]

So tired...
08/14/06 by Anonymous in USA
Please put this story out of its misery quickly. So draggy and boring.

I left them a comment in return... it was even a nice one.

 

[Aurora Black]

Feedback on Julia:

A very nice start
08/14/06 by Anonymous in UK
You have a real quality to your style of writing - I'm looking forward to your next chapters.

Thank you so much, and I'm looking forward to writing more.

 

[FallingToFly]

08/16/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Listen, I think this story is going places! I can't tell how long I waited to read this latest installment! I simply love this story! Great characters and funny situations! Keep it up! Ignore those first two comments!

Well thank you darling...

I do fully intend to keep right on trucking with this story.

 

[Aurora Black]

Anon was very generous yesterday. Thank you.

Julia Ch. 01

Comments:

Intriguing opening chapter. I am looking forward to seeing where the story goes as more chapters come forth.


I Love You, I Hate You

Comments:

I am not usually one to read poetry but the title caught my attention. So true, so true. I think I will add poetry back to my reading list!


Whispers

Comments:

As said in previous comment, poetry has been outside my usual reading habits but I am finding your poetry speaks to parts of my own life, capturing feelings and thoughts I have felt at various times throughout my life. "Whispers" hits a chord. I will keep reading if you keep writing.

 

[Tom Collins]

This message contains feedback for: TomNJus
About the submission: When Irish Eyes Are Smiling Ch. 02
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

I really enjoyed this story. When can we expect the next installment...surely
you aren't going to just leave it here

Part three is currently being edited, and we're writing part four right now.

And thanks for enjoying the story, Mr/Ms A.

 

[Black Tulip]

I just spotted this comment today on "When the eagle flies".

college
By: Anonymous
I believe we attend the same university

Dear Anonymous,

I take that as a compliment.
But, as I'm living outside the United States, I'm afraid it's impossible.

 

[Stella_Omega]

I got an odd one this morning emailed anonymously but signed;

I am "Dragonteacher". You will know what that means as I was reading one of your short stories and wrote a review.
Dean

Dear Dean, I can't find your review on any of my stories....

 

[Darkniciad]

:: sigh :: First, the unavoidable 1 bomb ( #1 on the humor toplist by several tenths, while still in the new list, guranteed bomb target ) then this 3, on LST3K.

Very good for a first shot
08/19/06 By: Anonymous
there is definite potential here for a great series. The main reason why I didn't findit that funny was because of the lack of risk taking when you made jokes. You let way too many ripe lines pass by. What of the most funniest comments you can make is when you're not even commenting on the movie, but like on the show, acting as if you're a character in the story.

That said, I used to do these and would like to try again, so if you wouldn't mind I'd like to send a story to you with my comments on it. Since I don't have an account it would be up to you to submit it or not. But I would really like to try. you'l be hearing from me soon. Perhaps I could be Tom.

I think I kept a good cadence with the comments. If you break down every line, or drone out the original story with huge blocks of commentary, it defeats the format IMO. This isn't like a movie where you still have things moving while you comment, the comments break up the story. If you overdo it, the story doesn't move.

Feel free to send me your commentary on a story, but I will only post things that the original author has given me permission to spoof, and when they have reviewed ( and approved ) the finished spoof before posting. They also have to be unpublished, or published on Lit.

I am looking for other people to jump in with me, because I do feel the whole thing would have been stronger with additional riffers. That's why I asked for them in the intro.

As to Tom, I won't use any of the actual MST names. Until a decent set of characters can be cobbled together, there probably won't be any names at all.

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Maybe it's just because the score is swirlin' down into the toilet, or I'm paranoid, but this almost sounds like a blackmail letter

 

[Aurora Black]

Maybe it's just because the score is swirlin' down into the toilet, or I'm paranoid, but this almost sounds like a blackmail letter

This is yet another case of people taking things way too seriously.

 

[Darkniciad]

And then a few seconds later, I check my page again, and lo n' behold...

OK maybe I didn't read the begining comments close enough because I was caught completely by surprise at the ending. That was great! Zoraster's pecular prefences and twisted nature make more sense; altho he's still the bad guy, it starts to show how his madness started. You are so good at story telling and writing!!! I'm growing fond of your "world" and it's characters. Can't wait to see what else happens to these people.....the Danica series in general is the best I've read (or seen even) in years. Thankyou!!

Now that'll brighten yer day!

I've always loved Ebon Genesis, much like Home by the Sea, and yet it languishes with poor scores. I think Ebon has some of the strongest scene setting of anything I've ever written. But, anyway...

To Anon: I edited the author's notes recently, based upon the comment immediately preceding yours. That's why they no longer give it away

Thank you for the boost when I needed it, and I'm glad the story came across exactly how I wanted it to. Danica 19 will be submitted to Lit tonight

 

[Boxlicker101]

This was not an anon feedback but was one that I got yesterday on a LW story named Cherry and Jack. Does anybody know what he means by "coggeling"? The story included Jack listening to his wife, Cherry, getting fucked, but I don't think it had anything to do with voyeurism.

Hy Boxlicker101,
don`t listen to those negative thinkers i think you have a great story but leave
out the coggel stuff it makes it so stupid i hate coggeling.

 

[Ada Stuart]

Anonymous won't read my stuff

Just wanted to share this particular comment from Anonymous with you guys.

I must admit I find it hilarious and the assumption that "I write for men's pleasure only" I take that as a great compliment - especially since I'm female and write for my own pleasure......

Besides, it's nice to know that this person will never leave any more comments like this since he/she won't be reading any more of my stuff. A pity really....



This message contains feedback for: Ada Stuart
About the submission: Abduction Ch. 03
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Quite ridiculous, it seems you write for men's pleasure only. I don't know
where you are going with this but it's anti-climatic and quite unsatisfying. I
won't ready anything else you write.

 

[Aurora Black]

Besides, it's nice to know that this person will never leave any more comments like this since he/she won't be reading any more of my stuff. A pity really....

Yes he/she will.

 

[Ada Stuart]

Yes he/she will.

You think so ? Good! I like honest opinions

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Hey, you, Anon, my apparent troll!

If you BOTHERED to read the previous chapter, you'd know that Jake is bi and has agreed to have a little fun with Dennis now and then. Duh! Then it might make more sense to you.

 

[Aurora Black]

Anonymous is kind today.

This message contains feedback for: Aurora Black
About the submission: Julia Ch. 02
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

As with the first chapter, so too is the second chapter intriguing. Julia is likable even though addicted to opium and Billings' empathy/sympathy for her condition goes far with me in being able to like him. I am hooked and now I have to wait for the third chapter to come out. The thing is - the story, thus far, is plausible - I love a story that might possibly happen in the real world. And I am a fan of stories set in the late 1800s, early 1900s. I don't normally read erotic romance stories, usually I focus on the stories in another category - but I'll keep up with this one.

I am sure there will be those who complain the story is too drawn out and ask "where is the sex?" - but I personally like both a good story and erotic sex. Anticipation is a wonderful aphrodisiac. So I take a breath and wait.

 

[temptanddestroy]

I've fallen in love with this thread

I've received worst criticism, believe me, and this one is fair, but it got under my skin for several reasons.


*2/3 of the story unique
06/18/06 By: Anonymous
because it's believable FANTASY; but the last 1/3 or so, after they're "released," the story became non-unique, cliche, like all the others,,,, it's now just a series of gangbang with the ex-virgin nun,,,

as the last observer said, it's too silly to be even giggled over,,, that's unfortunate, because, again, the first part of the story was a rather interesting fantasy.

remember, dear good author: FICTION is supposed to be believable! but when you manage to make it NOT believable, you've destroyed your fiction. I don't care if you have 100 "editors" saying it's a great story.

ONE reader's take on a story, to steal from Albert, is more important than all the editors in the world, IF he is correct! lol *


Firstly, I was proud of that little green E. Notice how anonymous refers to editors- "editors", like they don't exist or something! Aren't editors readers too?

Secondly, who wouldn't gangbang an ex-virgin nun?

Thirdly, who's Albert? Can anyone tell me?

I'm going to start backing up all my arguments by refering to Albert from now on!

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Now this was a nice Anon in my email box this morning

This message contains feedback for: Jenny_Jackson
About the submission: Delicious
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Oh my. I am still chuckling - no - make that laughing. Total surprise
ending. I started to read thinking "oh boy - another dribbling story".
I mean it is well written - very well written with a few kinks in the
opening paragraph - but it is meritous of posting because of the
unexpected ending. The category of "Erotic Horror" does little to prepare the
reader for the ending!

Being the wimp that I am I usually stay away from horror stories but
saw the comments running across the boards about this story so I searched
it out to read. And being the lesbian I am - when I read M/F sexual
scenes, I tend to identify with the male character simply to be able to
immerse myself in the story and the emotions being evoked. Boy! Did I
regret doing THAT in this story! ROFLMAO - thank you for a very
"enjoyable" horrific read!

Wow. That is the nicest comment that story has gotten. Thank you.

JJ

 

[rachlou]

nice!

"It is a real storie of your whore mother , you idiot filthy slut?????
Why dont you visit some prison....you can get what you deserve, some hundreds inmates shit and vomit into your filthy ugly body....cos thats the way you like it
Stupid animal "


Dear Stupid animal,
No it isn't a STORY of my lovely mum, although i'm sure she would have enjoyed the encounter. Thanks for the suggestion to take up prison visiting but unfortunately I am kind of busy right now. Which one are you in by the way?
Best wishes,
Rachel

 

[LadyCibelle]

"It is a real storie of your whore mother , you idiot filthy slut?????
Why dont you visit some prison....you can get what you deserve, some hundreds inmates shit and vomit into your filthy ugly body....cos thats the way you like it
Stupid animal "


Dear Stupid animal,
No it isn't a STORY of my lovely mum, although i'm sure she would have enjoyed the encounter. Thanks for the suggestion to take up prison visiting but unfortunately I am kind of busy right now. Which one are you in by the way?
Best wishes,
Rachel

Yea

That's the spirit Rach......don't let them get you down.

 

[Aurora Black]

Dear Stupid animal,
No it isn't a STORY of my lovely mum, although i'm sure she would have enjoyed the encounter. Thanks for the suggestion to take up prison visiting but unfortunately I am kind of busy right now. Which one are you in by the way?
Best wishes,
Rachel

Hahaha!

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

ROFLMAO... That's too good...

JJ

 

[amicus]

Dear Anonymous,

No. It is not slanted.

Yours truly,

Yui

~~~~~~~~~~

Christ on a Crutch Yui! You caught me not looking and I burst out laughing, thank you so much!

A pleasantly appreciative amicus...

 

[amicus]

Dear anonymous, no it is not a true story. Fiction is, in my opinion, one of those thingies where its o.k. to tell a lie.

~~~~~~~~~~

Saw your avatar and suddenly realized what or who it made me think of...an actress, Ellen Muth, I think her name is, stars in an HBO program called 'Dead Like Me' along with Mandy Patinkin, if I recall correctly...

not that it matters...but that moment of recognition just had to be mentioned...


amicus...

 

[cantdog]

I've received worst criticism, believe me, and this one is fair, but it got under my skin for several reasons.


*2/3 of the story unique
06/18/06 By: Anonymous
because it's believable FANTASY; but the last 1/3 or so, after they're "released," the story became non-unique, cliche, like all the others,,,, it's now just a series of gangbang with the ex-virgin nun,,,

as the last observer said, it's too silly to be even giggled over,,, that's unfortunate, because, again, the first part of the story was a rather interesting fantasy.

remember, dear good author: FICTION is supposed to be believable! but when you manage to make it NOT believable, you've destroyed your fiction. I don't care if you have 100 "editors" saying it's a great story.

ONE reader's take on a story, to steal from Albert, is more important than all the editors in the world, IF he is correct! lol *


Firstly, I was proud of that little green E. Notice how anonymous refers to editors- "editors", like they don't exist or something! Aren't editors readers too?

Secondly, who wouldn't gangbang an ex-virgin nun?

Thirdly, who's Albert? Can anyone tell me?

I'm going to start backing up all my arguments by refering to Albert from now on!

Albert Einstein has a famous quotation that appears in the works of iconoclasts, something to the effet that one lone wolf can be of greater weight than all the established structure, if he is correct. I can't find the actual quote.

What your anonymous friend is saying is, everyone else is wrong, and I, just only I, am right.