Annonymous

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[FallingToFly]

Love, love, love... and sudden amusement at the troll...

How did I miss this one? I'm absolutely staggered by it--left an incoherent PC for you.

So I just now saw!!! *kisses and luvs* You and Dani both! I appreciate everyone's wonderful feedback on that piece (it's one of a series I'm working up the nerve to submit for publication) and for taking the time to read my ridiculously purple prose. I didn't think it was -that- bad... but apparently this particular anonymous troll has something specifically in for me...

Crap!
05/20/06 By: Anonymous
Maybe you should have saved this for your own fan club - total crap


That was his latest, on American Baby...

You know... I want to know wtf he was doing in Celeb if he wasn't looking for fanstories? But oh well.. AB has no ego wrapped up in it, it's just fluff. Fun fluff at that, written as a bit of an exercise in what would happen if a rock and roll band took their own personal mommy along to keep them out of trouble. *grins* Not exactly the makings of the next Lady Chatterley's Lover.

 

[Aurora Black]

AB has no ego wrapped up in it, it's just fluff.

Me?

 

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[Aurora Black]

*return lurve for Falling*

Dear Anonymous,

I'm sorry you think spell-checker isn't a valid tool for a writer. As for the other matter, I might have been slightly more inclined to share a picture with you if you weren't such a snob and had contacted me privately, but I am not posting my pic on my profile because a stranger wants to feed his "jones for BBW."

Dork.

 

[FallingToFly]

Me?

No no... American Baby. I always end up using initials for my stories, as that's how I save them, AB1.rtf, AB2.rtf.... etc etc. It actually saves me time, as they all save in chronological order that way. Sorry, I'll try to remember to type tham out.

Oh, and another giggle over the troll who apparently is having fun trashing my ratings... I wonder what the hell he's going to have to say when he hits Killing Loneliness?

*snickergigglesnorts*

So, apparently I found my equilibrium as to trolls and flames again... hooray!!!

 

[Guest]

Bombing? What a curious statement.

Your loyals are all 100's. Do you mean your loyals comments are shrinking, the votes in total are shrinking, or the number of loyals are shrinking?

Do you really have to rally the troops for "H"s? You shouldn't have to beg.

This story has a narrower fan group. They want to be dominated beyond their control - give up their equal female status. Do many women really feel that way anymore?

I stopped reading after our flurry of exchanged comments but check the comments occasionally and almost missed your closing cry's for support?

Do you feel comfortable with this story path? Perhaps not eh.

Consider wrapping it and start another. Anything beyond 5 chapters takes an exceptional storyline and an excellant commited talented author.

You are 3 of the last 4 words.

I was wondering when I would hear from you again. Thanks for not disappointing me. Actually, the stories have been getting mixed scores but more votes than some of my stories have gotten. One actually has over 175 votes.

I was just telling the truth when I said it was getting mixed reviews, some of the emails I have gotten have been quick to point out idiosynchrisies in my story and I've been trying to fix them as I go.

I'm sorry that your masculinity is threatened and you feel you must put down my work. I'm sorry you think that I'm a submissive wannabe. I'm sorry if you don't like this story. All I can say is if you don't like it, don't read me.

I'm glad you stopped reading, I don't need the frustration of these pesky emails to bother me. I am enjoying the storyline and actually have written most of Chapter Fourteen, and know how chapter fifteen is going to go.

And now, I'll spend all night wondering which one of those words you don't consider me...sigh....not. Please, go and find someone else to bother, maybe someone in the loving wives category would enjoy listening to your ideas about wife swapping or wimp husbands?

Rant ended.

 

[FallingToFly]

Quoting U2...

"Don't let the bastards get you down," Danielle.

Granted, it's advice I should have taken days ago, but I'm always better at hindsight.

Everyone should have a copy of "Acrobat" to put on while reading PCs. Glad I finally found mine.

 

[fifty5]

I wonder if Anon. knows how to cheat to keep a high average. Writers could go and vote a five on their own stories but I don't know that I would call that cheating.

Yeah, but it doesn't work - they don't register after a time...

 

[fifty5]

Well, I have to say that Annonymous sent me a PC saying I had a very sexxy ass.....

Sometimes I have to say, without hesitation and without qualifications, that I agree 100% with Anonymous, and this is one of those times.

No Box, xxx is spelled with 3 x's! Honey has a sexxxy ass.

 

[fifty5]

Dear anonymous (or should that have a Capital?)

It was a first for me too. Until now, I've been lucky enough to receive criticism that was worth reading. I've never deleted feedback before.

Thanks for a new experience,

 

[Guest]

Quoting U2...

"Don't let the bastards get you down," Danielle.

Granted, it's advice I should have taken days ago, but I'm always better at hindsight.

Everyone should have a copy of "Acrobat" to put on while reading PCs. Glad I finally found mine.

I've finally just decided to realize that anyone too scared to put a name on a comment shouldn't be taken seriously anyway... But thanks

 

[Guest]

edited

 

[Darkniciad]

This was my very first feedback, mere minutes after Danica 01 went live.

Hey Dark, Your writing style evolving? In what direction? Come on man, this is 2006. No one has time to read a story that long. I tried, but grew tired of wading through all that verbiage. Any way, Dude, thanks for crying, I mean trying

My response on my troll mail page:

Private, anonymous feedback signals one of two things: Either the person is a little shy about putting their own comments out there in public, or they're a jackass who can't even own up to their own verbal poo flinging. Can we guess which this is boys and girls?

Nobody has time to read a story this long? :: chuckle :: I could have sworn that books were still selling by the truck load, and that people were willing to risk jail time to steal copies of Harry Potter before it reached actual release. Somebody should really inform the publishing industry.

Attention span of a gnat, "clever" wordsmithing with the whole crying/trying bit. Yep, this guy's a winner. Should have a marvelous career in the fast food industry.

Good luck buddy, and no, I don't want fries with that. If I had wanted fries, I would have asked for fries.

Hmmm... story idea? The life of a Lit Troll... gold digger girlfriend fleeces him of his McDonalds income to buy bling, all the while banging his roomie in his own bed each day as he slaves over a hot fry vat. Lets him cop a feel and gives him a handjob every payday before she runs off to party with his roomie, leaving him to vent the frustrations of his pitiful meaningless existence on various websites while she swallows tequilla shooters and his roomies load in a hotel room he paid for.

Its got potential... *laugh*

 

[Aurora Black]

Hmmm... story idea? The life of a Lit Troll... gold digger girlfriend fleeces him of his McDonalds income to buy bling, all the while banging his roomie in his own bed each day as he slaves over a hot fry vat. Lets him cop a feel and gives him a handjob every payday before she runs off to party with his roomie, leaving him to vent the frustrations of his pitiful meaningless existence on various websites while she swallows tequilla shooters and his roomies load in a hotel room he paid for.

Its got potential... *laugh*

I like your style.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Dear anonymous (or should that have a Capital?)

It was a first for me too. Until now, I've been lucky enough to receive criticism that was worth reading. I've never deleted feedback before.

Thanks for a new experience,

I will delete malicious (spelling???) comments that seem to me a personal attack. I find those not worth my time or the time any real commentors need to spend wasting themselves on them.

Some don't delete negative comments, but to me there is a difference between negative and annoying pain in the ass attention seekers...

 

[FallingToFly]

I will delete malicious (spelling???) comments that seem to me a personal attack. I find those not worth my time or the time any real commentors need to spend wasting themselves on them.

Some don't delete negative comments, but to me there is a difference between negative and annoying pain in the ass attention seekers...

I don't even bother... it's too amusing to go through and read the ones that are obviously posted by the same person...

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Not for one of mine. I was nosing in the fedback portal and noticed this:

Fuck it...

...you probably can't read English any better than you can write it, so I won't waste my time trying to explain why your submission isn't worth a quart of camel piss!

Submission Title: Nothing Like Mother's Love
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: juicemaker
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 4 Comment(s)

The camel piss reference made me chuckle...

 

[rgraham666]

I've been keeping this bottled up for almost a year.

The comment was for my essay, Information Disease.

6/12/05 By: Anonymous in USA
The moonies, the hare krishna's, all of those cults had the most success in the county with the largest degree of free speech: The U.S.

And yet you claim that freedom of speech is the vaccine to exactly this type of problem?

Sure availabilty of information is great -- but it's only the beginning:
(Free speech does NOT imply that the information received is correct!)

"Number one, as I said, quality of information.
Number two: leisure to digest it. And
number three: the right to carry out actions based on
what we learn from the interaction of the first two."
- Ray Bradbury
* Fahrenheit 451

There are too many mediums and there is too large a quantity of information
for people with a normal life to digest. And only a small part of it is accurate and accurately described or presented. Have you ever really researched what you see/read/hear? You'd be surpised by how often it's biased and/or incorrect!!!

First, the cults I mentioned were not mentioned as dangers to free speech but as examples of information disease.

And how are you going to determine if information is 'correct' or not if you can't discuss it freely?

Free speech does not guarantee 'quality' of information.

And who is going to decide what 'unbiased' and 'correct' is? You? Me? The government?

I suspect that you haven't the slightest idea what you're talking about, you dork.

I feel better.

 

[neonlyte]

Just catching up on the 'How To' comments

here's a PC
wow...
05/19/06 by Anonymous
Stop writing this drivel and go out and do your "advice"

What was the "Wow" for, and which particular bit of advice do you want me to follow

...and a couple of e-mails
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments:
Just what qualifies you as an expert in this area?
I read erotic stories to read stories, not to read bull shit.
Get a life and post elsewhere.
I guess it is the fact that I FUCK, unlike you, that makes me an expert in the field - IT IS NOT A STORY it's a HOW TO moron.

This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments:
Ok, flat out your "Get Lucky" submission is one of the funny things I've read in 2006. Keep it up.
Thank You

 

[Selena_Kitt]

From my "How To" ...

Probably True
05/21/06 By: Anonymous
This is how I lost my husband to a younger woman. She was married, he was married and he even told me about the things she said to him a work. How she admired him etc. My point is, why would he accept the flattery from her and not from me? When I tried to compliment him, early on in our marriage, he accused me of trying to manipulate him. When this woman at work was clearly manipulating him. Anyway, the article is probably true, but it's also sad that men can be so easily manipulated to leave a marriage of 25 years because a younger, prettier and more manipulative woman strokes his ego. Pretty self absorbed and self centered if you ask me.


Ok... Ms. Anonymous...

can I suggest some long-term therapy and self-reflection on your part?
bitterness like this eats holes into your soul if you let it... it isn't worth it.
it's like saying, "I'm going to poison myself every day for the rest of my life... that will show YOU!"

 

[fifty5]

I will delete malicious comments that seem to me a personal attack. I find those not worth my time or the time any real commentors need to spend wasting themselves on them.

Some don't delete negative comments, but to me there is a difference between negative and annoying pain in the ass attention seekers...

I haven't been fortunate enough to get many comments (mabe I should wite more?). I luxuriate in the complimentary ones. Negative but thoughtful ones I've responded to by my own comment.

I've only had one realy dumbo one - and I deleted it, but would have loved to be able to respond on the lines I posted here, if only it hadn't been from Anon...

I'm thinking about what the fuck I know enough about to write a HOW TO...

 

[Aurora Black]

I'm thinking about what the fuck I know enough about to write a HOW TO...

Everyone has at least one area of expertise. You'll find something.

 

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[Aurora Black]

Bump...

*bumps thread with ass*