Annonymous

[Octavian]

Loving Wives

Dear Anonymous and Anonymous and Anonymous

I know it might be difficult for you to grasp but the 'fucking slut bitch' in the Loving Wives genre is not real. She is a fictional character, a product of an author's imagination.

It is nigh on impossible that her sexual activity outside marriage will actually result in bastard kids, although her chances of so doing are probably greater than you recognising that it is better not to read the Loving Wives genre than to constantly send feedback saying how much you hate it. And why are your diatribes always in upper case? Have you not worked out what the Caps Lock button does?

Octavian

“Encase your majestic tree of manhood in the sublimely soft wondrous wet hallowed depths of my body,” she implored.
“Oh,” he replied, “you mean you wanna fuck!”

 

[Boxlicker101]

Dear Anonymous
The story is in the Incest/taboo category and the description says something about her stepfather wanting her to be his sex slave. Given those facts, what do you think the story would be about? If you find this kind of story distasteful, why do you read it? Even if you were just looking for something to jack off over, which is what the story basically is, there are plenty more that are just as good or better. Judging from what your feedback said, you must have read most of it, through the place where he was a slimeball.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Dear anonnymouth

I really must thank you most sincerely for the time and trouble you must have taken sending me your incredibly detailed and graphic suggestions of how I could develop my characters in future chapters. The bit about the filthy slut wife and the 12-year old alsation would unfortunately fall foul of the submission guidelines on both age and species grounds but I am grateful for the thought, nevertheless.

Far be it from me to suggest you may have misunderstood, but if Sebastian 'fucks the cunt bitch like she deserves' this is unlikely to result in 'shit colored bastards' as Sebastian is white. I refer you to the passage, 'Sebastian sat in the shade to ensure his pale creamy skin didn't turn fiery pink'.

I am struggling slightly to envisage chapter 69. This may be because my imagination is clearly so much more limited than yours. I realise my introduction that this was a stand alone story should be totally disregarded by your towering intellect. I shall apply tomorrow for 5 years unpaid leave to get the magnum opus finished.

As a mere author, you will have to help me about the scene where Sam's father and uncle come to offer a 'savage anal pounding'. If I remember correctly, I think I said that bitter grief for the death of Mrs Doe, Sam's last living relative, was still painful. But, hey, my vision is limited. I've seen the re-runs of Dallas and Pam's re-incarnation. You are just going to have to help me a bit here.

Only one final thing for now. I can imagine some of the 'wide and cunt-splitting' objects that could be inserted in Sam's 'slimy, worm-ridden, diseased fuck-hole' but, if you would allow me, I would ask for a bit of explanation.

Seb, the firefighter, has fallen head over heels for Sam, the stylishly dressed cabin assistant on NorthSouth Airways. The problem I have got, if you can bear with such an inferior intellect, is that they are both men and I posted the story in 'Gay Male'.

Don't let my petty points stop you helping all the other authors on this site.

Yours truly

elfin

 

[Boxlicker101]

Dear anumnuts:

I am well aware that, legally, incest applies only to blood relatives and not to step relatives or in-laws and that the stepfather and daughter in the story were not technically committing incest. Since it happened on her 18th birthday, it was not illegal for any other reason either.

However, the category is Incest/Taboo. Do you see that? Taboo. That means socially unacceptably, and sex between the man and the woman, when he is the only father she has ever known, and they have lived in the house together for fifteen years is not generally accepted by society, expecially when he has forced her to the degree that he did. It was a story of taboo sex, not incest.

 

[Alex De Kok]

Dear anonymous of Jan 26, and anonymous of February 3.

Thank you both for the praise and the request to continue my 'Aunt Ellen' story. Might I just point out that as 'Aunt Ellen' was posted in July 2000, a quick check on me would have revealed that Parts 2, 3 and 4 were posted in January 2001, and Part 5 in July 2001. I hope you found them!

Alex

 

[neonlyte]

Dear anonnymouth

I really must thank you most sincerely for the time and trouble you must have taken sending me your incredibly detailed and graphic suggestions of how I could develop my characters in future chapters. The bit about the filthy slut wife and the 12-year old alsation would unfortunately fall foul of the submission guidelines on both age and species grounds but I am grateful for the thought, nevertheless.

Far be it from me to suggest you may have misunderstood, but if Sebastian 'fucks the cunt bitch like she deserves' this is unlikely to result in 'shit colored bastards' as Sebastian is white. I refer you to the passage, 'Sebastian sat in the shade to ensure his pale creamy skin didn't turn fiery pink'.

I am struggling slightly to envisage chapter 69. This may be because my imagination is clearly so much more limited than yours. I realise my introduction that this was a stand alone story should be totally disregarded by your towering intellect. I shall apply tomorrow for 5 years unpaid leave to get the magnum opus finished.

As a mere author, you will have to help me about the scene where Sam's father and uncle come to offer a 'savage anal pounding'. If I remember correctly, I think I said that bitter grief for the death of Mrs Doe, Sam's last living relative, was still painful. But, hey, my vision is limited. I've seen the re-runs of Dallas and Pam's re-incarnation. You are just going to have to help me a bit here.

Only one final thing for now. I can imagine some of the 'wide and cunt-splitting' objects that could be inserted in Sam's 'slimy, worm-ridden, diseased fuck-hole' but, if you would allow me, I would ask for a bit of explanation.

Seb, the firefighter, has fallen head over heels for Sam, the stylishly dressed cabin assistant on NorthSouth Airways. The problem I have got, if you can bear with such an inferior intellect, is that they are both men and I posted the story in 'Gay Male'.

Don't let my petty points stop you helping all the other authors on this site.

Yours truly

elfin

Elfin

This really made me laugh. With a couple more paragraphs you could post this - Non Consent I'd imagine. Thanks for the chuckles.

 

[pop_54]

Dear Anon.

Thank you for the feedback and your constructive comments.

I would however like to point out, that although I agree with you in that, the main character is indeed a promiscuous self opinionated cheating filthy whoring stinking fucking bitch slut who has no feeling for her husband or family, who shags with anything that moves and should indeed fall prey to the evil diseases her kind spread and promote, those you suggested being prime examples, such as, Aids and syphilis, along with all known variants of hepatitis, etc, etc.

In addition, I agree that maybe she should be taken to a remote field and have her guts fucked out by an entire American football team including all subs and management, finishing with the football inserted as you recommend in the manner of a full on touch-down, followed by a field goal kick style action.

She is in fact however, a fictitious character; this means she doesn’t really exist in real life, I invented her, made her up, she’s the product of my twisted mind, she doesn’t exist, she has never nor will ever exist, she’s fucking pretend, just like the whole bloody fucking story is pretend… Although I must add, I am truly sorry for the way your ex wife behaved all those years back, and I suppose finding her genital region in the state you described every time she crawled in drunk must have been quite disturbing.

Thank you again for the feedback it was most appreciated, please feel free to get back to me if you have further comments on any of my stories.

Regards: pops.

Thanks Neon, I’ve been meaning to reply to him for a long time.

PS: I see Octavian has heard from this guy too.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Thanks a lot, Neon, for the praise and I'm applying for the 5 years leave of absence already!

 

[neonlyte]

Great idea. Could have been developed better.
03/09/05 By: Anonymous in India
I think it was a very original idea. And the twist that had the wife involvde was interesting... but in the end pointless as you didn't use it in any way. Nor did the husband know about it (at least the narration implies that.)

I think this could have been fleshed out into a more complete story with a tad more description. And the plot also had scope for telling about Carol's experience and also her showing her video to her husband (so far the story only refers to his video). The surprise he feels and the ensuing passion could have been worked further.

Still, it was original! Keep up the great ideas.

Dear Anonymous
Prehaps the section describing Carol and her husband fucking before, during and after watching the video was missing from your screen?

Thanks anyway for your comments and vote.

 

[impressive]

This message contains feedback for: impressive
About the submission: Four Play
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

sounds a bit cornish to me!!!

Dear Anonymous,

I'm going to assume you meant "corny." I don't believe I've ever written anything that sounds like a game hen.

Regardless, sorry to disappoint.

Best,

~Imp

 

[wishfulthinking]

are you a female?
Because I don't think man will respect a woman like that.
I will give my e-mail to you later if you want

Dear Anon, you made my day

 

[elsol]

Dear Anonymous:

And I quote:

You don't get it. I built this place. Down here, I make the rules. Down here, I make the threats. Down here, I'm God.

I write the stories that I want to read; if you want to read the stories that you want to read, then write the stories that you want to read; otherwise as I was for a very long time, you must be satisfied with reading the stories someone else decides to write.

Sincerely,
ElSol

 

[neonlyte]

Dear Anonymous,

I'm going to assume you meant "corny." I don't believe I've ever written anything that sounds like a game hen.

Regardless, sorry to disappoint.

Best,

~Imp

I'd take it as a compliment. I think they meant Robertson Davies - The Cornish Trilogy (The Rebel Angels, What's Bread in the Bone and The Lyre of Orpheus), sounds like a Impish collection.

 

[impressive]

I'd take it as a compliment. I think they meant Robertson Davies - The Cornish Trilogy (The Rebel Angels, What's Bread in the Bone and The Lyre of Orpheus), sounds like a Impish collection.

Hard to say. As near as I can tell, the feedback was not accompanied by a vote.

 

[elsol]

Dear Anonymous:

The women I write about wouldn't share a bag of skittles with me.

Sincerely,
ElSol

 

[elsol]

Dear Anonymous!

TMI!!!

TM-FUCKING-I!!!

Sincerely,
ElSol

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Dear Anonymous,

I'm going to assume you meant "corny." I don't believe I've ever written anything that sounds like a game hen.

Regardless, sorry to disappoint.

Best,

~Imp

Deer Impassive

Yude bettr not have ritten anyting about henz cos that isnt aloud with animals here.

There's a rumour that the lit zoologist, Dr Morebooze is copulating with moths up in Horror Heights but I don't believe it.

Love

ABonnyMoose

 

[Guest]

Dear Anonymous,

Yes, I most certainly am a very naughty girl and I do indeed deserve to be spanked for writing such a nasty little story.

So much so, in fact, I believe that prospect is in my near future.

I think I might even have to write a story about it.

Thank you, seriously, whoever you are.

Made me grin anyway.

Lou

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Dear Anonymous,

Yes, I most certainly am a very naughty girl and I do indeed deserve to be spanked for writing such a nasty little story.

So much so, in fact, I believe that prospect is in my near future.

I think I might even have to write a story about it.

Thank you, seriously, whoever you are.

Made me grin anyway.

Lou

What am I doing wrong.

I never get those nice kind of Anon replies.

PS Already voted for you - you're bound to win. it's fantastic

 

[Guest]

What am I doing wrong.

I never get those nice kind of Anon replies.

PS Already voted for you - you're bound to win. it's fantastic

WOW! Thanks, Elfin!

Yeah, I seem to attract the sick weirdo's to comment on my stories, and I love them all dearly.

 

[rgraham666]

I feel left out. The only really nasty PC I got wasn't even directed at me.

Even the one bad one I've received was by somebody merely sad, rather than completely twisted.

Sigh.

 

[Guest]

I feel left out. The only really nasty PC I got wasn't even directed at me.

Even the one bad one I've received was by somebody merely sad, rather than completely twisted.

Sigh.

I only get "nasty" feedback in the crude, suggestive sense of the word.

I can live with that.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

As a bit of a neophyte I tried loving wives for a soppy Valentine story. Still got the bodyguards outside the door because I hinted she might stray.

Anon, believe me. this wasn't just fiction, it was fantasy.

 

[carsonshepherd]

It just doesn't get any better....
03/03/05 By: Anonymous
By far the best story I've come across. I feel like I know and love everyone in it. Thank you for all of the time and effort you put into it. You are an amazing and special person - it shows in your writing. Please keep it coming

I know this is supposed to be about bad feedback... but this was so nice, it made me feel all fuzzy. Who wrote this, so I can offer you sexual favors?

 

[rgraham666]

I only get "nasty" feedback in the crude, suggestive sense of the word.

I can live with that.

Now I feel even more left out.