Anne's Surprise

jack30341

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Recently, I posted "Anne's Surprise". There aren't a lot of comments thus far.

If there are any suggestions on how to improve it, I'd appreciate it!

Always looking to improve.
 
With 100-something new stories going up a day, it's hard to find yours amongst everything else that's been posted "recently". If you gave us a link, you might get more people involved in helping you out. Just, you know, just sayin. :D
 
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