lovecraft68
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Quick question for those better with commas than I am...so everyone here including the janitor if Lit has one.
Got back the edits on the first part of my latest work. This is someone I've worked with before, but for some reason what they're doing doesn't seem consistent with what they did on my last novel(I saved the original docs to compare)
I'm seeing a lot of commas before the word and that don't seem right.
Commas generally reflect a pause, correct?
Here's one quick example
Lydia shut off the water, and grimly shook her head
Okay so reading this with and without
Lydia shut off the water and shook her head....no comma and reads with no hesitation and to me sounds correct.
Lydia shut off the water.....and grimly shook her head. Pause, why are we pausing?
Maybe the comma there is right which is why I'm asking because for whatever reason this particular comma usage has always given me headaches.
Oh, and I'm losing grimly I'm on an anti adverb kick and this person keeps adding them in. I leave the ones that seem to be effective, this one seems wrong to me. People can feel free to render an opinion on that if they want as well
Got back the edits on the first part of my latest work. This is someone I've worked with before, but for some reason what they're doing doesn't seem consistent with what they did on my last novel(I saved the original docs to compare)
I'm seeing a lot of commas before the word and that don't seem right.
Commas generally reflect a pause, correct?
Here's one quick example
Lydia shut off the water, and grimly shook her head
Okay so reading this with and without
Lydia shut off the water and shook her head....no comma and reads with no hesitation and to me sounds correct.
Lydia shut off the water.....and grimly shook her head. Pause, why are we pausing?
Maybe the comma there is right which is why I'm asking because for whatever reason this particular comma usage has always given me headaches.
Oh, and I'm losing grimly I'm on an anti adverb kick and this person keeps adding them in. I leave the ones that seem to be effective, this one seems wrong to me. People can feel free to render an opinion on that if they want as well
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