Analingus?

dysphemist

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I've posted my first story in the Lesbian category and received a couple feedbacks from anonymous reader(s) stating that the story lacked "analingus". For those of you who write in this category is this a common request/complaint? Or is Anonymous just toying with me?
 
dysphemist said:
I've posted my first story in the Lesbian category and received a couple feedbacks from anonymous reader(s) stating that the story lacked "analingus". For those of you who write in this category is this a common request/complaint? Or is Anonymous just toying with me?

I can honestly say, out of 20 lesbian stories, I've never had that comment at all. Ever. In fact, I've never heard of that complaint before.

Mat (living in a self-absorbed bubble, apparently.)
 
dysphemist said:
I've posted my first story in the Lesbian category and received a couple feedbacks from anonymous reader(s) stating that the story lacked "analingus". For those of you who write in this category is this a common request/complaint? Or is Anonymous just toying with me?
Sound like one of the trolls the always critiques FF stories that lack 'analingus'. On several of my stories that had FF sex comments to that effect were left also.
 
matriarch said:
I can honestly say, out of 20 lesbian stories, I've never had that comment at all. Ever. In fact, I've never heard of that complaint before.

Mat (living in a self-absorbed bubble, apparently.)

should it be spelt anallingus with two Ls, possibly?
 
zeb1094 said:
Sound like one of the trolls the always critiques FF stories that lack 'analingus'. On several of my stories that had FF sex comments to that effect were left also.


Trolls? At least I'm not the only person that gets them.
 
Sounds like the usual troll crap along the lines of being dissapointed that the gal didn't get pregnant (I've gotten this often for hetero stories).

Don't sweat it dys.
 
While the mental image of 2 women (or more) licking each other's delicious butts appeals to me (to the extent that I tend to include it in stories), I wouldn't criticize someone for NOT including it. Not everyone is into all things anal.
 
lil_elvis said:
Sounds like the usual troll crap along the lines of being dissapointed that the gal didn't get pregnant (I've gotten this often for hetero stories).

Don't sweat it dys.

I was criticized for mentioning that a woman was potentially pregnant. The reader was upset because there were consequences. He (I'm assuming it was a he) apparently missed the entire point of the story. That was the intention of the male character all along.
 
I think your story is beautiful and touching (said so in a PC). I think that particular commenter is whacked out. I have gotten a comment or two like that, and they were OK because in those cases the commenter was just stating a preference/making a request for future stories. But in the context of your very sensitive story I thought that comment really was out of left field.

Shy Virgin’s Fear Becomes Joy (aka “Love and Intimacy – Denise’s Joyful Holiday Discoveries”)
 
Roxanne Appleby said:
I think your story is beautiful and touching (said so in a PC). I think that particular commenter is whacked out. I have gotten a comment or two like that, and they were OK because in those cases the commenter was just stating a preference/making a request for future stories. But in the context of your very sensitive story I thought that comment really was out of left field.

Shy Virgin’s Fear Becomes Joy (aka “Love and Intimacy – Denise’s Joyful Holiday Discoveries”)


Thank you for the PC. Not only did he (or she) leave a PC but they also sent feedback (I guess it could have been someone else).

I read and voted on your story (hadn't figured out the PC thing at the time :eek: ) I liked it and was disappointed when it ended. I wanted more :)
 
dysphemist said:
Thank you for the PC. Not only did he (or she) leave a PC but they also sent feedback (I guess it could have been someone else).

I read and voted on your story (hadn't figured out the PC thing at the time :eek: ) I liked it and was disappointed when it ended. I wanted more :)


I have somewehre around 50 to 60 stories in the cat and I've never gotten such a feedback. Quite likely someone is jerking your chian

*HUGS*
 
Colleen Thomas said:
I have somewehre around 50 to 60 stories in the cat and I've never gotten such a feedback. Quite likely someone is jerking your chian

*HUGS*

That's what I thought. Just wanted to make sure.
 
dysphemist said:
I read and voted on your story (hadn't figured out the PC thing at the time :eek: ) I liked it and was disappointed when it ended. I wanted more :)

Smooch! Hugs! Consider yourself well hugged and kissed and hair mussed and thoroughly embarassed in public by me!
 
what was that?

I suggested to one of my girl freinds many years ago that I would like her to try that with me. Her response:

"Why would I want to fly to Ireland?"

To which I replied:

"I ASSure you it will transport you to unexplored realms, where you may probe experiences to new depths." :nana:
 
dysphemist said:
I've posted my first story in the Lesbian category and received a couple feedbacks from anonymous reader(s) stating that the story lacked "analingus". For those of you who write in this category is this a common request/complaint? Or is Anonymous just toying with me?

Perhaps the story was too male? ;) I agree with Mat, though.
 
dysphemist said:
I've posted my first story in the Lesbian category and received a couple feedbacks from anonymous reader(s) stating that the story lacked "analingus". For those of you who write in this category is this a common request/complaint? Or is Anonymous just toying with me?

I've never had a complaint about that lack but I have had some people suggest that I include it in anal or TS stories where the sex is anal. :p I have been including it lately because I think it makes the story better. My readers are more crude, though, and usually say "licking her ass" or similar words.
 
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