Anal Costs Extra

[BrattyLinds2]

I have a title that came to mind and it made me giggle a bit. I have a very basic idea in play where a woman jokingly says, "Anal costs extra." The thing is, the person she is speaking with takes it seriously; like a business transaction. Like, "Okay, how much?"

There are two directions I could take things.
1.) A (newer?) porn actress said this. Is the money offered enough to convince her? Is the offer "too good to be true"? If so, what are some things that could go wrong?
2.) The woman is a legit stripper/dancer. Perhaps the event is a bachelor party and not at a strip club. She is not a prostitute. Could the offer from someone (best man? Groomsman? Not a cheating story, so not the groom-to-be) actually entice her?


I realize that neither scenario  is a story. Both are scenes. I'd have a lot of work ahead of me to weave this potential title into a story, but I am intrigued.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

The woman is selling him some clothes or something. He tries to haggle, she makes that stupid joke while he's distracted by her sexy beauty, and he answers seriously.

 

[Rob_Royale]

How about just a husband and wife? They are having sex and he's lining up behind and she says that.
"How much?" He asks with a growl in his voice.

 

[sirhugs]

How about at a wedding?
Not totally sure how it goes but my immediate reaction to reading the OP was to want it to be an amateur, and I just love wedding stories.

 

[BrattyLinds2]

How about just a husband and wife? They are having sex and he's lining up behind and she says that.
"How much?" He asks with a growl in his voice.

I could see that working, too.

 

[BrattyLinds2]

How about at a wedding?
Not totally sure how it goes but my immediate reaction to reading the OP was to want it to be an amateur, and I just love wedding stories.

I suppose your and Rob's replies could be mixed together.

 

[dirk2024]

I have a title that came to mind and it made me giggle a bit. I have a very basic idea in play where a woman jokingly says, "Anal costs extra." The thing is, the person she is speaking with takes it seriously; like a business transaction. Like, "Okay, how much?"

There are two directions I could take things.
1.) A (newer?) porn actress said this. Is the money offered enough to convince her? Is the offer "too good to be true"? If so, what are some things that could go wrong?
2.) The woman is a legit stripper/dancer. Perhaps the event is a bachelor party and not at a strip club. She is not a prostitute. Could the offer from someone (best man? Groomsman? Not a cheating story, so not the groom-to-be) actually entice her?


I realize that neither scenario  is a story. Both are scenes. I'd have a lot of work ahead of me to weave this potential title into a story, but I am intrigued.

Of your original ideas, I like #2. I feel like #1 would already be a known quantity, with an actual cost sheet handed to porn actors on what they'll be paid for what act.

I also like both @TheWritingGroup 's and @Rob_Royale 's ideas as well. And sirhugs could be incorporated with Rob's, happening on their wedding night.

So, you could actually make a series out of this as I see three separate, stand alone stories here under the same theme.