An ode to the nipple

[Spellcasterxxx]

:rose

Men the whole world over are suckers for a breast,
The rounded shape,the way they move, brings tremors to our chest,
It doesn't matter really ,if they be small or large ,
For truth to tell, it's the nipple, that gives us all a charge.
Those perky little rosebuds, some are pink and some are brown,
some point up like exocets and some point somewhat down.
When walking down a street, men's eyes will always hover
on a well turned calf, or a shapely ass, God it gets us into Bother.
But to see a perky nipple through a T-shirt or a blouse,
We crane our necks,our eyes pop out.Please don't tell the spouse.
So ladies when you're walking in the park or on the street,
stand up straight and push them out,
give us guys a treat.


Yes-- an amatuerish attempt ,I know, but there are plenty of you out there, men and women who could really do it justice.
:rose

 

[Lady Reiha]

Also not responding to constructive criticism won't do much either.

It's a sweet poem. But it should be more risqué.

 

[Kylan]

:rose

Men the whole world over are suckers for a breast,
The rounded shape,the way they move, brings tremors to our chest,
It doesn't matter really ,if they be small or large ,
For truth to tell, it's the nipple, that gives us all a charge.
Those perky little rosebuds, some are pink and some are brown,
some point up like exocets and some point somewhat down.
When walking down a street, men's eyes will always hover
on a well turned calf, or a shapely ass, God it gets us into Bother.
But to see a perky nipple through a T-shirt or a blouse,
We crane our necks,our eyes pop out.Please don't tell the spouse.
So ladies when you're walking in the park or on the street,
stand up straight and push them out,
give us guys a treat.


Yes-- an amatuerish attempt ,I know, but there are plenty of you out there, men and women who could really do it justice.
:rose

I thoroughly enjoyed that, Spellcasterxxx, so therefore you are more professional than me, thus far less of an amateur than me, which makes it not in the least bit amatuerish.