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Strangebuddy
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I'm sure this idea had been done before but I thought it might be a fun way of writing a shorter story that both allows a POV gimmick as well as a challenge to writers.
Essentially, the story either starts with a brief second-person narrative ("You find a letter.") or just goes straight into the letter (I also was thinking a 4th-wall breaking version where it is a Literotica posting which states that the target will know who the writer is and where they are) which is addresed to the target of the main character's lust. The letter has an invitation for the addresse to join them upstairs or at a motel.
I figured a taboo attraction (not even necessarily an incestuous one (of course, the target must fit Literotica guidelines) would make it more interesting as a part of the letter if not the entire letter would be explaining why they feel the taboo nature of their love is okay in their mind.
For example: A daughter writing to her dad might say.
"I thought this through, you know. I could have just slid into bed with you and mommy after my senior prom and I know I could have had you...but you would have felt guilty, wouldn't you? You'd have thought you somehow influenced me or coerced me into lusting after you, as if giving me a curfew and not allowing me to date in high school would have rewired my brain into a Daddy-loving nympho."
"But I waited. I'm 28 now: I have my own place, I have a decent job, I own my own car, I've had a few relationships, and I haven't even taken a cent from you or Mom in years. I'm my own woman and I know what I want."
"And you know what you want too, don't you Daddy? You and Mommy didn't have to click on the profile pic of the cheerleader with yellow bloomers who said she had a daddy fetish. You didn't have to compliment Littlenympho28's ass and tell her how much you and Mommy fantasized about her "gorgeous" legs and "sexy little tits."
...You didn't have to tell me how much you wanted to come on my belly...it's not like my birth mark wasn't there for you and Mommy to see. I think Mommy knew but she didn't care when we had our little date so she could meet up with the girl you two had been working yourselves crazy over. She pretended to of course when I took her blindfold off but it only took a few minutes with my tongue to get her used to the idea.
"That's right Daddy, Mommy's here with me. Like I said, I could never hurt her by going behind her back. By the time you get here everything will be set up just like you, Mom, and I dreamed up when we chatted and PM'd. Mommy will be tied up and covered in little chocolate mints and you'll have a nice seat as you watch a beautiful young woman tease your wife before she pulls her little g-string to the side, yellow of course, just like you asked, and tells her "Daddy" to come over and fuck her hard."
The only change will be that the woman is the only one on Earth who has a god-given right to call you that. I think that just makes things better, don't you?"
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Sorry for writing that much. In any case. There would still be a familiar enough structure that the casual reader would be able to pick up on it with no issue (the narrator could start in the middle of the action by starting with the invitation for the rendezvous or having a long build-up with the narrator slowiy building up to the invitation, talking about how the attraction started, what events made the narrator decide to pursue a sexual relationship with the target of the letter, the argument for why they feel it's okay, and then the invitaton).
The challenge of course would be to still describe the narrator and have them address the recipient of the letter in a way that feels natural but still informs the reader."
Like I said, even without looking I'm sure this has been done but I'd like to see what spins you all have on the idea (it could of course go into other genres...horror would be a pretty easy one)
Essentially, the story either starts with a brief second-person narrative ("You find a letter.") or just goes straight into the letter (I also was thinking a 4th-wall breaking version where it is a Literotica posting which states that the target will know who the writer is and where they are) which is addresed to the target of the main character's lust. The letter has an invitation for the addresse to join them upstairs or at a motel.
I figured a taboo attraction (not even necessarily an incestuous one (of course, the target must fit Literotica guidelines) would make it more interesting as a part of the letter if not the entire letter would be explaining why they feel the taboo nature of their love is okay in their mind.
For example: A daughter writing to her dad might say.
"I thought this through, you know. I could have just slid into bed with you and mommy after my senior prom and I know I could have had you...but you would have felt guilty, wouldn't you? You'd have thought you somehow influenced me or coerced me into lusting after you, as if giving me a curfew and not allowing me to date in high school would have rewired my brain into a Daddy-loving nympho."
"But I waited. I'm 28 now: I have my own place, I have a decent job, I own my own car, I've had a few relationships, and I haven't even taken a cent from you or Mom in years. I'm my own woman and I know what I want."
"And you know what you want too, don't you Daddy? You and Mommy didn't have to click on the profile pic of the cheerleader with yellow bloomers who said she had a daddy fetish. You didn't have to compliment Littlenympho28's ass and tell her how much you and Mommy fantasized about her "gorgeous" legs and "sexy little tits."
...You didn't have to tell me how much you wanted to come on my belly...it's not like my birth mark wasn't there for you and Mommy to see. I think Mommy knew but she didn't care when we had our little date so she could meet up with the girl you two had been working yourselves crazy over. She pretended to of course when I took her blindfold off but it only took a few minutes with my tongue to get her used to the idea.
"That's right Daddy, Mommy's here with me. Like I said, I could never hurt her by going behind her back. By the time you get here everything will be set up just like you, Mom, and I dreamed up when we chatted and PM'd. Mommy will be tied up and covered in little chocolate mints and you'll have a nice seat as you watch a beautiful young woman tease your wife before she pulls her little g-string to the side, yellow of course, just like you asked, and tells her "Daddy" to come over and fuck her hard."
The only change will be that the woman is the only one on Earth who has a god-given right to call you that. I think that just makes things better, don't you?"
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Sorry for writing that much. In any case. There would still be a familiar enough structure that the casual reader would be able to pick up on it with no issue (the narrator could start in the middle of the action by starting with the invitation for the rendezvous or having a long build-up with the narrator slowiy building up to the invitation, talking about how the attraction started, what events made the narrator decide to pursue a sexual relationship with the target of the letter, the argument for why they feel it's okay, and then the invitaton).
The challenge of course would be to still describe the narrator and have them address the recipient of the letter in a way that feels natural but still informs the reader."
Like I said, even without looking I'm sure this has been done but I'd like to see what spins you all have on the idea (it could of course go into other genres...horror would be a pretty easy one)
