cantdog
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This is the link to the thread I have put into the Story Feedback forum next door.
I've not been joining in here a lot lately, but I've been writing like a dog. I have a new story up. The first chapter has a nude modeling scene, and I entered it in the Nude Day silliness; but the rest of it is going up rapidly. I am especially happy with chapter three, which I think is motha fuckin hot writing. Two great scenes.
Anyway! This is to invite my favorite people to have a look and to post your strongest quibbles with the way I've done this. Thanks!
cantdog
I've not been joining in here a lot lately, but I've been writing like a dog. I have a new story up. The first chapter has a nude modeling scene, and I entered it in the Nude Day silliness; but the rest of it is going up rapidly. I am especially happy with chapter three, which I think is motha fuckin hot writing. Two great scenes.
Anyway! This is to invite my favorite people to have a look and to post your strongest quibbles with the way I've done this. Thanks!
cantdog
