An inspired story... comments?

[JohnBous]

Hi all,

My latest story has now been accepted and can be viewed at:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=400293

For a change I've taken someone else's fantasy as the basis for a story and thoroughly enjoyed getting inside their head for a while. I'd love to hear what you all think about the result...

John

 

[litchipking]

Hi John

Read and left a comment.

I always enjoy seeing that you have posted again. You always handle your stories with an interesting perspecitive. This one is no exception. Nice job.

Please keep writing. I love your stories. But I admit I do keep hoping that the next one you post will be from the "old men" series.

 

[AverageBear]

John,

I posted a public comment as well - excellent job on this one! I'm particularly impressed with the way you were able to write completely from the female POV - was that with an assist from the fairer half of your inspirational couple? One of my stories ("Proving the Bet" - link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=398507) has a rotating M/F POV. I found it difficult but ultimately satisfying to achieve. I had some inspiration from a fellow (female) Lit writer to do it.

AverageBear

 

[GeorgieH]

Kept me guessing...

Hi again John,

And it's lovely to have another of your wonderful stories to enjoy - and boy did I enjoy this one. I particularly love your handling of the female perspective - to the point where I'm beginning to wonder if you're really a female using a male pseudonym...

I was wondering exactly where things were going to go all the way through, and I loved the neat ending (you'll have to give me some tips on endings!).

Quite by chance I have a female friend who once told me about a fantasy she has that is similar to the central theme of this story, so I showed her Camera Phone Fun. I won't go into detail about her reaction to it, but it's safe to say you have another new fan!

I can't wait to the next story (although I have to say that I agree with Chip about the old guys!).

Georgie
xxx

 

[JackLuis]

Love the Slut!

I made me wish I was the bartender.

 

[JohnBous]

Situation Not-Vacant

I made me wish I was the bartender.

There seems to be a lot of candidates out there for that particular job - oddly, far more than for the other male role... very strange. Of course, if there are any ladies out there who wish to audition for the female lead, I'd be more than happy to hear from them...