An experiment in dialog only.

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Just a snippet for discussion.

Can it be followed? Yes I left the quote marks out here.



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Mmmm, you taste good Kimmy.

You feel good down there Kelly

Do I taste as good as you?

I don’t know, come up here and let me lick me off your face.

OK, now I’ll lick you and you can taste yourself on my face.

Can’t tell.

Here, I’ll put my finger in you and you can lick it.

OK, let me try your finger wet with me.

I can't tell, can you?

No, not really.

We need somebody else to lick us and tell us

But who? Our boyfriends would be biased.

Yeah, we need somebody we can trust to be neutral

Yeah, but who?

Oh, I know, come on!

Really?

Why not? Don’t you trust him?

Well, yeah, but …

Hey Kyle, can you do us a favor?



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[WCSGarland]

Well, presumably, if Kyle is privy to this conversation at it is ongoing, is Kyle so horny that he can be privy to this conversation without any input until they ask his opinion, or is he offended that this conversation is occurring excluding him and eventually includes him without any consideration toward what he was originally thinking?

Or.... if Kyle is not privy to this conversation to begin with, what is his thought process upon being suddenly interrupted with this demand to lick pussy he may not even be interested in?

 

[ElectricBlue]

Just a snippet for discussion.

Can it be followed? Yes I left the quote marks out here.

Yes, but it's very bland, there's not much going on. What's your intention, a whole story written like this? That's called a play .

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

I have the scenes in my head, but can only put the dialog through the keyboard. They're not processing like usual.

 

[AG31]

Kimmy and Kelly aren't different enough for me to keep them straight.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

They're 2 of 3 identical triplets, the third being Kyle.

Parents do that stupid crap to their kids.

 

[WCSGarland]

Well, we didn't have triplets, but our 3 kids were given nicknames beginning with S so that my wife just had to hiss until the right name came to her when she was mad at one or more of them.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

This one is taking forever. Only just under 2K words now and a lot more work to go to build the scenes.

Lots of notes scattered around.