An exercise in editing and The Melty Man Cometh

[TheEarl]

Bloody hell. Just spent a time trying to coax Lit to accept my new sig-line. Have you any idea how difficult it is to write something that's only 1000 characters long, including spaces? Lots of interesting practise from editing my chosen passage though (although I had to drop the link to my stories - let's see if my one read a month suffers!).

Manu - any chance of increasing the letter limit? I don't think any of my previous sigs would fit into that and I'm not exactly the most loquacious in my sigs.

Anyways, the passage is another Coupling one and comes up after a discussion with a lady from the board about the things that go through men's minds. Although pared down, here is the best, and funniest, example of our heads during sex.

The Earl

 

[ElizabethWest]

I fucking love Coupling!! And Jeff is just the bomb! I loved his rant about when God created the arse. And when he told the gay guy how much easier it would be to be homosexual. "Then you just have a go on someone elses..."

 

[English Lady]

I'd drop Manu a PM and ask..he might not realise there is a set limit with the update....well it doesn't harm to ask

 

[Virtual_Burlesque]

Gosh!

Do you mean to tell me that there actually is some sort of thought process going on in the cerebellum major at such times?

By then, I though all higher brain functions had been shifted to the lower control post.

 

[LadyJeanne]

Gosh!

Do you mean to tell me that there actually is some sort of thought process going on in the cerebellum major at such times?

By then, I though all higher brain functions had been shifted to the lower control post.

Hmmm, I was under the same impression, VB. It doesn't sound like there are a lot of deep thoughts going on, though...no one's going to cure cancer or anything like that...but wetness, kissing, proper breast sucking procedure....not bad.

 

[Goldie Munro]

Bloody hell. Just spent a time trying to coax Lit to accept my new sig-line. Have you any idea how difficult it is to write something that's only 1000 characters long, including spaces? Lots of interesting practise from editing my chosen passage though (although I had to drop the link to my stories - let's see if my one read a month suffers!).

Manu - any chance of increasing the letter limit? I don't think any of my previous sigs would fit into that and I'm not exactly the most loquacious in my sigs.

Anyways, the passage is another Coupling one and comes up after a discussion with a lady from the board about the things that go through men's minds. Although pared down, here is the best, and funniest, example of our heads during sex.

The Earl

Someone was watching 'Coupling' on a personal DVD the other day on the train to work. I though of you!!

 

[TheEarl]

Hmmm, I was under the same impression, VB. It doesn't sound like there are a lot of deep thoughts going on, though...no one's going to cure cancer or anything like that...but wetness, kissing, proper breast sucking procedure....not bad.

Burley/Jeanne: Not proper thoughts no. More unqualified panic.

The Earl