Hi Amy? Quesla here. I am still having trouble with the Rapsody security codes to use the contact feedback pages on author's story pages. This: AH forum seems to be the only way at the moment as a blind speech software screen reader user I can give feed back. I love your story lines, and intercharacter relationships, but Maybe? It's just the beast in me or the mythical creature, (I'm Wiccan) -I feel that the story would have more realism if you could describe the stomping of the centaur's hooves when the back away from the woman that wants to love them? Maybe a swish of a long silky horses tail? The descriptions of the movement from the forelegs of the horse body and the shift of the man hips and chest as the centaur bows his upper human half to grasp his woman and sweep her up in his human half arms? There is a lot of mystique in the Centaur physyology (sp?) Love the story otherwise! Quesla