Amazing story idea here!

[MightyZor]

Ok this can be altered but basically it's l ike this:

There is this married lady (possibly has a sexy daughter)
This woman is either really jealous of something her girlfriend has. Or maybe she wants some kind of revenge done on another woman.
So, she hires 2 or 3 people of questionable reputation to do this dirty job. Maybe she pays them to beat the other woman up. Or maybe beat another man up. I don't think it should be about sex here just yet. The person who si beat up, may have done something at work or just something that really pissed our heroine off.

Anyway, she wants to go where the crime will take place and she wants to watch. Unfortunately, police comes there quickly and arrest the thugs she hired. Police also takes her in for questioning.

She becomes really scared and lies that she just saw these "horrible men" beat the other person.
Basically it ends up that the thugs are put into jail and she's free.

The thugs become really mad in prison and plan their revenge.
They could have stayed in prison any time from 1 to 5 years.

Then when they come out they look for this woman to "pay back"

Their revenge will consist of capturing this woman and having sex with her. Possibly, they could capture the woman's young daughter too and fuck her to make the woman feel sad.

One thing I must mention is that I don't wish this story to be lik "they were regularly using this woman, and she was their slave"
It should be a one time thing.


What do you think about this plot?

Could you rate it from 1 to 10 for the concept?

 

[MightyZor]

oh I forgot to add, this story doesn't have to be violent either. It should give out a feeling that those thugs are not ultimately bad because that lady is bad too.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

oh I forgot to add, this story doesn't have to be violent either. It should give out a feeling that those thugs are not ultimately bad because that lady is bad too.

What about this: the thugs are good friends of the daughter (one could be her boyfriend).

When the daughter hears, what her mother has done, she thinks that her mother needs some kind of punishment - maybe the thugs should beat her up, too, or maybe rape her.

However, the thugs refuse to do that. They just spent some time in prison, they learned their lesson. But then, the daughter has a better plan.

The thugs shouldn't rape her mother - they (or one of them) should rape her while the mother is forced to watch. Of course, since one of the thugs is her boyfriend, they would just pretend that he rapes her. So, the daughter would lay there and screaming, while her boyfriend fucks her - but the mother thinks, that he rapes her ... and she thinks that it's her fault ....

 

[MightyZor]

That sounds good too, but what I had in mind is that it would happen to one OR two women (daughter) at the same time.
I don't like the idea of daughter planning this with thugs because to me personally that's too unbelieavable so it doesn't arouse me as much.

I realize it sounds perverse, but it would be cool if the thugs could black mail the daughter and mother into NOT telling the police about this because then they would tell something to police or maybe they have taken the photos of the act the've done and say they will give it to people who know this woman.