am I daft?

[Sateema Lunasi]

I posted a story under the name Maralily. The story is called "Master." I have only gotten two feedbacks on it and they were SO different I don't know what to think. One person said it was fantastic and the other person said it was the worst thing ever. Can I get some more feedback please?

Thanks, Sateema Lunasi
AKA: Maralily

 

[Sateema Lunasi]

oh, and here is the link...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=3296

 

[Weird Harold]

I didn't read the whole thing, but from the first part of the story, I'd have to say go with the good feedback.

Your writing style is better than average, and you set your initial scenes well. The content isn't something I'm particularly interested in so I'm not going to take the time to critique the whole story. I'm sure that bad feedback you got was from someone who doesn't like BDSM, but felt it necessary to pan your story because it didn't fit his personal kinks.

 

[Sateema Lunasi]

thanks

I was feeling real insecure for a while. I am trying to write more in this genre but have been lazy recently. Hopefully a couple of my others will be up in a few days. Thanks so much for easing my mind a bit.