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[iadoremywife]

Would anyone be interested in a story that is very similar to all the loving wife stories where the wife finaly takes another man, but with a twist. Wife goes out on the tease and plays in the bar while Husband watches from afar, then leaves with husband instead of huge cocked stranger. Basicly a story about a man and woman in love who like to go out and play but not TOTALLY, go through with the MMF fantasy. I believe that this is more like what really happens to most couples. Too me it can be as hot as if she went all the way. Am I alone in this wanting of a story line. I'm just looking for some feedback before I go through the task of writing it. PM me if you like. Thanks for any feedback.

 

[Carnevil9]

Like most stories, there will be people who liked it, and people who don't. What is most important is if YOU like it. If this story makes you feel good, write it! If other people like it, consider that a bonus.......Carney

 

[shesnotcheating]

Would anyone be interested in a story that is very similar to all the loving wife stories where the wife finaly takes another man, but with a twist. Wife goes out on the tease and plays in the bar while Husband watches from afar, then leaves with husband instead of huge cocked stranger. Basicly a story about a man and woman in love who like to go out and play but not TOTALLY, go through with the MMF fantasy. I believe that this is more like what really happens to most couples. Too me it can be as hot as if she went all the way. Am I alone in this wanting of a story line. I'm just looking for some feedback before I go through the task of writing it. PM me if you like. Thanks for any feedback.

This scenario is common in many LW stories. However, it is generally just a prelude to the main event, where something "goes wrong" and wifey winds up well and truly fucked by a stranger. Often, the game is something that the husband has forced the wife to partake of, so when things go awry, it's viewed as his comeuppance.

 

[iadoremywife]

This scenario is common in many LW stories. However, it is generally just a prelude to the main event, where something "goes wrong" and wifey winds up well and truly fucked by a stranger. Often, the game is something that the husband has forced the wife to artake of, so when things go awry, it's viewed as his comeuppance.

Very true. I can see our play getting out of hand REAL easy. She teases as much as she can without commitment. That line is very thin. I imagine the day when she looks over at with the look on her face that asks (Can I?). I just like the part of the stories that I have read that lead up to that moment. The part immediatly after (to me) is usually a little bla bla bla, same old she sucked him, she fucked him and she is now his slut. Which is cool. I've gotten off to it before myself. However, I like it more when she is not trying to make him wash dishes in her nightgown. Here again, just personal preference. I like the part when she gets home ad they both get off on mentally reliving the event. I stand in judgement of no ones fantasies (especially after some I've had). I'm just trying to find out how normal (or not) mine are. Thanks for the feedback.