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i begin to stir noticing hands on my body......at first i think they're His......being blindfolded there's no way for me to c who it is......but as i wake up more i realize the touch isnt His......& there's more than one set of hands on my body......i dont panic bc i kno He would never let anything happen to me......my legs automatically fall open.....fingers inspect my pussy......i feel a warm tounge on each nipple.....a hand turns my face as i feel the head of a cock rub against my lips.....thats's 4.....mmmmm.......4 cocks.....4 cock for me to........& before that thought finishes in my head, he thrusts his cock down my throat......making me gag.......my knees r pushed up & i feel the head of another cock rubbing up & down my always wet pussy.......as his cock slips inside me.....my right hand is filled with another & then my left........as the idea of being used for pleasure fills my mind, it also courses through my body.....my head is turned away from one cock & another filles my mouth.....the cock that was stretching my pussy is removed & another fills it......this one is bigger, my back arches & a moan escapes my full mouth.....ohhh......i hear some1 say....she likes ur cock.....fuck her good with it.....& they all softly laugh......my cunt gets wetter as he slowly picks up rhythm, god that feels good.....a cock is removed from my slut mouth, i taste my own cunt on the next one.......hes a bit rougher.....forces his cock down my throat, holds it there......asks if i like being a cock suckin whore? i try to answer with yes please, but my mouth is full.....cocks continue to use every inch of my body for pleasure....except my ass.....my ass is His hole......no1 is allowed to fuck His hole......my body is brought to the edge of cumming several times but never allowed....my nipples r pinched, slapped, pulled....bitten....sucked.....licked......my cunt is stretched, fucked & fingered......& my mouth.....my whore mouth is used like just another hole on my slut body.......the cock in my mouth is suddenly pulled out.....he tells me to open my mouth & stick out m tongue as i feel his warm cum spill onto my face......thank you i say breathlessly.....thank you for your cum.......the cock in my cunt is removed....i feel his warm cum splatter all over my belly......some1 whispers in my ear.....what do u say whore.....thank you Sir....thank you for your cum........good cunt i hear some1 say.......another cock is thrust inside me.....my lips find the last.....thats it hole, make those cocks cum.......the cock in my mouth is removed & i feel his warm cum shooting on my big tits.......& the last....the last is pumping my cunt hole.....pounding me......im close to cumming......they all start saying filthy things to me.....look at what a cum soaked whore i am.....cmon, one guy says.....cmon whore make his cock cum.......i lift my head wishing i could c him pounding me......& i whisper....please, please Sir gimme your cum.........he slips his dick outta me....& jerks off on my stomach.....wiping his hand on my thigh when hes through......hands all over my body.....slapping.....pulling...pinching...voices....what a good whore u r.....such a good little cocksucker.....& such a sweet pussy too......as the commotion dies down....they slowly leave......i lay there, covered in cum.....i hear His voice coming from the direction of the door........my head turns.....my legs instinctly fall open for Him.......what a whore u r, He says......i hear Him walk around ....i kno His eyes r on me.....my arms wanna cover my body but i know He's enjoying looking at my used whore self......so i open myself for Him......His hands spread open my cunt lips.....His fingers slip inside me.....i can barely contain myself, i need to cum sooooooo bad.......finally His thumb finds my clit.....slow circles....my body moves with the rhythm of His fingers.......may i cum Daddy, i ask softly......yes baby girl, He answers......dont forget ur chant.....& as the orgasm washes over my entire body.....eminating from my clit....filling my hole slut body with white submissive light....i say......i am His good girl & i will obey.......orgasm explodes over my whore body......i am His fuck toy, that is my place on this earth.....my body is for the pleaseure of His cock.......my cunt is dripping with my cum.....His cock easily slips inside me....im stretched from all those strangers cocks......i hear a growl deep inside Him, a sound ive never heard Him make b4, almost primal......i bite my lip.....His dick feels so good inside me.......finally......a few thrusts & he pulls out.....i groan with wanting......please i whisper.....pleassssssssssssse.......He lifts my legs higher......rubs His head on my asshole.....His hole.....i open my slut legs wider.....yesssssss i breathe........the head slips inside....spreading me open.....His cock fills me up......slowly....so i can feel every, single, inch........once its buried inside me He stops.....His thumb finds my clit again.....slow circles.....my body responds to Him so easily......my back arches......He whispers.....u were such a good hole tonite for Daddy.......u made Me proud......all those cocks......using u for their pleasure....being reduced to nothing but a sex object......mmmmmm He says........yes Daddy i breathe, thank You Daddy........may i cum, i ask.......yes baby girl.....cum for Daddy......again the orgasm washes over my body....contracting my asshole on His cock buried deep inside me........thats it baby girl....cum for Daddy......i am his good girl & i will obey is barely audible because the orgasm is so intense......my body jerking, legs shaking.......tears from my eyes wet the blindfold & it subsides.....He fucks my ass.....pounding it hard.....opening me up, stretching my whore hole for Him.........then He pulls out.....i cry...moan noooooooooo.....He turns me over, i instinctly put my head down & my ass high in the air, both whore holes exposed for His pleasure......offered for His cock.....it slips inside my asshole again...& He begins to spank my round ass, asking me if i enjoyed being a whore.....His whore......yes Daddy......fucking, pounding....slapping...one cheek...then the other....He loves when my ass is nice & red for him....he pulls out again......nooooooooooo i moan........shake that ass for me bitch, He growls.....& thank Me for makin u a whore.........thank You Daddy......thank You Daddy as i shake my ass for him....making it jiggle.......He spreads the cheeks open & spits in the whore hole.......slapping my ass with his cock.....He slips His rock hard cock inside me......pounding me hard........god yes escapes His lips......ur such a good slut.......He thrusts deep inside me.....i feel His cock pumping His hot cum inside my body......the feeling of satisifaction overwhelms me.....a small smile forms on my lips......im breathless.......when the last drop of His precious cum is inside me, He pulls out.....reaches for the plug & plugs my ass....none of it drips out....none......& my body has no choice but to absorbe all of His cum.........He lays down beside me.....He removes the blindfold.....i open my eyes to see His happy face....he smiles at me as His hand softly pushes the hair outtta my face......gently his thumb brushes over my lips......hi baby girl, He whispers.....& laughs.....hi Daddy....i giggle back, exhausted.......your such a good girl....u kno that baby, he asks? i nod.....tears spill out of my eyes & down my cheeks......awwwww He says as He pulls me close to Him & puts His big strong arms around me.......my body aches from being used......i melt into His embrace.....He kisses the top of my head.....gently rocking me......petting me......the crying subsides.....He lifts my face....looks deep into my eyes......I love u baby girl....He says.....as he leans down & softly kisses my swollen lips......Merry Christmas................
 
I started to format and correct this in red, but counted more than 100 errors in the first half of the story, and gave up.

FYI - this isn't the forum for submitting stories.
 
Good Lord! I didn't even make it through two lines before I had to stop. There is no excuse for writing something this way on the computer. This isn't a texting program where the limited number of characters allowed makes some of those abbreviations excusable; this is a computer message board on which it's expected that you will use some semblance of proper English.

Really, why would anyone write like this for any reason?
 
Good Lord! I didn't even make it through two lines before I had to stop. There is no excuse for writing something this way on the computer. This isn't a texting program where the limited number of characters allowed makes some of those abbreviations excusable; this is a computer message board on which it's expected that you will use some semblance of proper English.

Really, why would anyone write like this for any reason?

I didn't read more than one word. I saw all the periods and scrolled to see what CM had said.
 
Reads better if skimmed randomly.

i begin to stir His legs automatically on each nipple.....

the head of a cock pushed up my right hand away my mouth

stretching my pussy escapes my full mouth

her good cunt god is removed from my slut mouth

(chorus)
i taste ass

i taste ass

i taste ass

His hole pinched, slapped, pulled....bitten....sucked.....licked...... is like breathlessly

my cunt is removed thank you

my lips find the last cunt hole

(chorus)
i taste ass

i taste ass

i taste ass

pounding me such a sweet pussy too i hear

walk around His thumb as the orgasm washes my legs again

my body contracting hard Daddy spreads His lips pumping His hot satisifaction inside the blindfold

His happy face brushes over my big strong arms

the crying subsides

(chorusX2)

i taste ass

i taste ass

i taste ass

It's actually kind of lyrical.
 
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Bet you read MY story.

ETA- Okay, I'll admit that it's a work in progress.
 
I started to format and correct this in red, but counted more than 100 errors in the first half of the story, and gave up.

FYI - this isn't the forum for submitting stories.
The above (in bold) is the ever helpful librarian in you. :) I edited the last one, just doing the writer a favor. And don't think I'll be doing that any more. Once bitten, twice shy and all that.

With the "text speak" and the endless periods, how can anybody decipher the story? :eek:

I think it might be the time the mods move the thread somewhere the writer can get some help. :rolleyes:
 
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read my story? It's a period piece. :D
 
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read my story? It's a period piece. :D
lmao it's short but sweet
 
All the creativity in here inspired me to dash off a story of my own.

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Sweetie...those little dots in-between the words of the OP are NOT dashes. These ------- are dashes. Those little dots are PERIODS. Maybe it's the story's time of the month. :rolleyes:

*pbbth* :p

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read my story? It's a period piece. :D

LOL :rolleyes: That was so bad!
 
All the creativity in here inspired me to dash off a story of my own.

--------------------- cock ----------------------- ------------------------------- lips -------------------------------------- ------------------------------ ------- suck -------- -------- ------------ ------ ----- ------ ass ------------ cunt -------- fuck --------- beat --- whip ---come ---- come --- come --- come-------------- spent.

Hey now, that's too linear. I can tell what is happening.
 
*bows to ZRT and DVS...*

We're not worthy! We're not worthy! We're not worthy! :D
 
I was bored and avoiding my paper.
I begin to stir, noticing hands on my body. At first I think they're his - being blindfolded, there's no way for me to see who it is - but as I wake up more, I realize the touch isn't His. And there's more than one set of hands on my body! I don't panic, because I know He would never let anything happen to me.

My legs automatically fall open, fingers inspect my pussy, I feel a warm tongue on each nipple...a hand turns my face, as I feel the head of a cock rub against my lips. That's four...mmm, four cocks, four cocks for me to - and before that thought finishes in my head, he thrusts his cock down my throat, making me gag. My knees are pushed up, and I feel the head of another cock rubbing up and down my (always) wet pussy. As his cock slips inside me, my right hand is filled with another and then my left.

As the idea of being used for pleasure fills my mind, it also courses through my body. My head is turned away from one cock, and another fills my mouth; the cock that was stretching my pussy is removed, and another fills it. This one is bigger, my back arches and a moan escapes my full mouth...Ohhh...

I hear someone say, "She likes your cock, fuck her good with it!" And they all softly laugh. My cunt gets wetter as he slowly picks up rhythm, GOD that feels good. A cock is removed from my slut mouth, I taste my own cunt on the next one. He's a bit rougher, forces his cock down my throat, holds it there, asks if I like being a cock sucking whore. I try to answer with "yes please," but my mouth is full!

Cocks continue to use every inch of my body for pleasure, except my ass - my ass is His hole. No one is allowed to fuck His hole. My body is brought to the edge of coming several times but never allowed. My nipples are pinched, slapped, and pulled, bitten, sucked, and licked. My cunt is stretched, fucked, and fingered, and my mouth...my whore mouth is used like just another hole on my slut body.

The cock in my mouth is suddenly pulled out. He tells me to open my mouth and stick out my tongue, as I feel his warm cum spill on my face. "Thank you," I say breathlessly, "Thank you for your cum." The cock in my cunt is removed, I feel his warm cum splatter all over my belly. Someone whispers in my ear, "What do you say, whore?" "Thank you Sir, thank you for your cum." "Good cunt," I hear someone say.

Another cock is thrust inside me. My lips find the last - "that's it, hole, make those cocks come" - the cock in my mouth is removed and I feel his warm cum shooting on my big tits. And the last...the last is pumping my cunt hole, pounding me. I'm close to coming. They all start saying filthy things to me - look what a cum soaked whore I am! "C'mon," one guy says. "C'mon, whore, make his cock come." I lift my head wishing I could see him pounding on me, and I whisper "please Sir, gimme your cum." He slips his dick out of me, and jerks off on my stomach, wiping his hand on my thigh when he's through.

Hands all over my body...slapping, pulling, pinching. Voices...what a good whore you are, such a good little cocksucker, and such a sweet pussy too. As the commotion dies down, they slowly leave; I lay there, covered in cum.

I hear His voice coming from the direction of the door, my head turns, my legs instinctively fall open for Him. "What a whore you are," He says. I hear Him walk around, I know his eyes are on my. My arms want to cover my body, but I know He's enjoying looking at my used whore self. So I open myself for him.

His hands spread open my cunt lips. His fingers slip inside me. I can barely contain myself, I need to come soooooo bad! Finally his thumb finds my clit, slow circles...my body moves with the rhythm of His fingers. "May I come, Daddy?" I ask softly. "Yes, baby girl," he answers. "Don't forget your chant." And as the orgasm washes over my entire body - emanating from my clit, filling my hole slut body with white submissive light - I say, "I am His good girl and I will obey." Orgasm explodes over my whore body, I am His fuck toy, that is my place on this earth. My body is for the pleasure of His cock.

My cunt is dripping with my cum; his cock easily slips inside me. I am stretched from all those strangers' cocks. I hear a growl deep inside Him, a sound I've never heard him make before - almost primal. I bite my lip, his dick feels so good inside me! Finally, a few thrusts...and he pulls out. I groan with wanting. "Please," I whisper. "Pleaaaaase..." He lifts my legs higher, rubs His head on my asshole. His hole.

I open my slut legs wider. "Yesssss," I breathe. The head slips inside, spreading me open, his cock fills me up slowly so I can feel every single inch. Once it's buried inside me, He stops; His thumb finds my clit again. Slow circles...my body responds to Him so easily. My back arches, He whispers, "You were such a good hole tonight for Daddy, you made Me proud. All those cocks using you for their pleasure, being reduced to nothing but a sex object. Mmmmm," he says. "Yes Daddy," I breathe, "Thank you Daddy."

"May I come," I ask. "Yes, baby girl, come for Daddy." Again, the orgasm washes over my body, contracting my asshole on His cock buried deep inside me. "That's it, baby girl, come for Daddy." "I am his good girl and I will obey" is barely audible because the orgasm is SO intense - my body jerking, legs shaking! Tears from my eyes wet the blindfold, and it subsides. He fucks my ass, pounding it hard, opening me up, stretching my whore hole for Him.

Then he pulls out! I cry, I moan, "noooooo..." He turns me over; I instinctively put my head down and my ass high in the air, both whore holes exposed for His pleasure, offerd for His cock. It slips inside my asshole again, and he begins to spank my round ask, asking me if I enjoyed being a whore - His whore. "Yes Daddy" - fucking, pounding, slapping. One cheek, then the other. He loves when my ass is nice and red for him...he pulls out again! "Nooooo," I moan. "Shake that ass for me, bitch!" He growls, "And thank Me for making you a whore!"

"Thank You Daddy...thank You Daddy...thank You Daddy..." as I shake my ass for him, making it jiggle. He spreads the cheeks open and spits in the whore hole, slapping my ass with his cock. He slips His rock hard cock inside me, pounding me hard! "God yes" escapes His lips, "You're such a good slut." He thrusts deep inside me, I feel His cock pumping His hot cum inside my body.

The feeling of satisfaction overwhelms me. A small smile forms on my lips; I'm breathless. When the last drop of His precious cum is inside me, He pulls out, reaches for the plug, and plugs my ass. None of it drips out - none - and my body has no choice but to absorb all of His cum.

He lays down beside me. He removes the blindfold. I open my eyes to see His happy face. He smiles at me as His hand softly pushes the hair out of my face; gently his thumb brushes over my lips. "Hi, baby girl," he whispers, and laughs. "Hi Daddy," I giggle back, exhausted.

"You're such a good girl, you know that baby?" he asks. I nod, tears spill out of my eyes and down my cheeks. "Awwww," He says as He pulls me close to Him and puts His big strong arms around me. My body aches from being used...I melt into His embrace. He kisses the top of my head, gently rocking me, petting me. The crying subsides.

He lifts my face, looks deep into my eyes. "I love you, baby girl," He says, as he leans down and softly kisses my swollen lips. "Merry Christmas..."
It's not so bad actually.
 
I was bored and avoiding my paper.

It's not so bad actually.
I can't believe you did that. Sure, I did the first one, but this one was SOOOOOO much longer, and it had at least three times as many .........s in it as the one I did. I'd say you were bored beyond measure, but you made a mish-mash of letters and dots into a readable story.

Granted, it's not bad. The one I did wasn't bad, either. But, any editor would go crazy, editing this writer's words. I consider the OP a rough draft, and he/she shouldn't even be posting it before someone edits it.

Well, shit...how else does someone get free editing, but to post gibberish? You did an excellent job, by the way.

You know? Looking at the edited version and the unedited version, it reminds me of one of those puzzles you see in magazines, etc. You know...the ones that show you a jungle scene and you are suppose to see "how many U. S. presidents can you find?" Or "how many monkeys are in this picture?"

Look at the edited version and find a phrase...maybe "He fucks my ass, pounding it hard, opening me up, stretching my whore hole for Him."

OK, now find it in the unedited version. It's there...right between Pres. Bush and Carter. Or are those monkeys? :rolleyes:
 
Well, shit...how else does someone get free editing, but to post gibberish? You did an excellent job, by the way.
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OK, now find it in the unedited version. It's there...right between Pres. Bush and Carter. Or are those monkeys? :rolleyes:

Why thank you! It was SO HARD to capitalize His according to the original text. Pretty sure I got every one though (including the two non-capitalized ones, she's due for a spanking).

and...

BWAHAHAHAHA
 
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