Alien Girl Story! Please Read and feedback me!!! ^.^

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This is one of my stories that i am working on. I have edited it once and its not done yet. Feel free to comment (Acually i DEMAND you to comment! )

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/3332

 

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If it's not done yet why is it up on Chyoo? You should add some more choices so the story isn't just one line.

 

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I agree

Indeed, it is not finished yet. I am looking for ideas for this story from other authors as i think of new ideas myself. That is why its up as of now.