Alex's Adventures At The Wonderland Spa and Resort

[PrevertOne]

My new story just dropped https://literotica.com/s/at-the-wonderland-spa-and-resort-pt-01 Enjoy everyone Feedback appreciated.

 

[8letters]

The set up was good, the plot seemed plausible, but the chapter was way too short. I can't even say things were starting to get interesting. I'd prefer that the first chapter have some sex in it. Not every chapter has to have sex in it, but to me the first one should.

 

[PrevertOne]

The set up was good, the plot seemed plausible, but the chapter was way too short. I can't even say things were starting to get interesting. I'd prefer that the first chapter have some sex in it. Not every chapter has to have sex in it, but to me the first one should.

Thanks for reading and the feedback I'm the type who prefers not to show the monster in the first act, however. Stay tuned though.

 

[Openmarriageohio]

I enjoyed it. Great set up. Hoped the first chapter had been longer but understand after reading your response. Looking forward to chapter two. BTW you have a new follower.