Alexandra's Odyssey

[KillerMuffin]

I didn't think it apropriate to continue this in the other thread Izzy my sweet.

You'll find it, Alexandra's Odyssey, under Erotic couplings. Please ignore the nasty punctuation. I am so embarassed, I sent in the bad draft. In retrospect, I don't think I corrected it in the first place.

 

[Gus]

What nasty punctuation?

...Alexandra's Odyssey, under Erotic couplings. Please ignore the nasty punctuation. I am so embarassed

Hey KM, I read that story, any errors pretty well escaped me, I was so taken with the tale. Excellent writing, don't sell yourself short.

 

[KillerMuffin]

I am my own worst critic. I misplace a comma and its junk. I thought there were more errors than that, but I bow to your knowledge, you are better with punctuation than I am (I have proof, you edited a story of mine).

 

[Curious Guy]

Easy Read

KM, you are a hopeless romantic. The story is well written and easy to read. There couldn't be very many punctuation errors or it would be difficult to read. Nice build-up, too.

[Edited by Curious Guy on 10-07-2000 at 09:29 AM]

 

[ANiceGuy]

It took me a while to read Alexandra's Odyssey Ch. I

Thanks killer for this story but it took me a while to read it.

I had a girl friend that was epleptic once. I loved her to death and she was a lot of fun to be with but the medication they gave her made her so mellow emotion wise she could not even get close to having an orgasm. We tried but just couldn't get her motor running. It was very hard on me and her because we both wanted that but it wasn't worth the downside of her not taking meds and having a seziure.

She had a little guru that protected her and was afraid to tell any body because they already figured she was one toke over the line. When I saw him and described him to her she knew he was really there. At least I gave her that.

ANiceGuy