Ahhh, I can't pick a genre D:

Kikori

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The story involves a female student who is taking a Culinary class for four years straight. She's underchallenged, and her female teacher invited her home for lessons. They're innocent enough, and the student's visits make the teacher happy due to the time spent. But eventually, the student discovers that the teacher is a sub / pet to her husband. The teacher is also forced to reveal, by her master, that she lusts for the student.

The two go at it from there, aided by the Dom but not really touched by.

This isn't non consent, because the student wants it due to her friendship with the teacher. But... Is this BDSM due to the sub-pet routine? Lesbian sex due to the two female stars? Or Fetish because of how much of it is molded into one?

Lady_poisyn suggested BDSM, but I want another opinion before I host submit this tomorrow.
 
Unless you're well versed in the scene, you probably want to avoid BDSM. If you know your stuff, you'll be okay, but the readers are real sticklers for detail.

Having the Dom involved at all ( even just directing ) sort of pushes you out of Lesbian Sex. Put any member of the opposite sex in a Gay Male or Lesbian Sex category story, and you're asking for angry reactions.

Fetish is really looking for something a bit more kinky and centered.

I have to agree that BDSM is probably the right place for the story. If you're not involved in/well read with the scene, you might want to delve into the category and perhaps the forum section a bit before you post. Looking through the public comments on posted stories can give you an idea of where the pitfalls of the category are.
 
I agree that you should avoid BDSM. The BDSM crowd on Literotica are a curious sub-group of the general BDSM world. One of them told me that they think it's wrong to sell books with BDSM in as it is "exploiting [their] lifestyle choice" though I am at a loss to understand why that is more true of them than (say) a novel about an air hostess is exploiting her life-style choice.

If it's the student's first lesbian experience, try First Time.

If there's a threesome scene, try Group Sex.

In any case, the powers-that-be reserve the right to put it where they want to put it, ignoring your request.
 
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Thing is, I know what BDSM is. I have one story there already and a second on the way. This doesn't seem as bondage-based as my old one.

But, it's at least decently close in that it takes a Dominant man to force the teacher onto her student. Since the teacher keeps to her 'pet' theme, I'm gonna just say it's BDSM. Thanks for the input, you two.
 
Thing is, I know what BDSM is. I have one story there already and a second on the way. This doesn't seem as bondage-based as my old one.

But, it's at least decently close in that it takes a Dominant man to force the teacher onto her student. Since the teacher keeps to her 'pet' theme, I'm gonna just say it's BDSM. Thanks for the input, you two.

It seems to me your mind was already made up. You start the thread asking for opinions, which were freely offered by some of the most experienced here, and quickly shed them, and do what you had already set out to do. Why waste our time reading this? Hell, that's a beer that remains unconsumed because I'm wasting vital seconds of my life typing this!
 
It seems to me your mind was already made up. You start the thread asking for opinions, which were freely offered by some of the most experienced here, and quickly shed them, and do what you had already set out to do. Why waste our time reading this? Hell, that's a beer that remains unconsumed because I'm wasting vital seconds of my life typing this!

Sometimes further debate is needed just to verify your mind is, in fact, made up. I find that sometimes, I'm truly not sure about my opinion until I find myself defending it. It doesn't necessarily mean that the OP was purposely trying to waste your time. :rose:
 
Because I was already leaning toward it when one of my friends offered "BDSM", Darknicias ruled out the option of Lesbianism. I didn't consider it 'first time' because I tend to think the true lose-your-virginity first time is the only "first time" I'd write about, though that's personal opinion.

So it basically came to BDSM or Fetish after those first two posts. It didn't match Fetish very well and I had been nudged toward DBSM before. That should answer why I posted, Asylum.
 
Because I was already leaning toward it when one of my friends offered "BDSM", Darknicias ruled out the option of Lesbianism. I didn't consider it 'first time' because I tend to think the true lose-your-virginity first time is the only "first time" I'd write about, though that's personal opinion.

So it basically came to BDSM or Fetish after those first two posts. It didn't match Fetish very well and I had been nudged toward DBSM before. That should answer why I posted, Asylum.

You really didn't have to explain yourself, I was just bored and looking to stir the pot a little. It seems like I did a smidgen.

Good point that Fieryjen made, about being unsure until needing to defend it. That would certainly make a person firmly decide.
 
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