After Therapy

[fabmax]

After Therapy
by fabmax ©

I lit the green tea incense
As the last of my life
Casually drifted on by
So many dreams to remember
And too many thoughts
To even cry
Isolation is a lonely bedfellow
But alone is so so safe
I close my eyes tonight
Wishing sometimes I wouldn't wake
And run screaming from the nightmares
and failures
That have caught me, trapped me, and
bring such misery
I've come to hate!

 

[WickedEve]

The first three lines are really good:
I lit the green tea incense
As the last of my life
Casually drifted on by


You may want to edit the ending. I think you could probably just drop that last line. It may read better that way and give you a stronger ending.

 

[fabmax]

THanks

Heya Eve:

So Mistress Wicked, I think you are probably right on that one, sometimes I write late at night, and just the thoughts and not the english come out.
Thanks