Adopted story: Having Some Fun in High School

[gizmoo69]

OK, so it's not the snappiest title in the world, and I'll prbably change that at some point, but I've adopted this story: Having Some Fun in High School!. I've gone through it, edited it for inconsistencies, bad grammar and even worse tenses, I've also aded to the odd thread that was only a few lines long (that bugs me sooooo much! )and now it's looking to be quite a good story.

So, feedback and additions, please.

 

[gizmoo69]

Incidentally, if you wish to give me feedback, you'll have to PM me or post it here. If you leave feedback on CHYOO, the original writers will get the feedback, and I won't be able to read it.

Not that I'm saying the original writers don't deserve feedback, I just won't know any of the comments and suggestions.