About Indian stories and rape 2

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I too have noticed that Indian stories seem to come in exactly 2 flavors: rape and incest (including Auntie). Further, the rape is invariably committed by 'low class' people. Contrast that with the NC/R stories about whites--the men are everything from bums to executives.

This is perplexing, yes? Surely there are some Indian authors who can imagine an Indian themed Erotic Coupling, right? The handful of Bollywood movies I have seen are full of lovely women and handsome men. Can no one write about nice Indian office girl and a nice Indian office guy getting freaky? Or a college boy meeting a college girl. Or is that so far out there they can't imagine it? :confused:

I find the binary nature of the Indian stories on here bizarre.
 
Further, the rape is invariably committed by 'low class' people.

Basically the same reason "Interracial" stories predominantly involve Black men on White women, I'm guessing. (I'm guessing blind here as I don't read "Indian" stories on Lit... but am I wrong? Caste dynamics in India seem to me from other information I have to map pretty closely onto race dynamics in a North American context. Thrill of the taboo, stereotypes of the bestial and so on.)

(If I'm right? Yes, it's fucked up. But then so is a lot of porn.)
 
I too have noticed that Indian stories seem to come in exactly 2 flavors: rape and incest (including Auntie). Further, the rape is invariably committed by 'low class' people. Contrast that with the NC/R stories about whites--the men are everything from bums to executives.

This is perplexing, yes? Surely there are some Indian authors who can imagine an Indian themed Erotic Coupling, right? The handful of Bollywood movies I have seen are full of lovely women and handsome men. Can no one write about nice Indian office girl and a nice Indian office guy getting freaky? Or a college boy meeting a college girl. Or is that so far out there they can't imagine it? :confused:

I find the binary nature of the Indian stories on here bizarre.

I agree with you. but most of the posts and threads of mine are based on real and loosely on fantasy of incest.
but noone yet raped me till nuv.
all the affairs of mine are freaky and on the urge to taste a new cunt or cock . so i can write one on your idea.
hmmm let me spare a time.
 
I know I've seen stories about Indian women having sex with wealthier, more suave and handsome Indian men, and though I don't recall any in the Romance category a brief search suggests there are at least stories about Indians in there, though I've no idea who they're written by. This guy seems to write a lot, and his name would suggest he's Indian.
 
Yes, I think that dominating up caste would be a popular taboo subject for an Indian story. I haven't found any Indian stories here that appealed to me (I looked, as I've written some set in India myself and wondered if those written by Indian authors here might provide some pointers on an Indian setting, but all I found were basic, badly written strokers), but I don't expect Indian appeal to be the same as American or British appeal.
 
As a female who has beta-read and edited a fair share of steaming BS and some great stuffs in her time here, I'd like to point out a few things:

1. I've done some minor editing for two guys and a woman from India. The reason why I thought they were from India was their use of certain phrases that felt 'different'. You'd generally find those being used in south-eastern communities, and very, very rarely by a pasty, white English. I backed up my claims with a bit of research.

One guy admitted it, the second one was dodgy. I didn't even think the woman was an Indian until she told me so. And I swear, she wrote waaay better than most. Two of her entries have won in a monthly contest and an annual reader's choice award.

And none of them were rape, in case you were wondering.


2. Their usernames were not "Indian". Nope. The woman told me it helped the readers (a majority of who are either Americans or English) connect better with an author who they thought was an American or English. She had a second account which, apparently, didn't get the same love as her current account.

She had received a lot of hate and racist remarks, which was also a reason for abandoning it. She took down the stories and posted it in the first account. It fared much better in terms of rating and votes.


3. I can't tell you why people write non con, rapey stories, but I can tell you that judging a whole community by a few questionable idiots isn't the answer to it. A lot of generalisation goes on in these parts and I've seen both sides of the spectrum to know better and hold back.

If you think Indians write rapey stories, so do a lot of english-speaking people (the entire noncon category seems to be populated with our kind). If you think their English is crappy, then you probably haven't seen the ones I've reported so far.


A lot of generalisation in this thread, so my fingers were getting itchy. And I'll probably regret it. :/
 
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Could you then cite some Indian-setting stories at Literotica that are well written, provide a good plot and setting and have a meaty theme? I've asked twice for citations of such stories on Lit. over the years and never had one recommended. I don't think there's any trouble at all picking out the writing of an South Asian English-speaker from an American or a Brit. It goes way beyond a phrase or two. I'm not claiming it's better or worse--it's just different. The whole cadence is different. And, yes, I've dealt with a lot of writing from that region.
 
I too have noticed that Indian stories seem to come in exactly 2 flavors: rape and incest (including Auntie). Further, the rape is invariably committed by 'low class' people. Contrast that with the NC/R stories about whites--the men are everything from bums to executives.

This is perplexing, yes? Surely there are some Indian authors who can imagine an Indian themed Erotic Coupling, right? The handful of Bollywood movies I have seen are full of lovely women and handsome men. Can no one write about nice Indian office girl and a nice Indian office guy getting freaky? Or a college boy meeting a college girl. Or is that so far out there they can't imagine it? :confused:

I find the binary nature of the Indian stories on here bizarre.

Searching on e.g. "Mumbai" and skimming story descriptions finds quite a few non-rapey non-incest Indian stories, e.g.:

https://www.literotica.com/s/bombay-lust
https://www.literotica.com/s/mumbai-to-london
https://www.literotica.com/s/neverending-passion
https://www.literotica.com/s/guests-from-mumbai

Though I will say most of them were one-pagers that don't really fit what SR was asking for. (And, yes, there also did seem to be quite a few incest stories, but not all of them.)

One complication is that India has its own dialect of English. Many readers who might accept British vs US vs Australian English differences aren't so forgiving of distinctively Indian-English idioms. So I know some Indian authors here try to erase any trace of Indian-ness in their writing; it's understandable, but a pity.
 
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I will admit I don't actively search for Indian stories, I just stumble across them. That is what formed my opinions. I actually enjoy the Indian dialect, it adds authenticity. You can't just smother a cheeseburger in curry and call it Indian food, it takes special care to make Indian food. I would savor the same with an Indian story.

Imagine for a moment the hot chick from the movie "second best exotic marigold hotel" having an affair with her boss. Seems like it would be hot.
 
Themes (and what would be hot) that appeal to Indians will not necessarily be the themes that appeal to readers in other cultures. That's sort of a basic point to this thread that not all seem to be understanding. The thread points to there being different taboo breaching themes that could feed arousal. Some of the posts to this thread show a failure to get out of one's one ethnic head.

What I'd like to find are stories giving more of the unique atmosphere, setting, and motivating themes of South Asia--in the field of erotica. That they would uncover and reveal something like the arousal of up caste domination, for instance, at the same time would be interesting--and instructive--for me. What I've seen on Lit. so far (and I'd edited a couple of this for authors here) doesn't go beyond the event of defiling a taboo in a terse and sometimes giggly way. They don't do any exploration of this theme. I'm sure there are stories out there, and I've read some lovely works by South Asian authors; it just isn't what I've seen in the field of erotica and, particularly, not here at Literotica.
 
"Themes (and what would be hot) that appeal to Indians will not necessarily be the themes that appeal to readers in other cultures."

Totally agree, but I would have assumed that what appeals to Indians is what is reflected in their cinema--Bollywood. But evidence suggests otherwise.
 
I m intend write a lesbian affair of sisters turning into a 3 some with their mom. its 90 % real , . I m wiling to write . may u all encourage me to go on ?
 
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